Animation : Part from a town

[SpaXe]

well it's an animation, so here i am going to crit..
cause of the views needed, so all the "visible" place must be bright and clear, but it's back looks too dark.

i don't know why you made this anim fo, but i can see your hard working from the house. the woods are made by lots of cube....verygood.

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I have now chansed the brightnes on the animation. Thanks for the advice.


SORRY FOR MY ENGLISH

[decipleofX]

umm when evere your doing a show spin you dont want to rotate at that speed im guessing you rotated at like 30 frames per 360 revolve, basicaly too fast

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[Xeroedge]

Im just wondering why you choose to model that way. I mean couldn't you of just basically have planes for the room and for the sides of the Building with displacement or a bump map?


It would also be nice to see some imprefections in the fence and such to make it more real. The grass could do some work as well, or the lack there of.


Is it my monitor or is the building made of black wood?
I 2nd the speed of the animation speed as well.


If you made the whole town I guess my comments shouldn't even be addressed. It would be super small right?

:surprised

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