Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Christophe Bardoux

[inkonyto]

Hello everybody,

Another frenchy in the contest. A little one... Begginer since almost 2 years :thumbsup: (maya). Sorry for this catastrophic english :bounce: , i'll just try to tell one thing : There is a lot of great artists here, i really love their work, and i fell like a little fly...

Good Luck everybody

My concept and draws will follow, as soon as possible.

[Lemog]

Hi Inkonyto and no problem concerning your English, mine is certainly also bad or as good as yours.

It's necessary that you know a thing here, which is most important, it's our passion for the Computer Graphics.

Moreover, I hope to see you soon beginning your artwork.

Let's go my friend :bounce:

[gulliver3]

Originally posted by inkonyto
Hello everybody,

Another frenchy in the contest. A little one... Begginer since almost 2 years :thumbsup: (maya). Sorry for this catastrophic english :bounce: , i'll just try to tell one thing : There is a lot of great artists here, i really love their work, and i fell like a little fly...

Good Luck everybody

My concept and draws will follow, as soon as possible. it's nice to see you here inkonito , good luck...:thumbsup:and good challenge...


serge alias gulliver:wavey:

[inkonyto]

Thanks my friends for the messages (I won't forget the passion Lemog...)

Here is my concept : The future of mankind is not the earth. we will have to find anothers planets if we want to survive. Mars is the nearest possibility. Let's go for terra-formation.

My idea is to imagine what kind of men could handle this job...

Here is some sketchs for help :

For hard jobs, we'll have worker. Taken from prison, they have been modified. Their muscles are improoved. 2 more arms for tools. Legs are replaced by spider mechanical legs (i'm not sure about that...). Thair brain are also modified in order to make them obediant and emotion less

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/terra_worker_1.jpg

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/terra_worker_2.jpg

For the command of mission, we'll have architects. Being an architect is such a nightmare : We cut your head and replace it by an electronic one (a brain more powerful and efficient). We put your old face in front of your new head for a more "human look".

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/terra_architect.jpg

I'am still thinking about my concept and i'm not sure about the final composition.

[inkonyto]

I forget that :

IF SOMEONE HAVE ALREADY CHOOSEN THE TERRA FORMATION AS CONCEPT, PLEASE TELL ME... :)

I also would like to expose my second choice for this challenge. I abandoned this idea because it'not exactly the subject of challenge.

Image : A mechanical woman (entirely robot except face) looks at a human body and cry.
Concept : The robot think about his condition and ask himself : "Am i living ?". If he can cry, why not ?

Abandonned sketch : (the design is used for architects in my new concept)

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/croquis_facio_femme.jpg

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/croquis_facio_tristesse.jpg

[gulliver3]

Originally posted by inkonyto
[B]
Here is my concept :

I'am still thinking about my concept and i'm not sure about the final composition. it is super inkonito, two formidable topics... personally I have weak for the first, but the second with the legs of spiders, it is very good also... you are the only Master on board...


french version:

c'est super inkonito , deux formidable thèmes... personnellement j'ai un faible pour le premier ,mais le deuxième avec les pattes d'araignées ,c'est très bon aussi...tu es le seul maître à bord...félicitations...


spanish version:
es inkonito estupendo, dos asuntos formidables... personalmente tengo débil para el primer, pero el segundo con las piernas de arañas, es muy bueno también... usted es el único amo a bordo de...


serge alias gulliver
(mayalounge TEAM ) :beer:

[Lemog]

I liked much the idea with the woman robot, but it's certainly a very difficult subject that it's on the level of the realization that interpretation.

Then the other very interesting subject perhaps, with the condition to not falling into the topic of the "super hero", and please, like Serge, no legs of spiders. But it's you the only Master on board.

Vas-y Inkonyto, tu tiens le bon bout :buttrock:

[Fred76]

Great start ... waiting for you to start modelisation now !

Très bon début ... j'attend de voir la modélisation maintenant !

[inkonyto]

Lemog, Serge, your posts help me more that you can imagine. Thanks.

The "robot crying" concept was my first choice (mon idée coup de coeur). Your oppinions convice me. So i will go on with that... :buttrock:

[Lemog]

Originally posted by inkonyto
Lemog, Serge, your post more that you can imagine. The "robot crying" concept was my first choice (mon idée coup de coeur). So i will go on with that... :buttrock:

If you do that topic with your art... I think it's a good choice... the best one certainly :D

Oups... I edit this post...
before, I would like to said "If you do that topic with your heart", but "Art" is necessary too :cool:

[inkonyto]

Thanks Fred76 :)

Lemog, beautiful mistake in your previous post ;)

[inkonyto]

the first modeling post :)

Starting by a woman's body (the first i do) is a real test for me.

Advices are welcome :)

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/CG_wip_modeling_1.jpg

[Lemog]

Good beggining my friend !

Just too or three point...

In the back, the light hollow of the homoplates... on the level of the knees, currently, one having sensation that swell which girdles, will be necessary to mark a little more the "menisque" one on the front, without the form exceed of too on the sides... (there, I don't know if it's well clearly).

The folding on the level of the elbow is to be worked a little more... at the interior, the light hollow of with the small cavity of humerus and behind, the light acute protuberance...

There is always the dish of the fall of kidneys... the side view doesn't enable me to see well, but it would seem that the bust is a little too ahead (center of gravity), which would tend to amplify the dish with the top of the gluteus.

A terribly good work for the moment... continu :drool:

[gulliver3]

Originally posted by inkonyto
[B]the first modeling post :)

Starting by a woman's body (the first i do) is a real test for me.

Advices are welcome :)

cheer inkonito , it is a great beginning likes... et much just to laugh a little my first centres which I made were not as well as hold them , then have you talent.
gohead...it's great!:thumbsup:



serge alias gulliver

[Ionized]

Good start on the modelling mate =) I like your concepts too and its good to see your taking the time to come up with a good subject matter for this.

I like the last two ones the best and the robot crying is my favourite, although, the side on view of the robot kinda reminds me of the female robot from AI. It was a good design, but it just freaked me out too much for me to like it all that much!! =)

Looking forward to seeing some more progress from you.

[Lemog]

Hey Inkonyto... the continuation ? where is the continuation ????

I'm waiting :bounce:

[inkonyto]

I've been disconected for a while but i'm back...

Ionized, thank you for your post. I'm still thinking about my concept and especially how a robot can cry (with or without emotions). It's true the design looks like AI's one, i'm still thinking about that...

Lemog, thanks my friend. (Tu disais que j'aurais besoin de passion, mais je crois qu'il me manque surtout du talent...)
I'll post the continuation very soon .

[Lemog]

Qu'est-ce que j'entends là... tu nous as prouvé que tu avais un sacré potentiel sur le concours Mayalounge... tu peux aller encore plus loin !!! en est tous là pour te soutenir :thumbsup:

We are all here to support you... remember that :thumbsup:

[DimitrisLiatsos]

Hey man...welcome!!! I like the robot woman crying too!

As for the modeling on woman's body u are on a good road...if u need any special ref try to check on

good Ref site (http://www.fineart.sk/)


good luck and have fun :bounce:

[inkonyto]

Thank you DimitrisLiatsos for your help. you are doing such a great job for the challenge :)

Lemog, thanks for your support (j'ai juste eu un petit moment de doute...mais je vais rebondir :bounce: )

[gulliver3]

Originally posted by inkonyto
mais je crois qu'il me manque surtout du talent...)
french version:ben voyons inkonito , ne t'en fais pas , ça arrive à tout le monde , et ce n'est que des petites baisses passagères , et c'est normal quand on travaille fort et pour question talent , tu en as beaucoup ne t'inquiète pas à ce sujet et comme lemog as dit , tu nous as prouvé lors du concours mayalounge que tu en avais à revendre , et je ne te l'ai jamais dit , mais ton image dans le concours était ma préférée et si ça n'avait été que de moi je t'aurait proclamé gagnant ... alors bonne journée et bonne continuation...
english version: so, let us see inkonito, don"t worry, that arrives at everyone,
and they are only small momentary falls, and it is normal when one
works extremely and for talent question, you have some much does not
worry you on this subject and as lemog said, you proved to us at the
time of the contest mayalounge that you had some to resell, and I
never said myself it, but your image in the contest my was preferred
and if that had not been that of me I would have proclaimed you
gaining... then good day and good continuation...:thumbsup:

[inkonyto]

Pff, i'm pretty slow but here is the continuation.

I searched a model for my human-robot. I founded Rachel from Blade-runner was the best for what i want to do.

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/ref_tete_rachel_600.jpg

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/CG_wip_modeling_2.jpg

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/CG_wip_modeling_2bis.jpg

[gulliver3]

Originally posted by inkonyto
[B]Pff, i'm pretty slow but here is the continuation.

I searched a model for my human-robot. I founded Rachel from Blade-runner was the best for what i want to do.

hello inkonito, very very good modeling, you go y arrived, and now I know with whom am this head, you chose... congratulations well! :bounce:


serge alias gulliver

[Lemog]

Good job Inkonyto... and very good choice for your model...

For the moment, your mesh is very clean... it's a good starter point to do something of quality...

Keep it up man :D

I want to see more when I come back in 4 days :wavey:

[inkonyto]

I finished the global shape of the head. I'm s disapoint because it doesn't look like the model. In fact, it's look like a male :surprised

Any help will be welcome to improve that :

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/CG_wip_modeling_3.jpg

[gulliver3]

Originally posted by inkonyto
[B]I finished the global shape of the head. I'm s disapoint because it doesn't look like the model. In fact, it's look like a male :surprised

Any help will be welcome to improve that :

hello inkonito, it is very good like modeling, but the nose is too large , it is the reason for , air more male than female, approximately the difference between the men and the women in the face are: the women have smaller noses than the men, larger eyes, larger lips, and finer features, reduced tone nose a little and I is certain that that will become more female, finally it with you of is decided, I hope that that will help you a little...:cool:

[Lemog]

A very good beginning of face friend.

Some small note:

- curve of the nose start a little too low, as if it didn't have the cartilage which is under the top of bone nose, before the hole in cranium.

- the shape of the nostrils is not marked enough, which gives a triangular form to the base of the nose.

- the ears are a little too reducing backwards.

- the cranium is not developed enough in its general form.

- do not forget the caruncles either, because for the moment, that gives the too symmetrical shape of eye.

Small details, but the base is very good, one thus awaits the continuation with much impatience.

[inkonyto]

Here is the progression of the head :

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/CG_wip_modeling_4.jpg

[Lemog]

Always the ear a little too directed towards the back and each eye a little too symmetrical, for the remainder, without hesitation, it's much better, Inkonyto cheer... the continuation now ! :applause:

[inkonyto]

Thank you Lemog. I tried to follow your advices. I'm almost done with my woman's face. So i have flesh, the machine will come soon.

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/inkonyto/images/machineFlex/CG_wip_modeling_5.jpg

[inkonyto]

Hi everybody !! i'm deeply sorry but i won't be able to finish this work. There's many reasons for that : The most important is that i won't have enough time.

Good luck everyone

[gulliver3]

hello inkonito! I include/understand your reasons and the lack of time, but would be certain that I appreciated much your work during this challenge, and still to have taken part congratulations, you won your challenge...:beer:

[inkonyto]

Thanks gulliver3 ;) That's very kind. But honestly, i won nothing at all...

[gulliver3]

don't be negative inkonito, because of this challenge you learned how to make very beautiful eyeslashes, (and me also, lol) your modeling is better and better, as your textures,on always learns something while taking part in the challenges and while being measured with great artist , that forces us with exceeded is -even... and that returns each time to us a little better. then me I congratulate you to have taken part...

your friend serge ( from mayalounge):buttrock:

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