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THE Killer 03-27-2004, 04:59 PM hi
this is my latest work in max5
this is one of the dangerous men (don't go to him)
i wait your Suggestion and any Criticized
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vampire1.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vampire3.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vampire4.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vampire5.jpg
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nicolasambrosio
03-27-2004, 07:08 PM
ur vampire seems to be ill ( red noise...) :shrug:
SharkyBlue
03-27-2004, 09:25 PM
looks like hes' blushing :surprised
THE Killer
03-27-2004, 10:38 PM
hi thank's all
this is my last update
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vam2.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vam3.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vam4.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vam5.jpg
THE Killer
03-28-2004, 01:19 AM
and this is the end of my model
i will work now on the bones and the animation
well i hope you like now my model
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vamp1.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vamp2.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vamp3.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/vamp4.jpg
Synthetic Rayne
03-28-2004, 05:51 AM
Bold.
The vampire guy has no crotch.
kryoboy
03-28-2004, 06:40 AM
shouldnt this be under the WIp forum.
heipei
03-28-2004, 08:35 AM
Sorry, but i must admit that with this whole metal suite (whatever) i have never seen a vampire less scary before. He looks like a mixture of angel-vampire-pop-icon to me. Change his clothing, and it would be a lot better ;)
Btw, vampires (especially male one) usually dont show that much flesh. He looks like the village people :P
xcvbnm
03-28-2004, 11:54 AM
You are on the verge of an interesting char IMO...
But as people have said some things need to be done.
-I think the face is ok, a bit on street baddy side rather than a royal and decent vampire.
-should be less pink and saturated, more grey and green
-canines are placed wrongly i guess, must go into sides.
-get rid of that funny metal crown on his head. and give him nice hair.
-change the silver metal to black, with some flowing long black clothes.
- why is there such a big hole in his .....?? :eek:
-needs 1 more iterations of smoothing..
good luck:thumbsup:
skyraider
03-28-2004, 04:19 PM
great work
and great model
asphaltcowboy
03-28-2004, 08:17 PM
Vampires are supposed to bite people right? How the heck is he gonna do that with that crown/helmet thing on? The face is looking ok, but make some decent cloths/accessories. and surely this should be in WiP?
THE Killer
04-02-2004, 02:27 AM
hi thanks all
this is my latest update
i change the matrial & light and render
enjoy
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/VAMIRE1.jpg
http://www.alsa7er.com/up/pic/VAMIRE2.jpg
thorn3d
04-02-2004, 04:22 AM
The canines are definately misplaced. Look inside your own mouth for guidance on placement.
That headgear is really... erm... well, it's kind of silly looking, really. And I'm trying to figure out why he has spikes growing out of the forearms. Of course we don't have vampire for reference, but it looks a bit odd.
Not a bad model, but needs some modification here and there.
thorn
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