Character - Fantasy/medieval Guy

[aesir]

youre the type of person who intimidates people like me...

Nice work btw. No crits here. The brow looks overly prominent but you might want that so I cant really crit that

[Dordoulin]

great job, i look forward to seeing the finished modeli

can't really tell from this angle, but i think there's a problem with the stomach musculature and how the rib cage meets the torso on his side

[velinje]

The hands are nice, except for the all to small thumb.. make it bigger. The rest I agree with Dordoulin.. But keep it up and it will be great.

[killian]

nice model i cant wait to see it finished

what program are you using and is this going to be in an animation?

has this model been smoothed? and can i see a close up of the face please.

killian

[InKraBid]

Hi, looks good, but some things should be fixed..
With this defined muscles, he should probably have the complete sixpack, not the 4pack in this pic, so make the extra set of muscle right over the solar plexus.
The side of the chestmuscles should go directly to the shoulder, now they look engraved on to the chest ( so the armpit is more of a cavity, am I making myself understood..? )
The rest looks really good, keep tweaking. PS- how do you do those hands, they're excellent!.

[Heber]

whoa , great stuff guys , im glad you guys like it ,


heres an updated pic : i havent implemented any changes to the body since i just noticed the replies but its ll great stuff , and i will tweak the body , and the small thumb , i cant believe i missed it :)
this was made in xsi 3.5 , i will be setting it up for animation and also a complete set of blendshapes , the hands are pretty straighforward to make , basically i take the ref pic i grabbed on www.3d.sk , then traced a polygon mesh on top working out the palm and other detail , then i create 1 finger and copy it and fit it to the others , i found myself looking at my own hand alot as well , anyways expect update soon , got alot of assignments to do so i will post an update soon , thx guys , the crits help a ton :)

http://www3.telus.net/heber04/rig.jpg
http://www.cdis.org/~halvarad/update1.jpg
http://www.cdis.org/~halvarad/update2.jpg

[killian]

progress looks good thouhg i feel the gogles make it look less medievil and more mmm cyper punk? though i have to say i actually like the gogles a lot, nice design, i think they should stay.


im not sure but i feel the ears are a little flat to the head, maybe need pulling out a little.

is he going to get hair? and texture?

nice work

killian

[Heber]

i finished school and i lost my webspace on there since they delete the accounts every term , but heres my current progress :

texturing now , and already started out on another character,

http://www3.telus.net/heber04/wip1.jpg
http://www3.telus.net/heber04/wip2.jpg

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