NinjaA55N
03-20-2004, 10:25 PM
Blaz Porenta has entered the Machineflesh 2D Challenge.
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Jenko
03-21-2004, 12:44 PM
Go get them cowboy :)
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NinjaA55N
03-23-2004, 09:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080076339_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080076339_large.jpg)
This is a bounch of doodles, searching for the right idea.... I think I'm still far away from it, but its something to start with. 1000s ideas in my head, nothing on the paper. grrrr! Anyway, I started with an idea of a human spider, half of mechanic, half of organic. His job is being a scout in a future war... it has 4 legs and an upper body, which can be on higher (for observing the terrirory) or lower place (for sneaking, hidding), than his body where legs are attach. It would acctually be able to crawl under its own body... but im not sure if that is obvious from those sketches yet... :)
This is a bounch of doodles, searching for the right idea.... I think I'm still far away from it, but its something to start with. 1000s ideas in my head, nothing on the paper. grrrr! Anyway, I started with an idea of a human spider, half of mechanic, half of organic. His job is being a scout in a future war... it has 4 legs and an upper body, which can be on higher (for observing the terrirory) or lower place (for sneaking, hidding), than his body where legs are attach. It would acctually be able to crawl under its own body... but im not sure if that is obvious from those sketches yet... :)
NinjaA55N
03-23-2004, 09:22 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080076954_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080076954_large.jpg)
This is next step, still only a sketch. Not satisfied at all, but closeer than previous doodles. The idea can be seen now... i think. First part is a mechanical part (symbolic... still have to find something better for front part) and from here grows something organic, humanlike for now. His face will be cowered with mask (with googles and stuff like that) and his arms will be replaced with something more usefull than organic 5fingers hands.
Arrows are pointing the way the body can move (his backbone is very flexible :)
Some feedback will be most appriciated!
This is next step, still only a sketch. Not satisfied at all, but closeer than previous doodles. The idea can be seen now... i think. First part is a mechanical part (symbolic... still have to find something better for front part) and from here grows something organic, humanlike for now. His face will be cowered with mask (with googles and stuff like that) and his arms will be replaced with something more usefull than organic 5fingers hands.
Arrows are pointing the way the body can move (his backbone is very flexible :)
Some feedback will be most appriciated!
NinjaA55N
03-23-2004, 11:05 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080083120_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080083120_large.jpg)
OK... some progress from the previous one... or just another variation maybe... this time in lower position, with upper (organic) body bent under itself (under mechanical part)... is this understandable in any way??? :))
OK... some progress from the previous one... or just another variation maybe... this time in lower position, with upper (organic) body bent under itself (under mechanical part)... is this understandable in any way??? :))
NinjaA55N
03-24-2004, 07:43 AM
Hmmm... after a sleepover everything, Im not feeling OK with this stuff... So I'll go to next concept, more cartoon-illustration like. Soon
Tommy Lee
03-24-2004, 08:31 AM
I think the concepts are fantastic...:beer:
Cheerz
Tommy Lee
Cheerz
Tommy Lee
NinjaA55N
03-24-2004, 01:08 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080133710_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080133710_large.jpg)
I started sketching on a new concept in Painter, but I couldn stop, so its came to that phase... Nevermind, its still just an idea sketch, brainstorming,...
Some critics will be most welcome!
I started sketching on a new concept in Painter, but I couldn stop, so its came to that phase... Nevermind, its still just an idea sketch, brainstorming,...
Some critics will be most welcome!
NinjaA55N
03-24-2004, 01:22 PM
At this time, I start thinking about making a babyfactory. Sort of giant worm-like machine (maybe something like termite-queen) with one breast in its mouth and sharp teeth for ptoecting that breast. Still dont know which part will be mechanic and what would they serve for, but brainstorming goes on... :)
Friedric P
03-24-2004, 03:33 PM
That's cool and disturbing ideas... :scream: And I really like the last sketch... The idea of breast in the mouth is quite original... :thumbsup:
Good luck! :)
Good luck! :)
Tommy Lee
03-25-2004, 06:01 AM
FREAKY... I love it!!!!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
NinjaA55N
03-25-2004, 08:26 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080246392_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080246392_large.jpg)
This time I introduce u to my new sketch, upgrade of previous one... the BabyFactory. It looks like a giant worm with "human" head and wide open mouth (where r mechanical spider-like legs with a breast in the middle... for breast-feeding), there r also some machinery, mechanical parts, pipes and radioactivity liquid, which is connected to the breast (yea, for breast-feeding... sick, I know :))
At the end of this worm, is a place, where little creatures are being born... also some mechanical parts to help the procedure.
So.... what do u think about that... except of sending me to the mental institution ;)
This time I introduce u to my new sketch, upgrade of previous one... the BabyFactory. It looks like a giant worm with "human" head and wide open mouth (where r mechanical spider-like legs with a breast in the middle... for breast-feeding), there r also some machinery, mechanical parts, pipes and radioactivity liquid, which is connected to the breast (yea, for breast-feeding... sick, I know :))
At the end of this worm, is a place, where little creatures are being born... also some mechanical parts to help the procedure.
So.... what do u think about that... except of sending me to the mental institution ;)
NinjaA55N
03-25-2004, 10:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080255247_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080255247_large.jpg)
OK... I started with lineout progress and some shading over the sketch, although I didnt get a lot of backup yet...
Give me some please... thnx.
OK... I started with lineout progress and some shading over the sketch, although I didnt get a lot of backup yet...
Give me some please... thnx.
harnelbe
03-26-2004, 07:47 AM
NinjaASSN
Welcome to the contest!
It's a great pleasure to see creations
like yours !
Good luck
Welcome to the contest!
It's a great pleasure to see creations
like yours !
Good luck
Tommy Lee
03-26-2004, 08:41 AM
OMG!!!! That is so sick!!!:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
I love it... no crits here!!!:beer:
I love it... no crits here!!!:beer:
FrankyMo
03-26-2004, 11:21 AM
That's a bit disturbing, but quite original... The sketches are really pretty!!! Really fancy your last one!! :thumbsup:
NinjaA55N
03-26-2004, 09:42 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080337361_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080337361_large.jpg)
Just to post something.. added more tones and shadows on a coffee brake today.
Thnx for feedback guyz! I really appriciate it!
Friedric P, Franky_Mo: I hope it doesnt bother u 2 much, if its disturbing a bit? From all the start I thought about, waht a sick idea to combine an organic form with a machine... so I just follow that thought.
harnelbe: thnx for ur welcome!
Tommy Lee: finally someone who understands my work and support that, coz my mom doesnt :))) Yea, its sick.. and its an honor that u like it!
Just to post something.. added more tones and shadows on a coffee brake today.
Thnx for feedback guyz! I really appriciate it!
Friedric P, Franky_Mo: I hope it doesnt bother u 2 much, if its disturbing a bit? From all the start I thought about, waht a sick idea to combine an organic form with a machine... so I just follow that thought.
harnelbe: thnx for ur welcome!
Tommy Lee: finally someone who understands my work and support that, coz my mom doesnt :))) Yea, its sick.. and its an honor that u like it!
NinjaA55N
03-27-2004, 12:16 AM
Now Im thinking about what to put into that pic, so it wouldn be just bizzare and disturbing. Something to put the contrast up somehow... a baby for an example... hmm... have to be cute one.. I dont wanna have the most bizzate piece here :rolleyes: Something to wake up emotions in viewers :drool: :cry: :love:
he he... and the brainstorming goes on...
he he... and the brainstorming goes on...
BloodTaster
03-27-2004, 04:41 AM
Very cool man!!! nothing more to say...
:thumbsup:
:thumbsup:
Tommy Lee
03-27-2004, 09:27 AM
:bounce: Beautyful... and by the way: Moms never like what ya do..hehe:beer:
Serious, u did an amazing concept here. It's very different!
Keep going dude!!!:thumbsup:
And by the way: Excellent pencil technique:applause:
Serious, u did an amazing concept here. It's very different!
Keep going dude!!!:thumbsup:
And by the way: Excellent pencil technique:applause:
Friedric P
03-28-2004, 08:12 AM
Well, I don't think it's a problem if your picture is disturbing... More than disturbing, I find it cool!! :thumbsup:
But yes, the baby may be a good addition...
Keep it up! :applause:
Cheers!
But yes, the baby may be a good addition...
Keep it up! :applause:
Cheers!
NinjaA55N
03-28-2004, 07:07 PM
Another crazy idea from me, to make the pic a little bit less bizzare (for any posible girls who will vote ;))
For each baby who will come out (be "born") of that worm, will be a butterfly (again half mechanical, half organic) which will bring that baby to that breast (to feed a baby) and than fly away with him... :bounce:
Sorry, no pic this time... first i'll finish the lineart, than submit it.
For each baby who will come out (be "born") of that worm, will be a butterfly (again half mechanical, half organic) which will bring that baby to that breast (to feed a baby) and than fly away with him... :bounce:
Sorry, no pic this time... first i'll finish the lineart, than submit it.
Tommy Lee
03-29-2004, 05:15 AM
Originally posted by NinjaASSN
Another crazy idea from me, to make the pic a little bit less bizzare (for any posible girls who will vote ;))
For each baby who will come out (be "born") of that worm, will be a butterfly (again half mechanical, half organic) which will bring that baby to that breast (to feed a baby) and than fly away with him... :bounce:
In my opinion u should stay with your original idea. The more bizarre, the better, the more individual!!!
When u look at the evolution in the moment, your vision doesn't seem that unrealistic or bizarre... some fataly wrong-gone stemcell experiments:D
But thats just my two cents...
PS: And by the way... Most female artist are way more sick then we can ever dream about to be. I want to be a girl :cry:
Just look at Alice' or Wildsheepchase's work( hi girls!!!!)
Another crazy idea from me, to make the pic a little bit less bizzare (for any posible girls who will vote ;))
For each baby who will come out (be "born") of that worm, will be a butterfly (again half mechanical, half organic) which will bring that baby to that breast (to feed a baby) and than fly away with him... :bounce:
In my opinion u should stay with your original idea. The more bizarre, the better, the more individual!!!
When u look at the evolution in the moment, your vision doesn't seem that unrealistic or bizarre... some fataly wrong-gone stemcell experiments:D
But thats just my two cents...
PS: And by the way... Most female artist are way more sick then we can ever dream about to be. I want to be a girl :cry:
Just look at Alice' or Wildsheepchase's work( hi girls!!!!)
NinjaA55N
04-01-2004, 07:09 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080846586_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1080846586_large.jpg)
OK... just to post some more, maybe keep somebody interested in my work, get some more feedback...
OK... just to post some more, maybe keep somebody interested in my work, get some more feedback...
mosconariz
04-01-2004, 08:44 PM
I agree with Tommy Lee, the most bizarre, the better, You're an excellent artist! :buttrock: :bowdown:
flyingP
04-01-2004, 10:54 PM
Yep I also agree with Tommy here too, well apart from wanting to be a girl that is (not that there is anything wrong with being a girl I'm sure).
And apart from anything else these are really very well drawn. :thumbsup:
cheers
And apart from anything else these are really very well drawn. :thumbsup:
cheers
Tommy Lee
04-02-2004, 05:26 AM
Seeeeeeee..... I told ya:beer:
NinjaA55N
04-02-2004, 06:38 AM
Thnx guyz! From now on... I dont wanna be a girl either :cool: And im staying with the original concept. :beer:
PS: Yea Tommy.. u told me to NOOOOOOO :D
PS: Yea Tommy.. u told me to NOOOOOOO :D
Cyborgguineapig
04-03-2004, 10:29 AM
You must get people all over telling you you are excellent so I won't do it just because...
Arg, haha, I could not resist. You are an excellent drawer! How many years you been drawing?
Arg, haha, I could not resist. You are an excellent drawer! How many years you been drawing?
NinjaA55N
04-03-2004, 11:44 AM
Cyborg...: thnx a lot!
I draw since i remember... and im 21 yrs old now .:bounce:
I draw since i remember... and im 21 yrs old now .:bounce:
Squibbit
04-03-2004, 02:20 PM
always admired such skill in pencil shading :bowdown:
Tommy Lee
04-03-2004, 04:07 PM
update...update....UPDAAAATE!!!!!!!:wip: :wip: :wip:
Modin
04-03-2004, 04:21 PM
My sentiments exactly!
I want an update. I really like that sick-o style ;)
I think Tommy said it before:
Great penciling :bowdown:
:beer: here's to you mate! :beer:
I want an update. I really like that sick-o style ;)
I think Tommy said it before:
Great penciling :bowdown:
:beer: here's to you mate! :beer:
MarshallWorks
04-03-2004, 05:41 PM
I'm going to have to climb this band waggon!!!
Looks great man!
Sweet idea!
Is there going to be an assembly line going past the breast to feed the young? Or maybe pipes that take the milk to the young?
Greg
Looks great man!
Sweet idea!
Is there going to be an assembly line going past the breast to feed the young? Or maybe pipes that take the milk to the young?
Greg
NinjaA55N
04-03-2004, 06:15 PM
Wow! I honestly didnt expect such a feedback... Im not use to it ;) So Im really grateful for that.
U'll have to wait for an update till tomorrow when I'll finished with shading and stuff. Its so much work to do beside that contest... mostly sleeping, but hey... mans got to sleep :cool:
TheMarshall: No pipes or extra stuff... it'll be like the rule of nature, only the strongest survives... So, the baby which will crawl to the breast first, is the winner for this season! :buttrock:
Ok... thats the first thing that crossed my mind.. ha ha.. Still dont know for shure whats gonna be like, but I have plenty of time till deadline ;)
U'll have to wait for an update till tomorrow when I'll finished with shading and stuff. Its so much work to do beside that contest... mostly sleeping, but hey... mans got to sleep :cool:
TheMarshall: No pipes or extra stuff... it'll be like the rule of nature, only the strongest survives... So, the baby which will crawl to the breast first, is the winner for this season! :buttrock:
Ok... thats the first thing that crossed my mind.. ha ha.. Still dont know for shure whats gonna be like, but I have plenty of time till deadline ;)
NinjaA55N
04-04-2004, 05:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1081097687_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1081097687_large.jpg)
OK.... some problems appeared...
Im not sure how to finish that tail of a giant worm, where the babies will come out. Should it be mechanical or organic? Im thinking of making a mechanical, coz its already 2 much of flesh... what do u think???
And in the upper part of the picture there is some perspective problems... I'll fix that when I'll start coloring it later.
And for anyone who asks whats those mechanical legs around the breast... they r for squeezing the breast, so the babies dont need to suck out that radioactivity liquid by them self :)
Those clips on worms mouth r for holding the mouth open (sharp teeth r potential danger for babies)
I added some lights on worms body as well (those round, dark things)... There will be more of them on colored version.. like those deep sea creatures.
More to the end of worms body there is a transparent skin (a membrane) through which it could be seen embryos flowing inside.
I hope that I didnt make 2 many mistakes describing the creature, so u all understand what I meant.
C&C r most welcome!
OK.... some problems appeared...
Im not sure how to finish that tail of a giant worm, where the babies will come out. Should it be mechanical or organic? Im thinking of making a mechanical, coz its already 2 much of flesh... what do u think???
And in the upper part of the picture there is some perspective problems... I'll fix that when I'll start coloring it later.
And for anyone who asks whats those mechanical legs around the breast... they r for squeezing the breast, so the babies dont need to suck out that radioactivity liquid by them self :)
Those clips on worms mouth r for holding the mouth open (sharp teeth r potential danger for babies)
I added some lights on worms body as well (those round, dark things)... There will be more of them on colored version.. like those deep sea creatures.
More to the end of worms body there is a transparent skin (a membrane) through which it could be seen embryos flowing inside.
I hope that I didnt make 2 many mistakes describing the creature, so u all understand what I meant.
C&C r most welcome!
Squibbit
04-04-2004, 08:12 PM
i got a suggestion , a drawn one , will post it
tomorrow when I'll be able to put it up on my
web site
tomorrow when I'll be able to put it up on my
web site
Squibbit
04-05-2004, 07:15 AM
geocities won't allow for image linking so you
gotta use the link below
http://www.geocities.com/learnerever/sugst
gotta use the link below
http://www.geocities.com/learnerever/sugst
bonestudio
04-05-2004, 10:34 AM
It's sick but you've done it !!!
I think the tail should be organic with mechanical rings to contract it.
great job anyway
I think the tail should be organic with mechanical rings to contract it.
great job anyway
dinodog-jr
04-05-2004, 11:09 AM
haha...sick concept.
dun worry, i am wif u.
I guess "it" is an overage breasts. a little look like rotten papaya.
i wont suck on it, man. Anyone?
U could draw some milk spill on the floor or on the skin of d breasts to make it looks like a "functional" breasts.
it looks "dry" to suck no more . The nipples seems a bit ripped off from the skin??....since u r in luv wif it, make the Nipple head bigger. U oredi drew it. Draw it proudly! It might make it looks like a sweet breasts. Yep, since got some mechanical claws on "it" A little bleed can make it looks like a Real flesh.
I guess this milk factory will be closed down soon or later if u ignore my opinion on ur breasts.
hehe..sorry i'm 1 sicko. No way, u r wif me, Ninja!
heyman nice pencil skills. Pls transplant ur drawing hand, arm & ur brain to me.. hee.
i neva typed so many "breasts" online. This Forum forces me to! hate it, like it, suck it or dream it.
dun worry, i am wif u.
I guess "it" is an overage breasts. a little look like rotten papaya.
i wont suck on it, man. Anyone?
U could draw some milk spill on the floor or on the skin of d breasts to make it looks like a "functional" breasts.
it looks "dry" to suck no more . The nipples seems a bit ripped off from the skin??....since u r in luv wif it, make the Nipple head bigger. U oredi drew it. Draw it proudly! It might make it looks like a sweet breasts. Yep, since got some mechanical claws on "it" A little bleed can make it looks like a Real flesh.
I guess this milk factory will be closed down soon or later if u ignore my opinion on ur breasts.
hehe..sorry i'm 1 sicko. No way, u r wif me, Ninja!
heyman nice pencil skills. Pls transplant ur drawing hand, arm & ur brain to me.. hee.
i neva typed so many "breasts" online. This Forum forces me to! hate it, like it, suck it or dream it.
Squibbit
04-05-2004, 11:17 AM
lol
AllanNorico
04-05-2004, 01:11 PM
really nicely composed. good flow with the how the factory front ends up on your lower right page. great pencil technique!
NinjaA55N
04-05-2004, 08:02 PM
Thnx again for coments! I really appreciate it!
Squibbit: that is a good one, very original and detailed, but now thats all ur idea, so it wouldnt be fair if i will use it. Thnx anyway! :beer:
dinodog_Jr: yea yea... bereats all the way :D Some great suggestions! Will do some corrections for sure!
But no blood or 2 much liquid... It will be bizzare but not gore or brutal.
3distic, bonestudio: thnx!
Squibbit: that is a good one, very original and detailed, but now thats all ur idea, so it wouldnt be fair if i will use it. Thnx anyway! :beer:
dinodog_Jr: yea yea... bereats all the way :D Some great suggestions! Will do some corrections for sure!
But no blood or 2 much liquid... It will be bizzare but not gore or brutal.
3distic, bonestudio: thnx!
Squibbit
04-05-2004, 08:43 PM
yea mine wasn't weird enough , i was just having a little
fun thinkin stuff up and givin you maybe a new idea or two,
maybe helping you out a little cause you said you was stuck .
maybe you could put a 80% percent robot head in the other
end which would vomit out the babies or something ¿
fun thinkin stuff up and givin you maybe a new idea or two,
maybe helping you out a little cause you said you was stuck .
maybe you could put a 80% percent robot head in the other
end which would vomit out the babies or something ¿
NinjaA55N
04-11-2004, 09:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1081715128_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1081715128_large.jpg)
Ok folx... this is final lineart from me. Pencil work and some wacom adds in the front (a mechanical part which brings baby to the breast). In the back u can see a lot of other babies which were produced in babyfactory (giant-worm).
Please please please... give me some backup and ur opinion about the concept, the whole idea, if its enough mechanical as well as organic parts... any crits r most welcome!
Ok folx... this is final lineart from me. Pencil work and some wacom adds in the front (a mechanical part which brings baby to the breast). In the back u can see a lot of other babies which were produced in babyfactory (giant-worm).
Please please please... give me some backup and ur opinion about the concept, the whole idea, if its enough mechanical as well as organic parts... any crits r most welcome!
Squibbit
04-12-2004, 03:02 AM
i dunno , the concept's weird ,
your skill with the pencil (or wacom)
is awesome and i don't think you need anything
except to finish the piece and that's it
your skill with the pencil (or wacom)
is awesome and i don't think you need anything
except to finish the piece and that's it
mosconariz
04-12-2004, 03:26 AM
Yeah!, Squibbit's right, your work is truly great and strong... Could be a masterpiece... :thumbsup:
neble
04-12-2004, 05:56 AM
This is really coming along nicely. Not sure what I'm exactly looking at at the moment. but I'm sure it will all come together. Interesting subject matter though.
viag
04-12-2004, 11:43 AM
bizzare concept ! thats why i like it ! maybe i ill add some extra mechinal part on the floor , but its great , i want to see the color :thumbsup:
cuppacam
04-12-2004, 12:39 PM
Wickedly freaky!!! Love it.
NinjaA55N
04-12-2004, 09:52 PM
Squibbit, mosconariz, cuppacam: Thnx for support guyz!
neble: u'r scaring me... if u still dont know what u'r looking at, than the pic probably isnt clear enough? :surprised or u just didnt read the whole explenation... or its my bad english ;)
viag: I'm glad u like it! I'll see what to put on the floor to cover that emptyness.
Now I'll put that chalange to the side a bit... need to sleepover everything, find the right colors... do some other things.
But I'll be most gratefull for every new coment u'll put it down here.
cya!
neble: u'r scaring me... if u still dont know what u'r looking at, than the pic probably isnt clear enough? :surprised or u just didnt read the whole explenation... or its my bad english ;)
viag: I'm glad u like it! I'll see what to put on the floor to cover that emptyness.
Now I'll put that chalange to the side a bit... need to sleepover everything, find the right colors... do some other things.
But I'll be most gratefull for every new coment u'll put it down here.
cya!
Kilduff
04-12-2004, 09:55 PM
i think its great, good concept, cant wait for the color.
element5
04-13-2004, 05:31 AM
fantastic and warped......:thumbsup:
cant wait for colour :)
cant wait for colour :)
dinodog-jr
04-13-2004, 08:13 AM
Oh man.....pls stop let me see something beyond my ability!!
i prefer a pair of ordinary breasts..did i told u, ninja??
Do u?
i prefer a pair of ordinary breasts..did i told u, ninja??
Do u?
Protoz
04-14-2004, 07:23 PM
Wow strange concept but it looks awesome!
Can't wait to see this colored!
Can't wait to see this colored!
NinjaA55N
05-15-2004, 02:55 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1084629341_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1084629341_large.jpg)
OK guyz and girls.. im back from the dead. The school and job dont give me much time for this contest, but im sure i'll finish that piece in time.
So, this is the next step.. colorin WIP. Just testing which colors i'll use, and im quite satisfied with this red-orange-yellow choice. It has some kind of evil look i think.
Whats ur opinion??? Dont be shy to critisize :)
PS: there is a just color image and a color and pencil image. In final picture there will be no pencil.
OK guyz and girls.. im back from the dead. The school and job dont give me much time for this contest, but im sure i'll finish that piece in time.
So, this is the next step.. colorin WIP. Just testing which colors i'll use, and im quite satisfied with this red-orange-yellow choice. It has some kind of evil look i think.
Whats ur opinion??? Dont be shy to critisize :)
PS: there is a just color image and a color and pencil image. In final picture there will be no pencil.
NinjaA55N
05-15-2004, 06:33 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1084642434_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1084642434_large.jpg)
some blue color in the right lower corner...
still dont know if thats it. It looks so "normal" :(
any suggestion how to make that piece better? which colors to use?
some blue color in the right lower corner...
still dont know if thats it. It looks so "normal" :(
any suggestion how to make that piece better? which colors to use?
Luter
05-15-2004, 11:02 PM
Inspirating work! Bravo
OrcOYoyo
05-16-2004, 12:31 AM
Realy very creative and on the other way sick concept LoL but it'S realy cool :)
Somehow the "Head" and the following worm part look a bit flat in my opinion. maybe you can improve that a bit.
waiting fot the next step kewl stuff realy :D
Somehow the "Head" and the following worm part look a bit flat in my opinion. maybe you can improve that a bit.
waiting fot the next step kewl stuff realy :D
NinjaA55N
05-16-2004, 12:29 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1084706998_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1084706998_large.jpg)
I started painting over the pencil... adding some small details... its fun :)
Thnx for comments! I realise that the worm is still quite flat, I'll try to correct that.
I started painting over the pencil... adding some small details... its fun :)
Thnx for comments! I realise that the worm is still quite flat, I'll try to correct that.
element5
05-16-2004, 01:00 PM
Hey ninja coming along nicely, i like the earthy colouring.
The sky may need to be a different colour as a contrast tends to blend in.
:beer:
The sky may need to be a different colour as a contrast tends to blend in.
:beer:
artjunkie
05-16-2004, 02:44 PM
You're work here is great!!! A little twisted and disgusting, but GREAT (ha ha ha). I especially loved the pencil work... you're a talented artist, no doubt! The painting is coming along nicely too! Looking forward to seeing it develop. Keep it up, you deviant, you!;)
cheers
cheers
Luter
05-27-2004, 02:37 AM
Hey guy !
:D
Nice work, but.....it seems, for me, something is missing, I don't know what ...:shrug:
Maybe a focus somewhere...
Anyway it's an original work.
keep up!:thumbsup:
:D
Nice work, but.....it seems, for me, something is missing, I don't know what ...:shrug:
Maybe a focus somewhere...
Anyway it's an original work.
keep up!:thumbsup:
NinjaA55N
05-28-2004, 03:23 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1085754220_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1085754220_large.jpg)
a close-up of the worms face... does it still look flat? Give me some backup how to fix that flatness, please.
thnx!
a close-up of the worms face... does it still look flat? Give me some backup how to fix that flatness, please.
thnx!
NinjaA55N
05-28-2004, 03:57 PM
element5: the sky will be more yellow-orange and especially clean... a big contrast to the worm.
artjunkie: thnx!
goli: a focus will be on a baby, grabed by a mechanical arm, closing to the giant tit :D
It will be somehow the composition of 3 elements... worms head, a baby in the first plan and round part of the worm in the background.
Thnx for comments!
artjunkie: thnx!
goli: a focus will be on a baby, grabed by a mechanical arm, closing to the giant tit :D
It will be somehow the composition of 3 elements... worms head, a baby in the first plan and round part of the worm in the background.
Thnx for comments!
Luter
05-28-2004, 07:17 PM
flatness..?maybe you have to work on the shadows...global shadows..there is not a clear source for one or more lights...
for the moment light is only ambient...maybe you could put distinct sources of lights...:hmm:
Go on, you deviant !
for the moment light is only ambient...maybe you could put distinct sources of lights...:hmm:
Go on, you deviant !
NinjaA55N
05-29-2004, 11:20 AM
Thnx goli! I'll try to add some color shadows, cold blue from the lower side and orange-red light from the upper side.
I hope that would do...
I hope that would do...
NinjaA55N
05-29-2004, 01:00 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1085832036_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1085832036_large.jpg)
I did some corrections on the shadows, change a breast in its mouth and added a blue light from the lower right side..
Hows about that???
I did some corrections on the shadows, change a breast in its mouth and added a blue light from the lower right side..
Hows about that???
MrFreeman
05-29-2004, 02:05 PM
I really like your concepts - and definitely the first time I've come across a breast in the mouth of a worm!! Makes a change from the more popular position upon a nearly naked woman which is so popular in this competion.
I like the composition - it really makes you wonder what the rest of the worm looks like - and i thought my ideas were a little weird. Some idea of scale might help, but hey I can't really fault your work and was trying to find something constructive to say...
I like your style of painting - looks great. looks like you are just about there so good luck:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
I like the composition - it really makes you wonder what the rest of the worm looks like - and i thought my ideas were a little weird. Some idea of scale might help, but hey I can't really fault your work and was trying to find something constructive to say...
I like your style of painting - looks great. looks like you are just about there so good luck:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
anildawre
05-30-2004, 07:02 AM
one of the best original idea i have seen so far
just try to fit ajustifiable story around it. good carry on the good work:thumbsup: :bowdown:
just try to fit ajustifiable story around it. good carry on the good work:thumbsup: :bowdown:
NinjaA55N
05-31-2004, 11:27 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1086042449_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1086042449_large.jpg)
Some details were added, front tanks and some pipes were painted, more blue color to the side part of the worms body...
Any critics r most welcome!
thnx
Some details were added, front tanks and some pipes were painted, more blue color to the side part of the worms body...
Any critics r most welcome!
thnx
0-2
06-01-2004, 12:06 AM
Well done. I realy like your pencil scketches and your ideas are inspiring.:applause:
NinjaA55N
06-01-2004, 08:34 AM
Thnx guyz for ur support!
MrFreeman: im not really sure what did u mean with that scale idea? Abot skin texture??? I did that now and I hope its like something u had in mind?
anildawre: Im working on a story, I just hope u'll like it :)
0-2: thnx!
MrFreeman: im not really sure what did u mean with that scale idea? Abot skin texture??? I did that now and I hope its like something u had in mind?
anildawre: Im working on a story, I just hope u'll like it :)
0-2: thnx!
NinjaA55N
06-04-2004, 10:49 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1086385769_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1086385769_large.jpg)
I was doing some some changes with the ambient and perspective... i hope im on the right way :/
Help me please with some backup, I'll be most gratefull. Whats still "wrong"... is it obvious whats in the front and whats in the back?
Now i'll do the next first plan object, the hand with the baby in it... it will be put in the left side of the pic (just like on a sketch), than add some more details here and there and finally finished that piece.
I was doing some some changes with the ambient and perspective... i hope im on the right way :/
Help me please with some backup, I'll be most gratefull. Whats still "wrong"... is it obvious whats in the front and whats in the back?
Now i'll do the next first plan object, the hand with the baby in it... it will be put in the left side of the pic (just like on a sketch), than add some more details here and there and finally finished that piece.
Luter
06-04-2004, 11:57 PM
So..:)
Its better with these new lights.
I'm not sure with the blue on the top of his head (btw head and queue)..values btw head-light and shadow-ambient are too comparables..
Maybe the shadow under the queue, at the second plan are too strong..
And :) , you have two yellow lights : why do you put a blue lightning ? (lights of the heads, the cylinders) I think that if you begin with a yellow (like the lights...) and finish with a blue ..the effect would be great !:)
Anyway ! Keep up your good work man !
..................................................:wavey: .........................................
Its better with these new lights.
I'm not sure with the blue on the top of his head (btw head and queue)..values btw head-light and shadow-ambient are too comparables..
Maybe the shadow under the queue, at the second plan are too strong..
And :) , you have two yellow lights : why do you put a blue lightning ? (lights of the heads, the cylinders) I think that if you begin with a yellow (like the lights...) and finish with a blue ..the effect would be great !:)
Anyway ! Keep up your good work man !
..................................................:wavey: .........................................
NinjaA55N
06-05-2004, 08:38 AM
thnx goli! thnx a lot!
Im not sure that i understood everything, but i'll do something in this way, correct the upper blue shadow/lite. The lower blue light (shadow of the worms head) is to attract the view, so that its sure its a first plan.
thnx again for ur time!
Im not sure that i understood everything, but i'll do something in this way, correct the upper blue shadow/lite. The lower blue light (shadow of the worms head) is to attract the view, so that its sure its a first plan.
thnx again for ur time!
NathanielWest
06-05-2004, 09:15 AM
I really like this painting, and I especially like your color scheme. You're doing a great job at rendering this out, and I can't wait to see the finish. :thumbsup:
In terms of what is not working for me (and for others that either agree or disagree, I urge you to comment as doing so will ultimately help him out):
I know that you want to have a focus on the mechanical arm and baby, and I think that it is important for you to get that element in right away so that you can compare it against the rest of the painting. That way you can determine how best to make that and the mouth the first read. Thus far my eye is immediatey drawn to the lower righthand corner for two reasons. The blue is very contrasting with the rest of the colors, and the value contrast of the greenish glowing chambers is the most drastic area in your painting. If you could somehow get those lights knocked back just a bit, or if you could soften the edges of light and dark, I think it would help.
I can definitely tell what is in front of what is in back in this piece, but I don't think it would hurt to play around with some more atmospheric perspective. The worm in the background has the same saturation as the foreground, as well as having similar value contrast.
I also think that you could either saturate the front worms head, or put some bold highlights on the bumpy scales. Snake skin is a good reference, but if that isn't the look you're going for then ignore that comment.
And the only other thing that I just noticed, is that I feel like you could extend the top and the bottom of the canvas just slightly, as I feel that your worms are crowding up to the edges...but that is such a small detail.
I hope that this is some help to you...and I hope you know that I am only giving my opinion because I really want to see this painting be the best that it can be. Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to see more!
In terms of what is not working for me (and for others that either agree or disagree, I urge you to comment as doing so will ultimately help him out):
I know that you want to have a focus on the mechanical arm and baby, and I think that it is important for you to get that element in right away so that you can compare it against the rest of the painting. That way you can determine how best to make that and the mouth the first read. Thus far my eye is immediatey drawn to the lower righthand corner for two reasons. The blue is very contrasting with the rest of the colors, and the value contrast of the greenish glowing chambers is the most drastic area in your painting. If you could somehow get those lights knocked back just a bit, or if you could soften the edges of light and dark, I think it would help.
I can definitely tell what is in front of what is in back in this piece, but I don't think it would hurt to play around with some more atmospheric perspective. The worm in the background has the same saturation as the foreground, as well as having similar value contrast.
I also think that you could either saturate the front worms head, or put some bold highlights on the bumpy scales. Snake skin is a good reference, but if that isn't the look you're going for then ignore that comment.
And the only other thing that I just noticed, is that I feel like you could extend the top and the bottom of the canvas just slightly, as I feel that your worms are crowding up to the edges...but that is such a small detail.
I hope that this is some help to you...and I hope you know that I am only giving my opinion because I really want to see this painting be the best that it can be. Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to see more!
NinjaA55N
06-05-2004, 09:30 AM
Nathaniel West: :bowdown: thnx man for this long feedback... i'll do step by step by ur suggestions and im sure that it will help bring this piece on a higher level... thnx! :bounce:
NinjaA55N
06-07-2004, 10:16 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1086599786_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1086599786_large.jpg)
I added a baby.. finally! I didnt start painting it, coz im wondering about the position of the baby, and the whole composition of the pic.
Any suggestions, tips or something will be most welcome!
The baby and that iron piece r on a different layer that the worm is, so it wouldnt be a problem moving it and rotating it, if it would be nessesery.
Thnx!
PS: i didnt correct any previous mistakes that u all suggested me to, coz of no time :(
I'll do that as soon as possible, so dont be mad not listening to u :bounce:
I added a baby.. finally! I didnt start painting it, coz im wondering about the position of the baby, and the whole composition of the pic.
Any suggestions, tips or something will be most welcome!
The baby and that iron piece r on a different layer that the worm is, so it wouldnt be a problem moving it and rotating it, if it would be nessesery.
Thnx!
PS: i didnt correct any previous mistakes that u all suggested me to, coz of no time :(
I'll do that as soon as possible, so dont be mad not listening to u :bounce:
Russo
06-07-2004, 08:30 PM
hello,
all the lines of the composition leads to the baby. wich I believe is the focus of your composition? if is that right, the composition seems to be working fine at my viewpoint. very classic style of painting also! :)
all the lines of the composition leads to the baby. wich I believe is the focus of your composition? if is that right, the composition seems to be working fine at my viewpoint. very classic style of painting also! :)
DirtySkillet
06-08-2004, 04:17 AM
Oh man this is a good one. Both amazing tech. work, but sweet idea and composition. Keep it coming!
NinjaA55N
06-08-2004, 07:57 AM
Thn u guyz for stopping by!
Now I'll leave the composition as it is and start coloring the baby and stuff... and than it'll be pretty much close to the final image... i guess :bounce: right on time!
Russo: classic painting style? he he.. i hear this for the first time, although that its probably true. still donno how to make it not so classic :surprised but maybe thats a good thing... :)
thnx again!
Now I'll leave the composition as it is and start coloring the baby and stuff... and than it'll be pretty much close to the final image... i guess :bounce: right on time!
Russo: classic painting style? he he.. i hear this for the first time, although that its probably true. still donno how to make it not so classic :surprised but maybe thats a good thing... :)
thnx again!
MrFreeman
06-08-2004, 10:53 AM
Your composition is looking even better since I last looked...with all the additions in the background and the second wormlike structure...lovely soft lighting
Good Luck with getting the final image finished..:thumbsup: :)
Good Luck with getting the final image finished..:thumbsup: :)
paulwdavidson
06-08-2004, 11:33 PM
Very fruity....no crit to give....very entertaining piece. It gets you thinking....in my book, that's what makes a great piece of art.
Good luck
Paul
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=133522
Good luck
Paul
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=133522
cabertevon
06-10-2004, 12:16 AM
Great stuff man.
Visit my 2D Machineflesh Thread (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=131262&perpage=15&pagenumber=5) :bounce:
Visit my 2D Machineflesh Thread (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=131262&perpage=15&pagenumber=5) :bounce:
NinjaA55N
06-13-2004, 06:55 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1087149352_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1087149352_large.jpg)
Baby is finally painted... This is my last WIP submission, next will be final... i hope.
I still have to correct all stuff u suggested me to (some of them i did already) and finish the backplace (babies and some more machinery, sky..)
Baby is finally painted... This is my last WIP submission, next will be final... i hope.
I still have to correct all stuff u suggested me to (some of them i did already) and finish the backplace (babies and some more machinery, sky..)
NinjaA55N
06-14-2004, 06:07 AM
Guyz... how do u get such a sharp lines? When I look ur pictures and than my, I find my very blury, no metter how much i try to contrast elements and get them out from the background :shrug:
//edit - when i try to use smaller brushes, it gets unnatural (at 100% opacy) and when i lower the opacy, it gets blury edges. How do u paint sharp edges and lines?
//edit - when i try to use smaller brushes, it gets unnatural (at 100% opacy) and when i lower the opacy, it gets blury edges. How do u paint sharp edges and lines?
NathanielWest
06-16-2004, 05:33 PM
Try using the lasso tool maybe, or start on a new layer and use a layer mask to eraser out hard edges. Hope this helps some. Just play around with it and you'll find what works best for you. Looks good, just keep on going!!:thumbsup:
NinjaA55N
06-16-2004, 08:23 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1087413783_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1087413783_large.jpg)
this is almoust about it. There will be added some more details (like signs and so on) and maybe some ambient changes (dark and ligh) and thats it.
Thnx to everyone who took some time to coment this piece!
this is almoust about it. There will be added some more details (like signs and so on) and maybe some ambient changes (dark and ligh) and thats it.
Thnx to everyone who took some time to coment this piece!
NinjaA55N
06-18-2004, 12:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1087557946_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2570/2570_1087557946_large.jpg)
OK folx, thats it! My final submission...
Thats the babyfactory, where babies r being born from a giant worms tail, where they r feeding thru a giant breast inside the worm (and that breast is squized by some gigantic steel spider legs), where electro shocks stimulate hunger so babies r somehow forced to eat... and they eat something radioactivity-like (thats why they look a bit strange).
And in the back, there u can see loooooots of other babies just waiting for their turn to eat. bwahahahaha.... my sick mind :D
That would be the end. Thnx to everyone who at least take a look to my thread and especially to those who took some time and put down the feedback. I most appriciated!
Good luck to all! :)
OK folx, thats it! My final submission...
Thats the babyfactory, where babies r being born from a giant worms tail, where they r feeding thru a giant breast inside the worm (and that breast is squized by some gigantic steel spider legs), where electro shocks stimulate hunger so babies r somehow forced to eat... and they eat something radioactivity-like (thats why they look a bit strange).
And in the back, there u can see loooooots of other babies just waiting for their turn to eat. bwahahahaha.... my sick mind :D
That would be the end. Thnx to everyone who at least take a look to my thread and especially to those who took some time and put down the feedback. I most appriciated!
Good luck to all! :)
Snotblow
06-18-2004, 12:39 PM
Very nice final....I really like all the color work and the idea is definitely original....great job!:bounce:
Drumwhore
06-18-2004, 12:56 PM
I'll second that :)
Btw, your sketches are also very nice :)
Good luck! :beer:
Btw, your sketches are also very nice :)
Good luck! :beer:
MAdPhoenix
06-18-2004, 04:39 PM
Well.... very interesting concept, makes me sick to my stomach but i like it...
do you have a website? would like to see if all your stuff is a interesting and grim as this one
:applause:
Good luck
do you have a website? would like to see if all your stuff is a interesting and grim as this one
:applause:
Good luck
NinjaA55N
06-18-2004, 06:26 PM
unfortunately i dont have a web page.. yet. But i can show u this link
http://ninjaassn.gfxartist.com/
where is most of my yet created pictures... not much, but im starting :)
thnx for reply!
http://ninjaassn.gfxartist.com/
where is most of my yet created pictures... not much, but im starting :)
thnx for reply!
MAdPhoenix
06-18-2004, 06:56 PM
Thanks
like the green fairy tale...:bounce: not so grim ;)
Nice use of colour and perspective in the worm/babyfactory.
Good luck once again
like the green fairy tale...:bounce: not so grim ;)
Nice use of colour and perspective in the worm/babyfactory.
Good luck once again
Squibbit
06-18-2004, 06:57 PM
"(thats why they look a bit strange)"
LOL
LOL
eska
06-19-2004, 07:28 AM
Very nice.
MrFreeman
06-20-2004, 01:55 PM
:thumbsup: I really enjoyed looking at your entry....and progress made since the early sketches...the concept is definitely weirder than I imagined, but nevertheless, great idea and great final entry.
Good luck in the next stage :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :applause:
Good luck in the next stage :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :applause:
mosconariz
06-20-2004, 02:24 PM
Ouch! That's too damn good! :applause:
A3DLover
06-23-2004, 01:52 AM
Whip stuff, i gotta admit its got shock value but impressive art and imagination.
Don't stop expressing yourself. Love the worms!
Don't stop expressing yourself. Love the worms!
londero
06-23-2004, 12:04 PM
Hei dude!
Your image is very impressive, because many aspects:
1. The insane and original concept
2. The bizarre theme and forms to interpretation of this image
3. the fantastic color aspect, like old masters of ilustration
4. remember me Giger world
5. the interesting process of development
congratulations!!!:thumbsup:
and force to you
Londero.
to see my job
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=141195&page=17&pp=15 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=141195&page=17&pp=15)
Your image is very impressive, because many aspects:
1. The insane and original concept
2. The bizarre theme and forms to interpretation of this image
3. the fantastic color aspect, like old masters of ilustration
4. remember me Giger world
5. the interesting process of development
congratulations!!!:thumbsup:
and force to you
Londero.
to see my job
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=141195&page=17&pp=15 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=141195&page=17&pp=15)
cabertevon
06-23-2004, 12:45 PM
Simply ROCKS!!!
Visit MY 2D Machineflesh Thread:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=131262&perpage=15&pagenumber=8 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=131262&perpage=15&pagenumber=8)
Visit MY 2D Machineflesh Thread:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=131262&perpage=15&pagenumber=8 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=131262&perpage=15&pagenumber=8)
NinjaA55N
06-24-2004, 09:26 AM
guyz, i cant thank u enough for ur replies, they mean a lot to me! especially coz im a new user to this site and i see that some really ql ppl r around here... I must say that all finished entries r great, some of them even breathtaking, so good luck to everyone here! u r the best!
NinjaA55N
07-28-2004, 10:18 AM
Whats next??? Does anyone knows? And where can we find results of the public voting?
Squibbit
07-28-2004, 11:15 AM
I'm not sure they gonna show the results of public voting .
The judges have been evaluating the entries for what , two
weeks now ? We get little info of progress , as usual .
Just gotta have to wait.
There's more on this on Machinflesh 3D forum , top thread , or
one of the top ones anyways
The judges have been evaluating the entries for what , two
weeks now ? We get little info of progress , as usual .
Just gotta have to wait.
There's more on this on Machinflesh 3D forum , top thread , or
one of the top ones anyways
NinjaA55N
07-28-2004, 07:57 PM
Thnx Squibbit :)
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