Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Raphael Briskie

[rbriskie]

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Here it is!
The Ibex Warrior! Created by the Machine god(an alien race)to protect the mountanous Himalayan Alps. With robotic limbs, horns for strength. Robotic eyes for better vision and a cannon mountedd on its stomach. Better than a Yeti the Ibex Warrior has protected the summit for centuries.

Please tell me what you think!

Raph

[rbriskie]

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Here it is Inked in with a few adjustments i.e. the hands.

[Tommy Lee]

Cool Concept. I like your style:thumbsup:

Wait for more...
Cheerz:beer:

Tommy Lee

[rbriskie]

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The Ibex warrior in all its coloured glory! This is the first time I've done anything like this and I haven't been getting many comments(only 1 to be exact). It would be appreciated if I could some opinions to atleast tell me how im doin or if im on the right track.

Thanks a bunch and keep up your great work!

[eupee]

I like the simple, bold look you got going there. it looks nice man... i wanna see his arch enemy, the yeti, cowering down at him, and put in a carzy landscape (background). give him more depth as well.

il be keen on checking for more progress!

[STLX]

yeah, first time I've done one of these things too. Mine is almost the same style as this, big bold lines and such. I like it alot, but it seems to be lacking some action to me ... maybe that'll be there when you throw in a bg. Or ... a suggestion might be to have him fighting something.

[Tommy Lee]

Originally posted by eupee
I like the simple, bold look you got going there. it looks nice man... i wanna see his arch enemy, the yeti, cowering down at him, and put in a carzy landscape (background). give him more depth as well.

il be keen on checking for more progress!

I think that too. And an Enemy and crazy background will give it a dramatic feeling and show the pure reason of existence for that guardian!!!:thumbsup:

Keep going:beer:

[rbriskie]

Thanks guys for your opinion
I never even considered an
enemy for him to fight but I
think its an awsome idea thanks.

[Squibbit]

now i done some weird stuff , but where do you get stuff like
this ? to me , that TommyLee's wonderland pic for example
to me ain't as weird as this

[Tommy Lee]

Originally posted by Squibbit
now i done some weird stuff , but where do you get stuff like
this ? to me , that TommyLee's wonderland pic for example
to me ain't as weird as this

Yeah Squibbit... u are absolutly right, because this one is not expected. This one is really weird:thumbsup: :beer:

Cheerz

[rbriskie]

Yeah im always thinking up crazy stuff!
but i didnt think this was as wierd! Owell
Wierd id cool hehe

[rbriskie]

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Here is a sketch of the background!
Icy cold mountains!

[rbriskie]

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Here is a work in progress shot of my background. Almost there!

[eupee]

looking much better... giving him an environment gives him meaning.. still waiting for the YETTI!!!

keep i up

[Squibbit]

haha , good one. this work continues to be a favourite of mine

[bonestudio]

Personnaly I would have put the big gun on his back... unless he walks on his 2 legs like a man...

[rbriskie]

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This is it!!! The final!!!
I've added the yeti finally
but id like critique just for
extra things or things that may need fixing before the final entry is submitted. thanks

[rbriskie]

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The final Image

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