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fredconv
03-17-2004, 09:33 AM
Frederic CONVERT has entered the Machineflesh 2D Challenge.

fredconv
03-18-2004, 12:20 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1079616039_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1079616039_large.jpg)

hi all ^^
i m thinking of a "perfect assassin" with powerfull leg, hand, maybe her head and eyes will be modified as well all this in order to climb jump or anything else,
well it s just the beginning
i ll put design of all part and then assemble them for the final sketch i suppose ^^'

the first one is the hand ^^ i suppose it will be something like this :)

more coming soon ^^

EduardGray
03-18-2004, 12:37 PM
Looks interesting, looking forward to seeing the progression.

fredconv
03-18-2004, 01:59 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1079621977_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1079621977_large.jpg)

hi again... hum things are going harder !! i see a lot of great pictures around here ....

well instead of a human looking like assassin i ve changed him into a scorpio-mixed killer ^^

don't know if it s a good idea :p

any idea ?

C&C are welcomed

:beer:

adrianis
03-18-2004, 09:17 PM
I like your sketch :thumbsup:

I wonder, how are the enemies of scorpio! :bounce:
And the flesh, remember: no cyborgs like terminator (I read it somewhere...)

You are doing a great work, good luck, all we have three months! so, let all the ideas flow :drool: (kidding)


_______________________
p.d. forgive my poor english...

BebeteLANUITE
03-23-2004, 10:08 AM
Yo Nov@ !! koman ilé ?? :thumbsup:

arrèt fé linteressant ek out scorpion la mok !!

It looks very nice !!
Good Work gratel !!

Go on like that !! :buttrock:

I love this man !!

jawine
03-23-2004, 11:37 AM
Uhm i saw someone making a human enhanced for fighting with a similiar design:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&postid=1221597#post1221597

Also a human with a mechanical lower-body, and I guess more people have made things like those so i think you need to go towards something humurous or try to give him something special or the concept might not be original enough :)

fredconv
03-24-2004, 04:37 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1080106650_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1080106650_large.jpg)

hi all

thanks for all your comments ^^

even if it s not really original, here s an advance version of my sketch for my scorpio killer man.
a powerful killer with scoprio body to climb anywhere, 6 "feet" to run faster or to jump higher (yes i know a scorpio can t jump :p) and upgrade arms.. the things coming out of his head are like octopus "mechanical arms"

i don t think i will change my idea cause all this details(argh) makes me mad and i dont want to redo them :p

tell me about it guys ^^
C&C welcome

good luck all
ciao

viag
03-24-2004, 07:17 AM
hey i really like the amount of details , nice style ! keep the good work !

FrankyMo
03-24-2004, 11:27 AM
Really like your last sketch, i like the details you put in it, even if it's hard to read the image cos of that...

Good luck!!! :)

botumys
03-24-2004, 07:01 PM
salut Nova, génial ton dessin, vraiment du bon boulot!
Bonne continuation pour la suite!

Heureusement que je ne suis pas en 2D :beer:

BebeteLANUITE
03-26-2004, 11:15 AM
Hello Nov@ !! :thumbsup:

Oh god !! :eek:
there is a mega lot of details !!

are you well ?? :p

Don't hesitate to use atmospheric perpective to help the reading of your image. i think for the legs.

Very cool man !!
Go on like that !!
:beer:

Madpear
03-26-2004, 02:22 PM
Amazing level of detail :eek:
Keep on :thumbsup:

Newke
03-26-2004, 05:35 PM
Never saw such a huge amount of details :eek:
Wow !!

fredconv
03-28-2004, 06:25 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1080501913_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1080501913_large.jpg)

hi guys ^^

i m still on the scorpio killer
for the moment i m focussing on the main character but i wonder if i ll add a bg or other characterin the scene ^^
any ideas ?
C&C are always welcome

BazaL
03-28-2004, 07:15 PM
Je kiffe trop Nov@ :drool: , c'est trop beau, j'adore le style et c'est trop détaillé :eek:

La suite, bonne chance ;)

NinjaA55N
03-28-2004, 07:19 PM
Hm... Im not sure if that kind level of details is really needed. The character is to complex and its hard to watch that kind of pic.. the eye goes up and down, all around, so the viewer doesnt see the whole picture and meaning of it.

JasonChan
03-28-2004, 08:35 PM
First off, wow:eek: That's a lot of detail :p

Anyway, if he's a killer, howabout adding a body? You could use some more organic, not so busy areas in your image. The machine parts are really intense right now and some contrasting elements might work well with that.

Avatarr
03-28-2004, 09:58 PM
Must be impressed by the level of detail. And there is a manga feel in the face of the character. You'll have a blast coloring this! Best of luck!

fredconv
03-29-2004, 03:01 AM
hi

thanks for all your comments i do really appreciate the feedback

@Bazal: merci bcp ;) vais essayer de pas rater la partie couleur ^^'


@NinjaAssn: for the details, sure there are lot of them. but i think i ll go easier while coloring some part just to make them less attracting for the eye ^^' don t know how i m going to do that yet but i ll try ^^ the sketch was an opportunuty to make a complex character , something i ve never done before ^_^
for the bg and other characters i ll go lighter on the details for sure :thumbsup:

@Evil Gerbil: maybe the mechanical part takes too much place on the character :shrug: . perhaps i ll cover somes parts with flesh to contrast it , but i don t know where to put them yet ^^' .i ll think about it .but where can i add flesh on a scorpio body ?

@Avatar: thanks man
the manga inspiration is here for sure hihi
as i ve never take any drawing study, i ve learn by myself watching and reading mangas and comics. you can feel it in my draws-> not that bad but also not that good ^^'


thanks again and good luck for your challenge
:beer:

BebeteLANUITE
03-29-2004, 04:11 AM
Atmospheric perspective, i said !! :thumbsup:

:beer:

fredconv
03-31-2004, 11:23 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1080735829_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1080735829_large.jpg)

hi guys
i m thinking of another stance for my pic. for the moment i dont know which one to choose but maybe i ll go on this one or mix the two....

tell me about it or maybe got a better stance ^^

C&C are still welcomed

^____^

bonestudio
03-31-2004, 03:25 PM
Great sense of detail!!!!

But I think there was more strenght in your second sketches which was very intense

fredconv
04-07-2004, 02:10 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1081347020_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1081347020_large.jpg)

hi
well here is the lineart for my killer.. maybe i ll add the girl killer in the bg, i m thinking about it ...
thanks for all C&C
more coming ^^

Slav
04-07-2004, 06:25 PM
great stuff mate. i really like the hair and the flow of the character. and you have quite the details on the legs. i am sure there is a great story behind it all aswell.

Megavince
04-08-2004, 10:35 AM
yo man! i really like your concept.
but why don't you come with us for the challenge 3D
oh it's because you've got a lot of details
:hmm:
perde la bec quoué:eek:

bonestudio
04-08-2004, 04:18 PM
This is just great !!

I'd like to see some colors now ;)

batmel
04-08-2004, 08:10 PM
OK.. that is a verrrry detailed drawings.. I always wonder what kinda of patience you need to draw this!! lol
I like the concept, I think it's a good idea !

see ya

fredconv
04-22-2004, 09:32 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1082626326_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1082626326_large.jpg)

hi guys
i ve started to color the male killer for the moment .. here's the first result... ^^'

ill keep on posting update :)

see ya all :)

neandertal
04-22-2004, 06:40 PM
Mr Convert en personne :applause:
Ts ts ts... Comme d'hab, tu arraches. Heureusement que t'es pas dans le contest 3D, je crois que je me retirerais tout de suite :p
Bonne chance... Quoique je me demande si tu en as vraiment besoin ;)

Holà, j'ai encore des progrès à faire moi... :shrug:

masahiro
04-22-2004, 11:55 PM
Nice concept! I like the detail part a lot. Wish to see more angle of shots of this character! :p Good work!

cabertevon
04-27-2004, 02:13 PM
Von to Nov@...........You are a KILLER...

Stunning work, Fred.


http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?postid=1294224#post1294224

MOA[F2d]
04-27-2004, 02:30 PM
decidement les potes de néandertale sont de véritables killer !
superbe ! hate de voir la suite :thumbsup:

Megavince
05-03-2004, 10:35 AM
Allé NOVA !!! montre la puissance MADE IN REUNION on te suit MAN!
Sa déchire grave la couleur!!!!!!!!!!

:buttrock: :buttrock:

OKMER
05-03-2004, 01:45 PM
:surprised wooow les détails!!!Impatient de voir comment tu vas traiter ca evec les couleurs!!!!

Gullum
05-26-2004, 12:11 AM
Awesome work :thumbsup: sooo detailed :bowdown:

fredconv
06-18-2004, 02:50 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1087570257_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1087570257_large.jpg)

the final coloring of the scorpio i suppose ^^

fredconv
06-18-2004, 02:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1087570481_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/1740/1740_1087570481_large.jpg)

here is the final one, no more changes i think ^^'
was caught by time ^^' erf wish i had more vacancy before to finish it as i wishes !

i ve come to this and for a first contest ever hope it ll be good enough

hope you ll like it
c&c are welcome ^^
still can change the final tiff one ^^' maybe ?lol

good luck to all:beer:

fredconv
06-19-2004, 08:53 AM
just to say I ve a put some minor change on the final tiff picture ^^

MrFreeman
06-20-2004, 10:52 AM
Great concept and love the attention to detail. Would have loved to see this within an environment, but great final image regardless.

yet another entry that I've not had the luck to discover until now...good luck in the next stage and congratulations on the work :applause: :thumbsup: :applause:

VelvetDragon
06-20-2004, 07:52 PM
Well... Impressive work !
You did it very well with the coloring of your image ! :)

I really like the huge amount of detail and how you managed to handle it in such a restricted time.

You're a real Killer Nov@ !

fredconv
06-22-2004, 10:38 AM
hi ^^

thanks a lot for all your support
i wish you good luck on your challenge post if you did one :)

Merci velvet ca fait plaisir ^^ dommage que t ai pas pus finir ton chalenge ...

i hope the bg doesnt look too white ^^'

see you guys and GOOOUUUUDDAAAALEUUUKEEEEUUUUHHHH (a la francaise tien :P)

STARBUCK
06-23-2004, 08:13 AM
Je viens de voir tes images : j'adore, continue!:bounce:
Il te reste un peu de temps avant la fin du challenge : tu pourrais essayer une petite mise en scene peut etre? (décor)
Bonne chance et à+

rollmops
06-23-2004, 09:00 AM
Nice! Nov@

I enjoy the concept and the way you do it!
BUT: At first look I'm a bit confused about the shadow.
The layer shadow should be much more blured. ( progressively with distance :) ) . This way you'll give more contrast between the soft shadow and the hard shape.
Good luck!

fredconv
06-23-2004, 07:18 PM
Merci merci
thanks for comments ^^
i dont have enough free time to make change for the challenge , what a shame
but i ll make them and post it for the 2d gallery if it s good enough ^^

thanks again ^^

londero
06-23-2004, 09:29 PM
great work dude!

force!

Londero.

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=141195&page=18&pp=15 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=141195&page=18&pp=15)

londero
06-24-2004, 07:34 PM
Hei, thanks for post in the TEMPLAR project!:)

your words are a incentive to me. Really, thanks dude!

your job is so detailed, I love this level of good and very expressive mechanisms... and the scorpion idea... wow!

well, I'm back to work now.

Force to you!

Londero

[ what you think about the LUXURY evil??? ]
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=141195&page=18&pp=15 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=141195&page=18&pp=15)

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