Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: juan carlos nuñez osorio

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1080098359_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1080098359_large.jpg)

this is my first sketch, about a character Condemned to death in a place were the natural light do not exist.

more details about his history comming soon.

[JCG]

Wow, so deeply metaphorical

[Saschi0815]

Hi again,

...Yeah... now I understand what u have meant:thumbsup:

I really like your concept especially the steam machine :applause: and wish u all the best with it!

I'm looking forward to see more of your charakter :beer:

cya
Sascha

[Syeko]

nice concept. Love the idea of no natural light.. gives u the chance to play with lighting in a cool way on the final image!

I guess all i could suggest would be a request to see the machine part melded with the guy a bit more. Right now it kinda looks like a back pack which gives me the idea that the steam engine is just powering the light, which is a lot of machinery for just the one light.

maybe think about showing that the engine powers the man also.

Good Luck!

thanks for your post on my thread,

Simon

[dunkel]

a little history about the character:


the concept of this character is determinated for the environment conditions of the place were he lives, where maybe no natural light exist or is extremily insuficient. Maybe the place is a yale or a underground minery station, or maybe both, in that case the mine work would be considerated a sentense of "heavy works", in this conditions the production of light is a first degree need, in order to satisfy the need of light, the habitants of the colony used dead road prisioners to develope a powerfull light device easy to transport and with minimal mantenance cost.

the machine has two functions, produce light based in a system inspirated in a "petromax" old lamp, and help the prisioner to loud the heater that is his back, all technology used in the device is mechanical, there doesn`t exist any digital or electronic component.

the union between this man and the machine is basicaly quirurgical, the machinery anchored to the spine and pelvis of the man restricting his movility and leting him only to walk.

C & C, are welcome!!!

good luck to all challengers!!!!


original spanish version:

el concepto de este personaje está determinado por las condiciones ambientales del lugar donde vive,aquí posiblemente la luz natural no exista o es extremadamente insuficiente, tal vez el lugar sea un recinto penal o una estación minera subterranea o tal vez ambas, en ese caso, el trabajo minero sería considerado como una condena a trabajos forzados. en estas condiciones producir luz se torna una necesidad de primer orden, para satisfacer esta carencia los habitantes de la colonia se valieron de los condenados a muerte para desarrollar un sistema de iluminacion poderoso, facil de transportar y con costos de mantención minimos.

la maquina cumple dos funciones, producir luz, en base a un sistema inspirado por las viejas lamparas "petromax", y asistir motrismente al esclavo para soportar el peso de la caldera que lleva en la espalda, toda la tecnologia usada en el artefacto es mecanica no existen en él componentes electronicos, ni digitales.
la union entre el sujeto y la maquina es basicamente quirurgica, la maquina se ancla a la estructura osea del sujeto restringiendo su movilidad para permitirle solamente caminar, y asì mantener la idea de que es un sujeto privado de libertad.

[Antropus]

Hey man!
What to say? I love the character and I see a lot of potential for the final scene.
Good luck!

Kris

[jddog]

wow te first sketch impress me, and i found a really interesting concept !

Good luck to you too
jdd

[==Spawn==]

mucha suerte.....oe y para cuando estaria el update??:scream: :thumbsup:

[Saschi0815]

Your concept is interesting.:thumbsup:
But what about bigger eyes? If he lives in the dark, evolution and mutation accomodate him to the environment. So I believe he must have huge pupils in his very big eyes to receive as much as possible from light he creates. :lightbulb

[Jhonus]

awesome concept. dont have anything to say, just wanted to subscribe to the thread so i know when its updated.

[ufotung]

Nice sketch , hope to see the 3d model ~

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1080508243_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1080508243_large.jpg)

I still working in the concept sketch, focusing in the union area between the machinery and the slave...

suggestions are welcome!!!

[dunkel]

syeko, I try to detail the area where the machinery is "welded" to the slave, is better now?

saschi, I think in the idea of big eyes, but originally this man not lives in the dark, I am trying with the idea of atrophied eyes or "super lens", but put him glasses not is a very original idea, maybe I use the eyes to give him a more emotive expresion.

antropus, jjdog, spawn, krugar, ufotung,

thanks!!!!!!! :beer: :thumbsup:

[polybuilder]

These sketches are second to none:drool:

I use to draw and sketch alot, but...since I got this computer a few years ago I have done very little:shrug: Maybe, when I learn a bit more about 3D modelin' I'll get back into it... I realy miss it actualy! I haven't entered the comp, as I ain't got any ideas yet, but best of luck to you sir:) lookin' forward to seein' dis one in 3d

James

[Virtuoso]

Beautiful sketch.I see the pain.Nice idea,and storyline works well.The style is wonderful.I look forward to your 3D work with this piece.Here is to you bringing as much life to the 3D as you have the 2D................:beer:

[Zack]

I'm so sorry... But unfortunately I have to inform you that that is too cool.

I'm sorry about any inconvenience this may cause me. (namely, I don't have a chance!)


I dig it.


Zachary Taich

[Geoffrey Smith]

Great work - It's amazing how many fantastic 2D artists there are entered in the 3D contest.

[Lemog]

I like your concept... your idea :applause:

I'm want to see more :thumbsup:

[***D!D***]

Really good artistic style...It's like an old painting in museum galery :thumbsup: :buttrock:

Continu on this way :bounce:

[Cullen]

sorry... skipped all the reading... just wanted to write that the sketches are awesome. Good luck mate... and, I'll read the thread late.r

[Saschi0815]

Hi Dunkel,

I've just saw your second sketch today and I have to say:


WOWOOWOOW! Great style.


Thank u for the tips with the gears, I will change them...:thumbsup:

When can we see some 3D ???:bounce: :bounce:

cya mate

[==Spawn==]

pq no participai en el 2D??....pq esta demasiado bueno el segundo concepto, incluso podria haber una imagen con ese mismo angulo...

eso nomas..:bounce:

[bigkrull]

Like the idea and cool concept

:thumbsup:

[mosconariz]

Great!!, What I see with your image is another thing... I see Human kind being killed by this post-Industrial era... Amazingly evocative work :thumbsup:

[Strang]

just want to add my

"great idea" comment

i can't wait to see it come together...

good luck

-Strang

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1081202843_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1081202843_large.jpg)

I start to modeling the head of my character, left the ears....!!!
C & C are welcome!!

[Hellsp4wn]

Great concepts. Wish I could draw like that
:drool:
Cool face model. Fun to see the whole progress :thumbsup:

Good work, and good luck
:beer:

[Ducklips]

Just wanted to compliment you on your great work. Great job, keep it up :)

[Tremoside]

what a wonderful artistic style!!

thanks for this pleasure.
keep it up!

follow it in 3D! am curious about your rendering.

[Lemog]

A great technique (for me) and a great insurance in the modeling of the face.

Now, the continuation maestro :bowdown:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1081265797_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1081265797_large.jpg)

just a test render...
I am working in the ear right now...!!

[Lemog]

Wow... after insurance and technic... sensibilty... the face expresses already something of powerful, I like much :thumbsup:

[mosconariz]

I love it! Great feeling!:thumbsup:

[Virtuoso]

Yes very expressive,I can feel him easily.The pain and suffering.Nice face full of character.Modeling is coming along very well now to match your very nice concept.keep at it strong,coming along aces..................:buttrock: :beer:

[BaronVonWink]

This is coming along great - the sketch is phenominal and the face captures a tortured sole... I think the way the machinery meshes with his skin is really well done- the way you see the mechanics beneath the flesh is pretty horrific!

[Saschi0815]

Hi Dunkel,

really groovy, you are on the best way becoming one of the firsts here in this contest for me. Fat Compliment:thumbsup:

Your head's really expressional and in conjunction to your sketch very impressive.
One constructive critic. I think the eyes (means the whole eye) are a little bit to wide in their horizontal direction. A little bit squeezing and it's perfect, would you agree?:bounce:

Keep on to rock us, dude:applause:

[conundrum]

awesome concept and the modelling is coming along really well, keep it up.

[IRA-DESIGN]

jejejej muy buen concepto y muy buenos render

[Rhezz]

Awesome concepts :)
lol you should enter the 2D challenge if you have time after you finish the 3D. :)

[jddog]

'fiuuuu' that's cool...

meshes are so clean... but more, the expression of the face is absolutely = :buttrock: ... stunnig.
:thumbsup:
jdd

[Nexu]

excelente trabajo mi amigo, me gustaria ver más a ver como va el progreso... Felicitaciones!!!:buttrock:

hey.. Yo soy de Colombia....

[janhath]

Lovely sketch,poor tortured soul with a mini factory on his fragile back.Character face modeling is off to a nice start too.Like where this is headed a whole bunch.Possibly have the eye lids open a little,to show eyes themselves.Nice start.:thumbsup:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1081725164_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1081725164_large.jpg)

hi!, I still modeling the torso and arms, I try to keep the tense aspect of the musculature, maybe deforming them a bit.

suggestions?, critiques?.

[dunkel]

first all!!....

hellp4wn, ducklips, tremoside, lemog, mosconariz, conundrum, IRA, jddog, nexu.....

thanks!!:beer:

spawn, rhezz: Maybe I enter to the 2D challenge if I have a good idea:thumbsup:

saschi, janhath: I am thinking a way of give to the eyes more expression, maybe more wrinkles or to open them a bit. I am going to try some things:D

[rattlesnake]

great sketches, and modeling so far, i love your concept is really strong and i think the final image can look very expresive as i see the sketches, u can feel the poor old guy suffering with that machine over him, nice work:thumbsup:

[Antropus]

Heya buddy! Nice updates and great model session. Keep it up :thumbsup:

Kris

[harnelbe]

:beer:
dunkel
Whow ! i'm asking myself how i could miss
your modeling steps, so many artists.
Your concept is very interesting, and impressive modeling skills !
I love the expression of your character!
keep it up !

[Frood]

Very interresting idea and WIP sessions. It seems to me we work kind of the same way with modeling, and I can feel the progression. That's nice!
Beautiful model for now, keep goin!
:applause:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1081797649_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1081797649_large.jpg)

just some render test...

[Lemog]

Powerful aspect, I like that... A lot of personnality... good, please, the continuation now :drool:

[harnelbe]

Very Nice model !
Excellent expression !
A big up attention to details to the chest !

:thumbsup:

[rattlesnake]

yes this is going really nice, your modeling is awesome:bowdown:

[==Spawn==]

si es SHileno es WENO!!!!!!!!!:beer:

oe dunkel..cuando ganes, me podis mandar saludos por internet???:cool: ....

y ahora enserio..... me gusto mucho esa idea de mostrar los pasos del modelo, yo no se modelar figura humana, asi que ahora voy a tratar de guiarme por las deformaciones que hiciste...aer si me sale algo..

congratz!

[adr]

Excelent progress man , really helpful the image with the model progress of the torso and arms , the face is great , has a lot of personality and pain :) . Keep going :beer:

[janhath]

Really nice concept.I hope the modeling goes as well.Nice start on it too by the way.:buttrock:

[Saschi0815]

Hi again Dunkel,

wowo awesome progress. Mainly I love his pose just now.:applause:

Great stuff, mate... BTW: When come the hands? Update!!!!!Update!!!!:bounce: :beer:

[Nishka]

Hi, Dunkel, fantastic work until now...:applause: For me you are the winner of the challenge :thumbsup: . Please send more material of your proyect, I want to see the rest of the scene. My vote is for you until now, because your work express so much the pain concept.

Good luck and keep working!!!

Nishka :beer:

[mosconariz]

Update! Update! Update! Update!

[codex]

:bowdown:
:wavey: Saludetes dunkel siga asi compadre

y viva chile mierda!! :beer:


atte
codexiño :bowdown:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082326484_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082326484_large.jpg)

just a little update, maybe I will have more time during the week to complete the model....

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082327830_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082327830_large.jpg)

some renders of the previous modeling session.

[==Spawn==]

GO DUNKEL GO DUNKEL:bounce:

[Lemog]

Always perfect... :applause:

Is it hard to live when one is very good ? :D

[mosconariz]

Great!!! :buttrock:

Se está viendo muy muy bien, ¡muchas felicidades! :thumbsup:

[Versiden]

looking great man!:thumbsup:

[jddog]

the only works that I have are : :bowdown:

jdd

[Katss]

nice concept,the mopdel is staarting to look like the concept too.But i woul open the eye lids more,eyes are so very important in emotion and overall looks.Nice none the less.:buttrock:

[mosconariz]

Español:
Oí por ahí que ya vas a empezar a texturizar... :buttrock: ¡Wow!, como te dije antes en inglés, esta imagen es tan poderosa que en un principio creí que tu tema no era el sufrimiento de una persona, sino representaba todo el sufrimiento de la Humanidad en esta era post-industrial...

English:
Hear that you will start with textures... Wow! As i said you before, this image is so powerful that in first place i thought you were intending to portrait the Human Race's suffer in this post-industrial era...

[adr]

Hi Dunkel your last update was great man , i really like the way that you put the model process of the hands , Very helpful. Your character is lookin excelent .


La ultima pose de tu personaje me hacer pensar que si quieres darle un tono comico o diferente en un futuro ponle un calabaza
o algo comico en la manos .
Saludos !!!:thumbsup:


Keep Going man :wip:

[Lemog]

For me, it has more one tragic impression that comic, as if it beseeched some one...
...obviously, with a pumpkin in the hands, that made laugh everyone :D

[Saschi0815]

Hi Dunkel,

it's really impressive what u've done so far!!!!:applause: :drool:

The hands are incredible in their expression!!! No crit:wip:
Superduper, bro!!!! Keep it up!!!

[Trenox]

Really nice concepts and tight modelling - can't wait to see more :thumbsup:

[Nishka]

Thanks for updated... I just can wait to see the end of your job. But I now that a master have to take his time. Keep like that and the price will be yours :thumbsup:

Nishka

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082779225_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082779225_large.jpg)

sorry about slow update......I need more time!!!!! 3 daily hours is enough!!!!

[creativer]

:thumbsup: great work dude!:applause:

[harnelbe]

:applause: :bounce: grEAT uPDATE :)
I like a lot the way the steam machine is integrated. :thumbsup:

[codex]

GO! Dunkel GO!
GO! Dunkel GO!
GO! Dunkel GO!
GO! Dunkel GO!
GO! Dunkel GO!
GO! Dunkel GO!
GO! Dunkel GO!



ce hache iii !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ele eeeeeeee !!!!!!!


:thumbsup:

:beer:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082859358_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082859358_large.jpg)

I continue working in the details of the machine...

[adr]

Nice update man , that machine looks excelent, the model is clean and perfectly done :beer:

Waiting for more :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082860002_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1082860002_large.jpg)

I continue working in the details of the machine...

[IRA-DESIGN]

wwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
esta wea esta muy :buttrock: poderosa matate wn:wip:

[dunkel]

SORRY, I just press refresh, and the explorer send the information again!!!!!!:hmm: :hmm: :hmm: :cry:

sorry!

[dunkel]

mosconariz, versiden, jddog, trenox, nishka, creativer, codex, saschi, harnelbe
:beer:
Your words are very inspiring, seeing the quality of your works. I feel pleased. thanks again!!!

katss...when the model will be completed, I will add details to avoid the symmetry, then maybe I consider open his eyes just a little.

adr..yes!, I am thinking in something, only for fun!:thumbsup:

lemog.Your work is incredible, really is harder to live for me looking the works of this community...:buttrock:



cya!

dunkel

[Lemog]

Your new work is fantastic, very near to your concept, I'm not astonished at all by the result, convincing and perfect. You have really much talent and the direction of the detail, for example, the connection of the pipe in the neck, seem almost natural. Highly the continuation. :bounce:

[Saschi0815]

Very beautiful!!! no- it's amazing what u've done with the steam machine.:applause:

Rock on,mate!!!!:bounce: :thumbsup: :beer:

[jddog]

woow, your work exite my curiosity... really nice up-date (and I'm slowe als you, sigh...).

Congrats and I wait for the next steps...

jdd

[mixolydian]

Just found this... so fantastic! Very inspiring. The design is deep. A great deal of thought went into this. So much... CHARACTER! Wow.

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1083052538_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1083052538_large.jpg)

I still modeling the machine...

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1083052872_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1083052872_large.jpg)

wireframe

[harnelbe]

:thumbsup:
The valve, nice detail !!!
I love a lot your concept !!!
GReatGreat!!!

[Virtuoso]

Hi Dunkel..........Just wanted to stop by again and let you know I think your 3D work is coming along very nicely.........I really liked your 2D concept quite a bit,and the translation to 3D is coming out beautifully.Very nice depth and details,keep up the progress like this,you have a very nice piece of work already,with even more to come that is something I look forward to.............I checked to see if you have a site,but not yet it appears,soon I am sure you will have one,and with work like this a very nice one full of fine work.......................I did notice our Birthdays are on the same date......May 9th.................:thumbsup: .....Good for us....:beer:

I will look forward to more updates from you,very nice thus far ...........Keep it going................:buttrock: :beer:

[Megavince]

olé man great job:applause:

[Tremoside]

You make here an excellent job. fine details, interesting style keep them going on:bowdown:

crit: edges on hands looks a bit sharp to me:rolleyes:

Thanks for your comment on my page.

ciao:wavey:

[Lemog]

For the moment, I find that perfect.

If I were to say that only one remark, it's on the level of the mechanical parts, their forms appears too new, no part seems to have been useful, no part is not twisted. But I think that that will come thereafter, I'm not anxious. :thumbsup:

Great Job :applause:

[jddog]

absolutely stunning modelling work, wow really a wonderful clean mesh work... :buttrock:

The 'machine' on the back and the connection with the skin is magnific and well like I told you before the expression is excellent...

This is really a good ispiration technique work for me (i'm not so clean with the meshes normally).

Thanks dunkel for your support on my thread I appreciate a lot...

jdd

[dunkel]

Saschi!!, jjdog!!, mixolydian!!, harnelbe!!, megavince:beer: , thanks!
is an honor have yours opinions about my work!

virtuoso!: really thanks!, I appreciate too much your words, when you update, I always remain stunned:surprised, as like with the updates of lemog, saschi, harnelbe and tremoside.
yes, you have reason, I don't have web site, because I worked in digital pre-press before, and now I am working in CG about a year or maybe less.
I am newbe, but I am learning 3d modeling techniques almost about three years.

yes! I birth in May 9th, just a few are chosen to born this day:thumbsup: hahahaha.


tremoside!:yes!, I notice the sharp edges of the hands, maybe will apply a relax modifier in the inner side, but I will wait for texturing too, maybe use that like a tendons or something.

Lemog!: you all right!, the lamp is newly installed
:hmm:, when I modeled all the geometry, will punish the machine and the bad guy, (remember that the charming old man, IS A DEAD ROAD PRISONER!!! hahahaha)


again, thank for the support, really is a good start to my.

[Nishka]

Wow!!!! you really surprise me, I have faith in you, but you are better than I imagine before. Amazing is the word. :applause:

Please keep goin like that... Congratulations
a big kiss,

Nishka ;)

[bigkrull]

Hi dunkel,

I like a lot your idea, concept and modeling. Very nice !!:applause:


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my machineflesh (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=132720)

[rattlesnake]

hey, i really like your job man! , your image is very expressive, i want a poster from your image when youre done...this is artistic in all ways... cool work man:cool: :bounce:

[Shouit]

the old man and the machine. i already love that sweet old guy.

great modeling - cool concept.

keep modeling - i'll keep looking :thumbsup:

[Nishka]

I want a new post.... update, update!!!
don't you feel very honor with my coments of your work? you don't name me in your list.... remember I'm your fan n?1.

I know that I'm not at your level, but I will, prepare your self...jejejeje.

Nishka:eek:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1084576601_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1084576601_large.jpg)

I upload this small update by the 2 lost images, I just play with the unadjusted rigging setup.

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1084578408_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1084578408_large.jpg)

...

[Saschi0815]

Hi Dunkel,

at first thanks for the honor to call my name with such great artists like lemog, virtuoso, harnelbe, tremo and certainly you...:beer:

It passed a long time since I visited your thread and you did so much work... great work, mainly i love the wrinkles on his feet...
stunning details...and as I stated before the xpression you had done in your sketch is translated in 3D extremely good.

No crits so far, my friend:wip: :wavey:

[codex]

:drool:

bravo dunkel :applause: bravo

eres una bestia modelando...

siga asi compadre
GO DUNKEL

:bowdown:


saludetes :beer:

[Rhezz]

Awesome work dunkel. This guy is coming along very well. Nothing to crit atm. :)

[jddog]

:surprised

woow absoulutely wonderful !

jdd

[mosconariz]

Tú no eres modelador, eres escultor!

You're not a modeler, you're an sculptor!

[Lemog]

Estoy totalmente de acuerdo con Mosconariz... está realizando una verdadera escultura... es gran arte senor Dunkel. Tengo un gran respeto para ti, y espero ver rápidamente el modelo con las texturas y terminado. Bravo :thumbsup:


I'm totally in agreement with Mosconariz... is making a true sculpture... it's great art mr Dunkel. I've a great respect for you, and hope to quickly see the model with the textures and finished. Cheer :thumbsup:

[Virtuoso]

Dunkel.................you have captured the beautiful 2D concept in 3D perfectly.The struggling the pain are all here.The tension,the posture.Just a very nice effort and wonderful skill to get this done.Very nice..........:buttrock:

The machine,the old style,old World look is great,just give more is all I can say.Keep it up,great work........:thumbsup: :beer:

[DeCoder]

Absolutely amazing. I'm speechless.

:bowdown:

[Funk]

Hey man! I've seen your process, and i think it looks REALLY COOL!. At least a Chilean is showing up in the world of 3D!.
:beer: :bowdown:
:buttrock: Dunkel Rocks! Inside the Top Ten for sure!!!

[Nishka]

Amazing!!! your other fans are right, you are an artist my friend. I hope people in cgtalk know how to appreciate your talent. I'm absolutly sure, you deserve be the winner of this challenge.

:bounce: go go go to the price, Dunkel, go!!!

all my support to you,

Nishka:rolleyes:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1085009919_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1085009919_large.jpg)

I have a lot of work to do!!! :(

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1085019438_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1085019438_large.jpg)

another test for bump map.....

[rattlesnake]

wow that looks just great! is a really cool update , the bump map is truly good... this is real art! keep the good work man!

[Ionized]

Great entry man, I really like it. Very detailed.

I have a comment about the shoulder though. It seems as though it is sitting too low or too far back perhaps? Or perhaps it is that tendon connecting to his neck is too large? Not sure...

Anyway, it is very cool work =)

[adr]

Realmente impresionante Dunkel , conforme avanzas tu proyecto se va viendo mejor y mejor .

keep in that way man Congratz!!!:beer:

[Virtuoso]

Nice in-depth work Jaun.Expressive,and the pain shows.Interesting and well done.................Nice*:buttrock:

[dunkel]

Ionized!!!

yes!!, the shoulder is too far back, because I exaggerated the deformation caused by de machine, I am based in the deformed skeleton of the kayan women.

nishka!!!!:love: really thanks!!!:blush: :blush:

[Rud]

Very interresting, you have made the same kind of consept as me. A full grown man, binded into a oldstyle machinery. But I must admit that you have done a great job, your character have alot of exspression, and carry a lot of story. Its nice that you can see the machinery under his skin. I look forward to see more.

[Nishka]

Dunkel:

I'm starting to feel scare about your work. The skin is so real, that make me nervious. I think that is the biggest diference between your work and the others... this have an unique expression, you feel a real person on it, and the picture is so pain full.

Congratulations again :applause:
and be carefull with the next up date, I'm so sensitive....
:cry:


Nishka.

[codex]

dunkel...

gran trabajo...

eres una verdadera inspiracion...

no queda mas que...
:bowdown: :bowdown:


sigue asi dunkel

congratulations dunkel you are a winer!!!

i love you work!!!!!!!

GOOOO!!!! DUNKEL!!!!!

atte codexiño

Cya!!!!!

[jddog]

again, my best compliments, woow is beutiful !
jdd

[Rhezz]

Awesomely awesome (if that makes any sense).
Keep up the work man.

[essencedesign]

Hey I am suprised I have never seen this one..so many talented people here easy to loose track...I love the bump map in the old mans face..it's very photo real..and the way the skin wraps around the hooms...nicely done man....:applause:

SE(E) Me((E
http://cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=133952

[Saschi0815]

you have done quite amazing textures.... :buttrock:

this is a great update and sorry - I have nothing to crit....:wip:

keep it up, mate!!!!:beer:

[rajdeep]

I am Speechless....:bowdown:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1085801129_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1085801129_large.jpg)

i just working in the final character posing and picture composition...

[Kylebrn]

Nice piece.I like the pose and the suffering with heavy machine on his back.To me he seems more like a statue,the texture is good,but still maybe too much like stone,not soft enough.Well still nice work.:thumbsup:

[dunkel]

JCG, syeko, Krugar, ufotung, polybuilder, strang, bigkull, geoffre smith, zerozillion, cullen, ***d!d***, hellsp4wn, ducklips,, conundum, nexu, versiden, frood, Kylebrn........

thanks so much by your support!!!!, it that only can I say:cry:

now, the especial thanks!

SASCHI, antropus, Jddog, VIRTUOSO, Janhath, Rhezz, TREMOside, LEMOG, Mosconariz, Rattlesnake, HARNELBE, adr, trenox....

Always I remain stunning with yours works.......and I am very pleased by yours commentaries....really!!..:cry:

I want to finish this work during two weeks that I still have...

thanks too to my chilean friends!

Spawn, IRA, Nishka (Specially...jo.jo.jo), Codex, and funk!

thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:beer: :bowdown:

[Antropus]

Man, man, man... more and more dramatic... really coming nicely, my friend. I only can sit here and enjoy your progress. So, don't stop and I think you will have a great work at the end :)

Cya and good luck,
Kris

[nicky]

wwaow man ! nice attitude and nice modelling :applause:

[==Spawn==]

oa Dunkel :p ...oye, la pose del viejo rq esta quedando de "miedo" !!.....esta todo perfect hasta ahora....eso si, el otro dia me puse a pensar de lo que conversabamos por msn de las texturas...y ahora rememorando, me parece mejor que el BUMP de los brazos debiese de ser mas pequeño...pq el bump en si esta bien, pero los zurzos los encuentro muy grandes...es casi como de Dinosaurio...trata de ver como se ve con el mismo bump, pero mas chiquitito...
eso seria...y despues me dejai jugar con el tarro Boxx :buttrock:

[thoughtcriminal]

Really loved the concept and the modeling!!!

However there's not much time left, I think it's time for texturing man!

Hurry up...

Good luck.

[Russo]

Originally posted by thoughtcriminal
Really loved the concept and the modeling!!!

However there's not much time left, I think it's time for texturing man!

Hurry up...

Good luck.

I agree... great feeling there, with great textures it could be sweeeeet :drool: :)

[Grorum]

great work ! :hmm:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1086828478_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1086828478_large.jpg)

... finishing the skin shader and machine texture...

[jdsb]

:eek: :eek: :eek: :drool:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087094617_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087094617_large.jpg)

lights for radiosity, 12 spots, 3 areas and 1 sky light, after the radiosity calculation I "render to texture" the complete map...

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087094875_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087094875_large.jpg)

...I use this map as "ilumination map", now I can "paint" the GI solution...;-)

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087095452_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087095452_large.jpg)

testing the background ilumination

[ufotung]

nice style of lighting ~

[essencedesign]

The lighing look great dunkle...all fit's nicly with the scene..I might say turn down the flare just a bit and replace it with a bit of glow....might be less harsh....theres tone of time left though right,,,,you've probably got it all covered ...I've followed this and really am looking forard to your final....see you on the other side....

~Ess_NC



Se()E ME))
http://cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&postid=1383401#post1383401

[Nishka]

Dunkel:

I know you worked so hard to get this last picture, and all I have to say is your effort was worth it. oh, my god, I'm crying for the emotion... beautifull :cry: !!!

Nishka

[Franky]

Hey is very nice.This last shot with lights make the skin look a little like lizard or stone,maybe to bumpy.But I wait for final,look very good,nice pose and model work.:thumbsup:

[jddog]

:bowdown:
jdd

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087372402_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087372402_large.jpg)

rendering of Z deep, to postFX of DOF.

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087372711_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087372711_large.jpg)

almost finished!

[Tremoside]

Hi dunkel,

I have to say your work is wonderful from all aspects..modelin, texturin, lightin and renderin....all!
Just :bowdown: and congratulations!!
Cya,
Tremo

[thoughtcriminal]

So did you unwrap the guy's UVW or did the "render to texture" did it on his own, and you just painted over it the skin bruises?

And how are you going to use the z-depth render for post FX focus?

I really like how it comes at the end, although I think that the background should be more contrast and less bright.

[Nishka]

Hi Dunkel:

I really want to watch your final post, I can't imagine how will be the end of this, if 'till now is excelent. So update soon!!!

Nishka:rolleyes:

[Ravendsg]

Very nice piece of work. I especially like the details and the light. hehe very cool :applause:

[Virtuoso]

hey May 9th guy..................You make all the May 9th guys proud.Very nice creation,as you know I have thought so from the beginning.The design,the pose,the modeling,the textures and the lighting,it all is represented wondefully.......juan carlos go...............give this the final touch...............NICE!:buttrock: :thumbsup: :beer:

[ScottMc]

I can almost feel his pain. Nice model good luck.

:thumbsup:

[IRA-DESIGN]

gogogogovamos compadre adelante ud es el mejor


acuerdese de mis regalos si ganas
ok?:beer: :buttrock: :applause: :bowdown:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087522109_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087522109_large.jpg)

final result of render in max...

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087522437_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087522437_large.jpg)

I render four Zdepth for edit the image, in color levels, and a bit of blur to fake a deep of field effect...

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087523108_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087523108_large.jpg)

image calibrate in levels and color correction, gaussian blur was applied to different depths of the image to fake a bit of DOF...

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087524338_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087524338_large.jpg)

final result....

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087524806_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087524806_large.jpg)

...

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087525023_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087525023_large.jpg)

...

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087525166_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087525166_large.jpg)

...

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087525377_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087525377_large.jpg)

...

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087525689_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087525689_large.jpg)

...

[Lemog]

Always very interesting artwork... so great... keep it up man... the final image now... :thumbsup:

[dunkel]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087541995_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/2803/2803_1087541995_large.jpg)

this is the final picture, I will write more commentaries when I sleep a bit...

[Natethor]

hey man,poor old guy,some decent texture work,good modelin,and a great pose.pretty striking overall,I like.Top 10 to me.:thumbsup: :applause:

[jddog]

:surprised beutiful work !!! I love it :drool:

:beer:
jdd

[Saschi0815]

Boooahh, Juan Carlos, this is a hardcore work!!!! Definitely one of my favs here!!!:applause: Great in all aspects!!!!

Thank u so much for your kind words in my thread, and I hope I won't disappoint u:buttrock:

It was a pleasure to know such a nice person with so much artistic skills in this challenge. Thank u again for your suggestions and support, my friend. It helped me for sure!!!!!!

I wish u all the best and hope we meet us again here or whereever in the cyberspace.

Rock on mate, and keep it flowin'

Peace to u:wavey:

[IRA-DESIGN]

:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: amazing

realmente sorprendente el trabajo amigo espero que salgas victorioso:buttrock:

[Nishka]

Hi, Dunkel:

So here is your last render, the sweet frut of your sweat. And now I need to say something... I'm really proud of you, not just because you are a friend of mine, I'm proud to be a chilean like you, to share this little country with someone so special, so talent like you. I wish we can celebrate the end of this challenge together :beer:

You are a winner for me and I hope all the people who gives their support to you, express that in a vote. A hugh applause to you, you really make it!!!!!

:applause:

I will miss to watch your posts...

Nishka:cry: (crying for the emotion)

[sirneko]

:scream: esoo dunkel.. ahora a juntar votos pa que ganes :bounce:

[manutara]

Hola Juan Carlos...Me contó un pajarito que estabas participando...y que participación!

Felicidades por tu trabajo...realmente impecable! :thumbsup:

[mosconariz]

Maestro! quisiera tener un cuadro de tu imagen en mi sala...:eek:

[Deadlyforce]

Nice picture !:bounce:
I especially like the mood you gave to it !

Good luck !

[Vladvrz]

Sorry for old guy.Such hard labor,But work is very nice,I like mood and feeling.Is in my top 10 choices.

[katrinna]

go go brother, you are the best!!!!!!!!!!!!:bounce:

[Lemog]

Definitively, it's one of the most original picture in the challenge.

I'll happy to discover all details in a bigger size version... when it will be possible for sure :bounce:

Anyway... a masterpiece :arteest:

[Polus]

I want vote for you, but I don't know how.....polus

[Nishka]

I want to vote soon!!!... I'm a little desesperate,

Nishka

[dunkel]

I want to vote soon!!!... I'm a little desesperate,

Nishka
:blush: :blush: :blush: :blush: :blush: ........

[Tranchefeux]

hello the artist your work is very interest without speaking about the
realization which is well controlled, but the selected subject is a
good vision of what we will become later the man and the machine
become indissociable. Cheer.

[dunkel]

ok!......I vote for my favorite pictures! :beer:

They are thirteen..............and his names are:






a secret.......:cool:

[kleverOne]

Incredible the concept to work, the impressive development.

You have developed to an excellent idea demonstrating the high modeled
level of.

Many congratulations, since this he is one of the best works

[kleverOne]

juan carlos nuñez osorio has entered the Machineflesh 3D Challenge.


Incredible the concept to work, the impressive development.

You have developed to an excellent idea demonstrating the high modeled
level of.

Many congratulations, since this he is one of the best works

[KaDDD]

very impressive ! so originale ! yes !)

my mecca
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=91897

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