Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Christopher Kalin

[Dragonbreath]

HI folks!
I figured if I didn't do this now, I would keep coming up with reasons not to join.
I would appreciate any and all tips on speeding up the process - I'm new and take forever to do every little thing.
Maybe if I just cut out that sleep thing...

[Dragonbreath]

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Hi folks!
Gonna do the Ultimate Bullfighter. Seeing so much talent entered in the challenge is going to push me to new limits - especially with your help on critiques - (I've never done a completed project before)
Lets ROCK!!!

[Dragonbreath]

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I'm basically done with the head - the eyes,ears and nose are just there for reference. Slowly but surely it's coming together.

[VinceFX]

looks good the head:)
I think the jaw must be more smooth, no? the edge are too strong.


For the concept, its nice too, but I think the mechanical parts should be more present. Maybe with some details that you can add in 3D;)

[Dragonbreath]

I agree about the jaw - but if I keep tweaking now, I'll never get the rest done.
The mechanical parts will show more. The sketch was just a basic idea for me. I'm thinking about more wires, maybe one arm is mechanical so I can attach the flag...
Thanks for the crits

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