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agreenster 04-06-2004, 04:27 PM Hey everyone:
This is my entry so far for the 10SecondClub (http://www.10secondclub.net) contest for April.
Comments and criticisms welcome
Mpeg1 1.8MB (http://www.willanimateforfood.net/2569.mpg)
Just lookin' for some feedback ;)
EDIT: Updated it to a more final version
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jkyoutsey
04-06-2004, 08:42 PM
Very cute character. Perhaps you should understate the movements though. Snuffing the cigar should be an activity that is almost a sidepoint to the dialog. It draws too much attention.
Your lip sync was very good though. I just couldn't buy the voice coming from that turtle. :thumbsup:
Stucky
04-06-2004, 09:08 PM
Well, I liked it so far. But I have an advise. I don't know if at tensecond animation, they give you some information about the person that is talking or not, but from the dialogue, I understand that is someone advertising somebody about something, and perhaps it would be more realystic if the turtle was looking in the eyes the "other supposed character". Know what I mean? So she's more focused on the recomendations she's doing. Anyway..the overall e pretty good..Now you just need to do some tweaks...:thumbsup:
Sin-D
04-06-2004, 09:12 PM
Nice animation. :thumbsup:
Just one thing i noticed, he inhales smoke but doesn't blow it out again.
agreenster
04-06-2004, 10:51 PM
Originally posted by Sin-D
Nice animation. :thumbsup:
Just one thing i noticed, he inhales smoke but doesn't blow it out again.
Ha ha--true......I admit it, I'm not a particle person, just a character animator. The cigarette smoke was tough enough for me!
agreenster
04-10-2004, 11:20 PM
Updated 4-10-2004
C+C still welcome
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