Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Monsit Jangariyawong

[monsitj]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1086114870_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1086114870_large.jpg)

Hi ,there, I think I'm late , this is the layout of my composition , my main concept is , in the future , human use machine to fullfill their imagination in different form of art , this is a pair of dancer , they lost their body in war , but they still want to dance ! so , the machine is their answer !!

[monsitj]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1086115114_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1086115114_large.jpg)

this is the compositon I choose to develop , comments are welcome!!

[Corlinator]

i like your composistion, it has a very fluid feeling and i think if thats the idea, you are trying to get across, then you have hit the nail on the head.
looking very nice

ps i enjoyed your thumbs, i like your thought process.

[Luter]

Good sketches...and very nice idea...cool and peace idea...I like it.
Go on man, 'ld like to see more.

[Russo]

yeah, me too... :)

[artjunkie]

I absolutely LOVE your loose pencil work... nice energy, great pose and character design! Looking forward to seeing updates on this one. :beer:

[sketchfiend]

Love your pencilwork and the compositin youve chosen looks awesome, i cant wait to see what your up to. Ill be watch out for this one. :thumbsup: :beer: :bowdown: :D

[monsitj]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1086544520_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1086544520_large.jpg)

here is the coloring wip , comments are welcome!!

[Falcorr]

It's pretty obvious you dont want me to win anything.

Hey XIA also did character with multiple arms. You should check out his stuff also.

Ill be waiting for them colors. I dont think it will take that much time when youre doing them. :wavey:

Nice loosely lines. Why did you decided to change the pose?

[monsitj]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1086798981_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1086798981_large.jpg)

Hi , many thanks for your comments ,here is the update of my entry

[0-2]

Nice Style, I like the looseness of it.:thumbsup:

[paulwdavidson]

Bags of potential!!!!!!!!!!!

Strive on!

Paul

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=133522

[neandertal]

YEAH ! Very nice ! I love the concept with divinity/human/machine ! And the drawing is just great ! I hope that you'll finish this ! :bounce: :bounce:

[monsitj]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1087065563_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1087065563_large.jpg)

hi , this is another progress ,need your comments

[smilingdemon]

aaah come on, what are you waiting for ? i want this pic finished NOW !!!
...uuuhh just can't wait to see the final pic, i simply WORSHIP your talent :bounce:

[monsitj]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1087342037_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1087342037_large.jpg)

hi! this is coloring so far , still have little time to fine tune , need more comments guys!!

[monsitj]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1087342232_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1087342232_large.jpg)

hi! this is coloring so far , still have little time to fine tune , need more comments guys!!

[fishermanDavis]

Nice piece, like the composition a lot. I think maybe some heavier contrast could help as the shapes don't quite stand out enough in some places? Just my two cents.

cheers!

[BlackLight]

I agree with fishermanDavis, the characters blend into the background too much. Perhaps a bit of rim lighting to define their edges would help. It's looking good though. They're really dancing up a storm! :rolleyes:

[ardenrey]

Cool!:buttrock:

I like colors.:thumbsup:


My MachineFlesh 2D Thread (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=131505&perpage=15&pagenumber=4)

[galaxian]

There are all sorts of gems to be found in this challenge. Your pic just so happens to be one of the particularly rare varieties.

I happen to like the dark, low contrasting feel to the characters.

[monsitj]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1087480915_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/2506/2506_1087480915_large.jpg)

Hi , this is it , the final image , still need your valuable comments :>

[Corlinator]

the final image looks awsome, it has a real cyber oriental feeling to it, and the composistion worked out very nice, very cool piece:beer:

[Riddick]

Good Luck!
The shiva idea is really nice!

[MrFreeman]

:thumbsup: Great final entry.....would be great to see some detailed sections of the image..

Good luck and congratulations on a great piece of work :bounce: :applause: :thumbsup:

[STARBUCK]

Nice work dude!
very nice work!
Good luck for the finish.:bounce:

[Versiden]

wow, too cool.. nice work

I'm really enjoying the 2d entries more than the 3d..
vote + 1
;p

good luck

[Slav]

really nice image i think its a tad blurry in some areas but well done none the less.

good luck mate.

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