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hellblade

07-06-2002, 08:25 PM

My first character. The image is too dark to see the pants, but I wanted that dark atmosphere. C&C welcome :)
http://coldvsworld.hypermart.net/XSI/head/pose2.jpg
The gun was kindly custom-made for me by Falconter (http://www.falcontear.com)

hellblade

07-06-2002, 10:56 PM

umm hello?

hellblade

07-06-2002, 11:11 PM

i dont get it :rolleyes: :eek:

hellblade

07-07-2002, 12:05 AM

why does this always happen? I never get any replies unless I "force" them out of people.

PedramK

07-07-2002, 12:17 AM

hey hb, heh dont worry, ppl are always slow when it comes to filling up new posts.

Your image looks good, but a bit too dark even when i juice up
the brightness on my monitor. Heres a couple of cents

The guys shoulders look a bit flat, donno if thats the lighting or
the mesh itself. try to have it bulge up more.

Uhm, yea, you should try and add some highlights on the rifle
aswell, to get out some of its shapes better.

that makes it my 2 cents.
cheers :beer:

hellblade

07-07-2002, 12:37 AM

Thanks for your reply, the shoulders have been brought to my attention. The problem stems from my complete lack of any weight-painting/rigging skill. Love your avatar, btw!

Manowar

07-07-2002, 02:43 PM

good start!!!but i think you must add more polys details to muscle and some correction to the hair!!!!Cmq i like it!post a wireframe render!!!

Julez4001

07-07-2002, 09:37 PM

Hell blade, add some more light so people can give more critique if its not finished , POst it in the WIP and not finished section.

rsalonen

07-07-2002, 09:45 PM

the model looks good so far, the shaders might need a bit mroe of work, otherwise, it's pretty good.
You should also add some lights with low itensity in the back to reveal more.

Keep up the good work

Ragamuffin

07-07-2002, 09:55 PM

yeah the model looks good but I think you should set him in a nuclear / post-motem enviroment.
But keep it dark! ;)

misterboogie

07-07-2002, 10:59 PM

Alright another Book of Five Rings fan!

Looks like you've got the modeling skills.

First thing you need to do is tighten up the lighting in the image. Maybe add a backlight to bring out more of your character. If you're going with a night time feel. Try adding some blue fill lights.

Post this in the WIP section and work on it. This piece has great potential.

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