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francisvega
04-04-2004, 10:01 PM
hi guys, that's a wip of my first organic character :)

a few images...

http://hisco.sytes.net/_temp/dientes.jpg
http://hisco.sytes.net/_temp/frontal_1.jpg


:)

NanoGator
04-05-2004, 02:34 AM
Well I wish I could offer some critique, but the images aren't loading for me. Anybody else see it?

SplineGod
04-05-2004, 03:10 AM
Is it the invisible man? :)

TiSOy
04-05-2004, 05:38 AM
cant see the images,,,,,,,,,:eek:

Ziah
04-05-2004, 07:14 AM
Originally posted by SplineGod
Is it the invisible man? :)

lol bumer dude

ahaha that suck ?? post some links interested in seeing ur work

francisvega
04-05-2004, 09:54 AM
I'm so sorry, my web server was down. The images are visible now.

Few more:

http://hisco.sytes.net/_temp/dientes2.jpg
http://hisco.sytes.net/_temp/ojos4.jpg
http://hisco.sytes.net/_temp/parpados.jpg


Saludos!

francisvega
04-05-2004, 09:57 AM
two more, sorry for the "atack of images" :rolleyes:

http://hisco.sytes.net/_temp/perfil5.jpg
http://hisco.sytes.net/_temp/render_gi_2.jpg


y use lightwave, fprime and photoshpo for the textures

Nemoid
04-05-2004, 12:33 PM
Good work! i like the mesh of this char. the texturing too.really evil looking. :)

my only crit resides in the texture readability. the area surrounding the lips , being different from the nose area and pink, doesn't allow you to understand clearly the char's look. I'd make it yellow like all the rest . i'd also make the eyes not so white, and the inner mouth not so plain red. this way the look of the char will be more confortable to the eye, while still looking damn evil :buttrock:

keep up with the great work!!!

SplineGod
04-05-2004, 06:07 PM
Yup, I agree with Nemoid. The texturing needs a bit of cleanup.

francisvega
04-05-2004, 09:43 PM
thanks a lot for your c&c. I'm still modeling it, the texture is just for try few renders :p

i'll be back with some more updates. :cool:

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