CHAR: Anna

[Shaykai]

Excellent character :) I particularly like the Hair and the color scheme you chose for the clothes. I think the pants could use a few more folds in it. Also the texture on her face is too perfect. give her some skin tone variation and maybe a few moles or even some freckles. Other then that it looks really good. I can't wait for the animation :)

Shaykai

[neonoodle]

The model and textures look really nice. The pose you chose to display her looks weird, though. It's like a random still in a walk cycle, except the arm furthest from the camera should be showing. Also, I think the specular highlight on the pants is too white. Looks like a harder surface than leather/vinyl pants should be. Other than that, looks great!

[reCurse]

this is awesome, and i really like the way the clothes r done, but then i noticed the cuff of the trousers around the ankle doesnt seem quite right... maybe the bottoms of the pants need a visible hem or something, i dont quite know..
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i really like it tho.

[Ionized]

Nice characters. The costume especially is very understated, which I like. The flesh showing through the pants is a nice touch especially. The hair is good too for patches. I know how frustrating it can be to do hair that way, and you've done a very decent job considering.

I would work more on the skin shader though as she looks a tad plastic. I also agree the pose is a bit off. I'd try lifting the rear ankle to make it seem more like she walking. Also, if it is mid way though a walk, then her left arm should be forward I think? Sorry, I'm nit picking, but its looks kind of strange with both her arms back like that.

Anyway, its really cool. She will look great animated =)

[hyst]

nothing else to say than: that's great .

[Dodgeas3d]

Very nice job! Cute face...strange material on clothes, its hard to say is it latex or leather ;) and the pose is bit weird, that hand hidding behind lubberly
keep up with good work! :beer:

[LuWeeWu]

I like the clothes but the holes in the pants leg look kinda like they should have been for a different outfit. IMO I think that those square holes should be red patches to match the jacket. But thats just my opinion. Other than that I got nothin to crit.
Looks great.

[Sir-Avalon]

Thank you all for the nice comments!
I had some heavy feedback on the pose and and other stuff so here's another pose...hope this one works out better!

Cheers everyone!
/chris

http://www.absentdrone.com/3d/Char_Anna_5.jpg

[SpaXe]

hmm very impressing^^..
her jean looks very thin, cause of it's hole on the leg.:thumbsup:

[Garma]

wow, beautiful face. Nice job on that. Can we see a close up? Nice shader too. I'm not too big of a fan of the clothing, a little too much reflections for me to like it :)

[Sir-Avalon]

Thanx!
Here's a closeup of the face!
Cheers!

http://www.absentdrone.com/3d/Char_Anna_face_closeup.jpg

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