Wip - barn interior

[daybe]

OK, I had quite a few views but no comments, Whoa is me. Anyways I have updated the pic and If anyone is interested.

http://www.daybe.com/wip/barn_closet.jpg

TIA
Dave

[behzad]

that looks cool, wow, so nice, i really really like it. It looks spooky. I like.

[Beeronimo]

Looks really good! The first render has a paint kinda feel to it, I like it! But I think you should make the dartboard darker or remove it, because it takes my attention away from the closet.
And if you're going for the 'old' look, maybe no fire extinguisher.

Keep it up!

[daybe]

Thanks for the comments guys. Beeronimo (cool name btw) I agree with your comment about taking out the fire ext. and the dart board. I thought it would add alittle something, but it didn't work.

Thanks again, I'll keep you posted
Dave

[behzad]

I do not agree with taking out the dart board and the fire extinguisher. The visuals are great and pleasing to the eye. Nothing stands out like a sore thumb. So leave it in there for God sake. Hey what software did you use?

[Game-boi]

Nice work man! I like the modeling and texturing. I like the dustry/dirty feeling to it.

The only crits I can give you is to lighen up the darker areas. Up on the ceiling it isn't as bad, but i think the floor needs to be a little bit lighter to really push the perspective of the camera angle.

I love the colors. The cabinet really pops out!

-Chris

[daybe]

Thanks Game-boi, to make the cabinet stand out I opened the image up in photoshop and duplicated the orginal image to a 2nd layer, then turned the bottom image slightly red then adjusted the top layer slightly blue and erased everything except the cabinet on the top layer. Works really well some times.

The dark areas are the result of adjusting the contrast and brightness of the overall image. My monitor is getting pretty old and displays really bright so I am not really sure what I am getting half the time :) Laff.

Well Behzad said to leave the other pieces in so I guess they stay. (Nothing stands out like a sore thumb - except a sore thumb)

Dave

[daybe]

I have made a few minor adjustments.
http://www.daybe.com/wip/barn_closet.jpg

[behzad]

i think your finished, it looks great and I am amazed how turespace can create (ops well both the artist and the program) such amazing work. put this up on the "Gallery/Finished Work: 3D " now.

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