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frozeneyes 03-29-2004, 08:28 AM Hi all,
I'm the new guy here and it's my first post :)
this is my WIP, using photoshop and painter, crits plsss.....
http://www.frozeneyes.com/main/wip/images/siblings.jpg
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Twozzok
03-29-2004, 10:08 AM
don't forget that URL links are case sensitive...i had to go to your FTP to see that picture. it was ok. you should carry it on
frozeneyes
03-29-2004, 08:54 PM
Ups! sorry 'bout that :p
here's the links, hope it'll works this time
http://www.frozeneyes.com/main/wip/images/Siblings.jpg
TonyDev
03-30-2004, 08:58 PM
Ooh. Very cool style. I would attempt to C&C but the picture hardly looks complete. I anticipate seeing the final!
Tony
frozeneyes
04-05-2004, 07:34 AM
here is little update,
school's assignments had keep me busy these days ugh! still have to finish the walk cycle animation before tuesday :(
changed the hair style, but I still don't like it, anyone has any tips to paint the hair?
http://www.frozeneyes.com/main/wip/images/Siblings2.jpg
D!CK'S
04-05-2004, 11:44 AM
I think u shoudn't put green for the hair, unless there is reflection.
The brush sizes are too tick for hair.
add some highlights on it.
Others,
I think the neck is a bit off. I can't see any shoulder there.
Do the pose by yourself and see how is the neck.
Another problem is the ear, maybe u dun finish yet, but for now it looks weird.
The left eye, suppose from side view, u won't see the other side.
The nose is too small, it makes the whole face looks quite flat.
Thats it, sorry for so much critiques...
keep it up! and all the best!
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