beast of burden - character - Icecube

[ZrO-1]

That looks friggin awesome. I love all the wrinkles/folds you gave the skin. I also really dig the big feet. Very good start.

[Icecube]

A new one of jade now she have a head!

[hypercube]

That is looking insanely cool, like where it's going..big feet rule. And the head is great!


On a side note, you really should make sure you're hitting 'post reply' and not 'new thread', so all your progress stays in the same thread and can be followed, and also doesn't make a mess of multiple threads :)

[Icecube]

Thanks a Lot, i'm glad with the posts, send me more thanks again

[dmonk]

That is really cool!

something about it makes it seem a lil unbalanced to me though, but don't get me wrong I really like it!

What is it gonna pull or carry?:D

[Icecube]

I gess 4 legs is better than 2, maybe now she is more equilibrated than yesterday.

thanks for the tip!

[ZrO-1]

That thing is so awesome. No crits, I'm at a loss for words.

[Icecube]

I will put 2 new images of her
i will be waiting for new posts.
thanks a lot guys

[Roman]

Wow! Didn't see that coming. Didn't you have concept sketch also? Keep it going, I really like!:thumbsup:

[rendar]

Great Design, and very creative. I have no crits. Excellent job.

[OrestesMantra]

Wowza!How could I have missed this thread?Awesome!I mean AWESOME!:eek:

[Faeroon]

Wow!! :eek:
Look at those feet! The Harness... awesome!!
*packs his thread and throws it into the trash can*

[Prisoner]

Muuuito bom, muito bom mesmo icecube!!:applause:

[InnerVortex]

very very cool modeling "lines" if it can be called that.. very solid and detailed mesh, im loving it

bom trabalho ta a ficar mesmo bom, quando acabares vai tar uma bomba.

[jjburton]

That is outstanding modeling you've done. I'm very impressed. What software? And how bout a mesh shot?:bounce:

[TylerHunter]

Hell yeah,

Thats really nice man.. really neat and original.. only crit is do something about that background..

Tyler

[hypercube]

Two words.. Kick. Ass. I'm at a loss for other words. That is too sweet. :bowdown:

Look forward to seeing what's next. Any chance for larger images or detail closeups? Looks like you have a hell of a lot going on there. Fabulous.

Look forward to more..rock on. :buttrock:

[fellah]

yea, this one is so cool looking! it really stands out of the mass, original is da word! nice looking details in the face to!

keep it up :thumbsup:

[Icecube]

Thanks a lot guys,:thumbsup: i'm glad with the posts, here some sketchs of her.

[Totitch]

Whooow! Great model and very original modeling!

hey something to ask you...i took a look at your site and saw a "Sky-Doll" comic page...Are you the Author of Sky-Doll?

if it is the case, Congratulation for your modeling and the comics!


:applause:

[Icecube]

No man, unhappyly not, i'm a little less famous than the sky doll guys : )
thanks a lot man!

[Bezerker75]

WOW!!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
Absolutely fantastic! I really like this bob alot..she is great! Oh and love the big feet! the only crit I have is that the front legs and back legs (thigh area) are the same size...typically the back legs would be a little thicker than the front...however that is just my opinion...great work can't wait for more!

[Pictura]

Great design , it is really nice. The only thing is, as Hypercube said, Can we see some closeups?.


It seems to have a lot of detail. Beautiful, really beatiful.

[Icecube]

here is the close ups guys, hope you enjoy!

:)

[Icecube]

another one..... and wait!

[Icecube]

the last one boys....!
thanks a lot for the posts!

[Icecube]

i'm working right now to finish the details and correct some problems with jade, and creating in the same time some military contraption.
new images for tomorrow
Thanks again guys!

[espaki]

Fantastic! First time I have come across your thread, great work!!

I love the detail!

-Nate

[derwolpertinger]

just discovered your thread for the first time..and....wwwwoooowwww!!!!:eek: :eek: just that i can't say anymore... :D

[Mr. Nice Guy]

Wow, that I didn't see your work earlier. But it looks really good. I like you style.

Keep on going.

[pearson]

:eek: Otimo!! :thumbsup: De mais, cara!!! :applause: Beleza!! :drool: Hyperlegal!! :p

[BrainFaucet]

Very cool style!

:buttrock: I like it a lot!:thumbsup:

[levius]

:bounce:
my favorite bob for now :thumbsup:

[Meka]

wowzers !!! just stumbled upon this thread. i can't believe what i see :buttrock: top notch modeling and detailing you got going there. seeing your progress so far I'd guess this might be one of the most detailed by the end of the challenge.

:beer:

[iC4]

damn thats an awesome design :drool:

[Stereotype]

Awesome, can we have some wireframes please?!!!

[dmonk]

Much better with 4 legs!

This is coming along very well. Good job.

The competition in this challenge is sick.
:applause: :D

[Fedron]

Very good work Ice cube!!1:applause:
Your art(because this is art) is very personal and original, i think this is one of my fav. Cant wait to see what he's pulling of.
Looking forward for more post.


:wavey: muitu bom pentacampeon!!!

[Slot]

Amazing, very rich in details. You got it!!! :beer:
What software did you use to model it. How many time did you take to make it?

Realmente incrível! :bounce:

Keep up the excelent work.

[rickycox]

hey good work Ice, "your going off!" keep em coming :)

[Icecube]

Thanks Guys, everything is amazing with your posts
thanks a lot guys is my first time here and everybody was great with me, i glad with the results. i hope my work can be better than my english!

and ..... here is the wire!

[Icecube]

Hiam Slot, it's nice meet brazilian friends here!
thanks a lot!

i use MAX Always MAX!!!!!!!!!
and U?
keep in touch!

[Icecube]

the shaded version!

[ZrO-1]

Goregous wireframes...of course that was obvious by how smooth your meshes looksed before ;)

[rizob]

hey man your english is good but your work is amazing, a truly origianl bob, i think youll be one of the top contenders in this comp untill wiro or pascal kicks all of our asses. i really look forward to the full development of this guy keep it up man
peace


my bob
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=12719&pagenumber=2

[OZ]

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! IT CANT BE!!!!!:eek: THis My BE THE MoST inCREdible And OrigiNAl BeasT EvEr.........:buttrock: ABSOLUTE!

[Icecube]

thanks a lot guys i'm really,really,really glad with the posts!
:bounce:


Thanks for everything!:thumbsup:

[Clockwork]

Wow, I am so impressed, great attention to detail, great design, Yours is right up there, I'll tell you one thing, voting for these is gonna be Hell! So many worthy entries!

[SEL]

I actually went around looking at other peoples work for once, and yours was really nicelly thought up. Great job with detail, and overal composition of the beast, no hard crits, just wondering what your going to be up to next...:thumbsup:

TheSEL

[Slot]

Great wire IceCube. :beer:

I'm glad that you like to meet other brazilian fellows. We are here for that.

I use MAX also, but I'm still on version 3. I usually just model, and most of the time just for sport... hehehe

Here is my thread

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=13648

I would apreciate if you give me some directions.

Keep up man. :beer:

[one333]

that's amazing superpsycho great. Awesome. :surprised

[InnerVortex]

great work!

é o meu preferido ate agora!, continua que ta a ir muito bem mesmo.

[MikaelPersson]

I will join the choir then.
I really like your model. Espacially his horns. Great work!
I will try to keep an eye out on this one.

[gwelty]

sick, sick, sick

first soccer and now cgchannel

watch out the rest of us, BRAZIL IS TAKING OVER!!!!!

[satanatron]

.........that is one rad little beastie...........awesome.

[Mentat7]

This just plain rocks and I can't wait to see the final! I love those big feet!:bounce: :airguitar :airguitar :airguitar

[buddhaboy]

It is outstanding ... no words for that... :applause: it is a pity that i can´t see you working by my side and asking me about this beast every day.... just kidding ... i love to see your work icecube... but not by my side please , i just can´t stand it anymore... :drool:

show us some posed pictures...:rolleyes:
...

Agora... o q ele vai carregar? uma H100 envelopada? :) :twisted:

[Icecube]

This is the voice of my army!
thnx for everything guys, it's really a very difficult task work by my side every single day!:surprised: you are a champion..... :)

every day by my side but you are the last post:thumbsdow:


thnkx buddha, i'm proud with the presence of a god in my thread!



:thumbsup:

[DM2]

Wow! Very impressive work!!! I love the details!
I'm very happy guy coz I have the oportunity to work with you!

The 4 legged beast looks better than the 2 legged! Where you get this so genius ideas? :D

Can we see some lowpoly of the beast? :twisted:

You talent is bigger than your nose! :love:

[Jones!!!]

Dear Rodolpho:
Congratulations!!! It's a nice work.
I wanna be like you when I grow up!!!

A FORCA DA JUVENTUDE VEM AÍ (e veja bem é a forCCCCCCA.... e como diria uma maluca amiga minha, segura o cu(sic). :insane:

[DKScully]

Incredible.... I like specially the feet... :-)))

cool¡¡¡



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Critique my July Challenge Entry!
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=13229&goto=newpost

[Kira]

hehz great!

still can't believe you're using max...
fantastic work.

cpu/ram killer ;)

greetz
respect

Kira

[erilaz]

Brilliant. Just brilliant. I like the way you render out your wireframe shots too!

Kira, why is is so hard to believe he uses max? It can handle almost anything other 3d packages can (with obvious exceptions). :D

[Artifex]

That's great! I like your desing and it's nicely modeled.

[Icecube]

This is a test of the contraption, i don't know just an idea, i will post new images of the contraption, i will put new details and finish some ideas..... easy boys..... is just the start!
i will put a lot of stuff on it.... flags, barrels, and cages hanged.


C U guys....

[derwolpertinger]

you're kiddin'??? if this is just a test, i am really lookin' forward to the finished contraption!:D

[Fedron]

Icecube your contraption look awesome!! But it's a kindof orkish look. Not so refined as your beast. I think you should use a shape design inspired in your beast. Not straight lines, but more like builded with bones, more organic like your beast. And the skulls are human, try some alien skulls like your beast again.
Hope this help you. Like i allready saiys you're one of my fav's.
And after all we're here to surpass ourselves, don't we?

[Icecube]

thnx man, but is really a test, i'm glad with your comentary and now i will try to keep going in this way.

this is another one!

[hypercube]

Looks nifty..how big would it be in relation to the beast? Main crits I'd say is that the skulls on the hubs should be smaller or the wheels bigger, seems like that'd really get in the way of things..something more purposeful as the tread than straight bevels would be cooler/more interesting too.

Also as mentioned it could use some more graceful forms to go with your beast, unless you're going for contrast..doesn't quite seem to be the same people would make this as made the gear on your creature, if that makes sense. If you're going for contrast, that's cool too tho. :)

Otherwise, nice stuff..like the feel of the 'junky' roof and such. Rock on.

[rickycox]

Hi Ice, looks great, here's my two bits. I'd just have the one skull on the side and have some spinning spikes on the wheels, maybe some voodoo style feathers hanging from the side. Keep going man :-)

[Ali3D]

King of beasts...:buttrock: ......

$ $ $ $ $ $ $ $ $ $ $ $
:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[Fetus23]

well i didnt see this until now....very pleasing to my eye.
I cant critic this thing :)

[erilaz]

I'd critique the textures, but this challenge doesn't judge them! :p

I like the carriage work, but the wheels don't seem quite right. Good work on those screws! Great stuff Icecube.

[pit]

MATT CLARK _ PASCAL BLANCHÉ_OZ and the rest of us ... This is the guy to beat!!!! I´m in AWE!!!!!!!:buttrock:

[Mr. Nice Guy]

I know that the texture won't be judge. But you see the maps a couple time facing the same way. Maybe you can change the UVW-Maps. (rotate, scale or move it)

And try to make some photos of material you want to use. You used the standard MAX-maps.

But the model looks great :thumbsup: but maybe you should remove the skulls on the wheels.

And how big will it look like.

Keep on going

[Icecube]

Thnx a lot guys, no skulls anymore i promise!:thumbsup:
the textures are just to put soe color in the render, i will finish and put the details, move some stuff and delete others, i don't know yet, but after your tips i try to go in a different way.
thnx a lot!!!!!


i C U guys late maybe with the modifications in the contraption!



:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[Icecube]

Hi mr fedron, thnx for the tips, i'm trying to change a lot of details in the contraption, i tryied to create something orkish, because my beast is an animal to work to the bad guys like orcs;)
but i will try to make something different with the contraption i will try to use your tips and the guys tips to make some modifications, thnx again for everything and see you soon with teh modifications!:thumbsup:

[Icecube]

Hello everyone! i'm making the modifications, now slowlly than ever.
i'm working a lot now! i'm working for three, i lost my animation team :surprised: and everything here now is a great mess for a while, :thumbsdow but i'm fixing it, so patience guys.....

Here is the little modifications hope you enjoy my friends! :thumbsup:


Thnx a lot guys

[Icecube]

Another perspective, patience guys i will post new images maybe finalized until friday!



C U guys:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[Icecube]

Another one!:thumbsup:

[Icecube]

the wireframe

[ZrO-1]

Icecube man, I can't say enough how much I love this wagon design. Let me put it this way. I like your design so much it makes me want to delete all of my carriage and sled and start over. :D That's how much I like it.
To me everything on this works. Nothing looks out of place or out of proportion. Great work! :applause:

[DKScully]

Eyyy.. I like this one so much.... Specially the wagon... But what about the first set of skulls... may be you can combine them... :-)))

Anyway, It's impresive¡¡¡¡¡¡¡

Congratulatios¡¡¡ I want a wagon for me, too, not just a teapot.. HEHEHEHEHEH....

[TylerHunter]

That is ill, good drawings = good 3D, as I always say and your art proves it. You cage is really nice, and i also think you design changes to the cart are an improvement. I cant wait to see the whole thing together.. keep it rockin.

Tyler

[Rex]

Oh~~~~awesome!!!!!!!!!what a great work !keep going !I love your sketch and the model!!!Nice ~Nice!





Check out my Beast of Burden (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=12984&pagenumber=2)

[moujot]

geez i'm discovering this thread, man, that is impressive work !
Your model looks very neat, and so does wireframe !
and i love that contraption thing...

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

keep it up !

moujot

[Gollum]

drooling over that head, still the best part of the model for me personally, wow... :drool:

[[msf]]

here is a quick idea for your "contraption" bring the cage in closer to the vehicle and maybe raise it up some so that nothing is hitting the wheels. Then while it is moving the cage can be banging up against the side of the contraption and stuff causing a much more unconfortible ride for its passenger. Just a thought.

I want to see a walk cycle on your BoB :) hehe

[Icecube]

thnx for the tip! i gess the passengers will not like this idea:thumbsup:



i will think about it, but this is just the start, i'm creating new details for the contraption.


thnx for the posts guys :thumbsup:

[marioucci]

WHOAAA!!!!!!

I just love the freakness of it.
i think that theres a time where the skills are not an issue anymore(ur case) and we can just talk about the style...
and ur style is something else!!!!!
congrats man!!!!
loggie

[opiumseed]

Your work is Cool as Ice Mr. Ice Cube!!!

but not so cool as Vanila Ice!
(ice ice baby)

Post the funny Donkey 2 man! Guerreiros Warriors 4ever!!!
Keep your good work m8!!!

Yes! I love change letters for numbers! It´s cool 2!

Well...
i´ll stop here...

[dmonk]

Love that wagon. I think you nailed it!:D

[iC4]

really amazing. Like your style!

[TedTerranova]

Your model is really nice. The design and attention to detail really makes it stand out. I'm really looking forward to seeing the final results. Good stuff.

[Jones!!!]

Você é um sucesso, Icecube!!! Congratulations!!!

[Shen]

Ice Cube... i have searched almost all the entries... and yours is my favorite. As a matter of fact yours is SICK! (awesome, amazing) You will have my vote!

[ilasolomon]

OoOoOfsssk!
i think i must rebuild my beast!
your detail is killing me :) :surprised

[Icecube]

thnx a lot everybody, i was very, very,very busy here in the studio working a lot, i have no time for nothing but here is some new bagage for jade, it's not to heavy yet i''m finishing the contraption, it's just the first part i will finish everything until tomorrow at night i gess.......

thnx a lot my friends, and see you tomorrow in the end of this story!:thumbsup:

[thjazi]

nice work, really good

[erilaz]

Now that's a lot of baggage! Brilliant work Icecube.

[ZrO-1]

I love the modeling, but that wood texture is starting to become really repetitive.

[Abboy]

WOW!! i love the trailer. . . . if thats what it is! amazing man your gifted :thumbsup:

David

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