character: female

[HeroChannel]

Amazing! Just amazing!:applause:

[AKAI]

beautiful piece of work!!
but the right lightning looks a little too strong and also maybe too yellow ..a little specular on the skin could be nice
:thumbsup:

[Frank Dodd]

A very nice piece of work, a well proportioned clean cut model in a nice tasteful pose. Nicely lit and presented in a simple but elegant environment.

Possibly the only thing that really needs some work is the skin texture, it has great colour but is lacking important colour detail and specularity. I think perhaps the heel in the foot is also a little small? or perhaps that's just my perception.

I am being a bit picky there though as this is an very convincing and expressive image.

Outstanding. :thumbsup:

[XenoDrake]

Wow, my first comment =O *gasp*

This image is very good. I like it’s over all feeling of innocents and elegance.

I have only a few short things to say about it, and remember this is coming from a fan of CG art only, I haven’t modeled anything for myself, so if I stumble around on the technological details, I’m sorry.

Her feet look weird, to long on her left foot and flat on her right foot. The right one looks to ridged, like the ridge going up her leg is square. Also her eyes and general face expression is rather bland. A smirk or small smile, as if recalling some childhood memory would give her more of a personality.

Also, where her hands are, it’s blurred and I can’t really tell if her fingers are interlocked, of if her right hand is cupped inside her left hand. But her left hand seems like the thumb is to far back, or that here fingers are to long. Hands are the hardest thing to make, I know that much from the small bit of art I have tried drawing.

The lighting is flawless, very well done.

Over all, an impressive work of art. :thumbsup:


~XenoDrake

[Cybernut]

Very nice modeling and pose. My only crit would be the image may be a little soft... maybe a little too much DOF. Is there a posting in the WIP section so I can see the progress?

Glad you came over from doing arch into organic. Keep up the great work.

C

[xcvbnm]

Very Nice...
Superb.
Bit bright, but the overall mood is nice.
The knee bend [upper] looks a bit strange.
:love:

[Veggie_Iller]

WOW!!!




Wow!!!




Just great!

[hv2]

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowww...Man it GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT....

[slackjaw10]

That skin is freaking perfect. The only thing I would want to see is a tiny bit more detail in her face, but that's just me. Great job. :buttrock:

[Faithbleed]

Bloody Hell! That's stunning dude. But I think her face is lacing something? Like slackjaw10 said, maybe its the detail?! Also the specularity if the skin shader is a bit bright. But otherwise great work. :bounce:

[ExoduZ]

*gasp* that is nice. I think the left foot is little odd.
But the strong light from the right gives it more life I think. so I just love your image.

[Ravager]

Very nice image. It's a bit too soft though, as someone else mentioned. The lighting works really well, really suits it.

[BonciuToma]

cool stuff. I think thou that the face is the one that tells you that this is a CG model and not a real woman.

But wow, this is great overall. :thumbsup:

[Ch3]

the model, texture and all the technical details are fine to me!
The only comment I have to make is the composition. You 've positioned her exactly to the center of the image which makes it a bit boring. Try to place her on one of the side, probably on the right as she looks to the left and maybe cut a bit from the top.

other than that I like her :D

those flowers petals reminds me American Beauty right?

[Reza_82ir]

Perfect:applause:

[bcairns]

Overall, I really like this image. I would definitely take into consideration all of what xenodrake said. A few things do seem a little off. I think her eyes look kind of strange. It might look better if she was looking down more towards the floor. Also, maybe add a little more fill light to the left side of the image (her right side). Some details seem to be lost over there. Very nice though.
:)

[Jure]

Thank you guys for your replies! I realy appreciate it. :thumbsup:
I must say I totally agree with your comments it confirmed some of the flaws I was noticing myself also. It's great to get constructive comments, because sometimes it is just so hard to see the flaws when you work on a model continously for a long time.
Right now I'm busy with another project, but mybe I get some time in future to fix the things you mentioned.

Thanx!

[Quickdraw]

Great......:applause:

[xsilentpepe]

Don't know if it were just me or not. I kind of feel scary when i see her eyes.:cry:

But i like the flowers around her.

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