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3D-Cloud
03-17-2004, 09:12 AM
Claudio Pavan has entered the Machineflesh 3D Challenge.

3D-Cloud
03-18-2004, 08:07 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1079600850_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1079600850_large.jpg)

Will probably change as i get into it.....

3D-Cloud
03-22-2004, 11:07 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1079957226_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1079957226_large.jpg)

the head so far.

3D-Cloud
03-22-2004, 11:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1079957538_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1079957538_large.jpg)

Starting to look more the way he should..

3D-Cloud
03-22-2004, 12:22 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1079961750_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1079961750_large.jpg)

eye opener :)

RaeTracer
03-22-2004, 01:39 PM
Aaarrgh painful! Nice modeling so far... it kind of reminds me of the Todd McFarlane "Tortured Souls" figures, if you've ever seen those.

Do you have any backstory on this guy? I'd like to know more about why he's like this. Self-inflicted you say...?

marugie
03-23-2004, 06:56 AM
Looking good so far mate.

Ravendsg
03-23-2004, 07:10 AM
Really nice man!! :applause:
I esp like his "expression" :thumbsup:

Raymond

3D-Cloud
03-23-2004, 01:27 PM
Ok well I'm not much of a story teller... But here are my thoughts on the matter of why he is in this position.
I thought it would a good way to punish him for the bad deeds that he has done in his life....But at the same time it is him alone that does the punishing...e.g.. This advanced mind reading device is directly implanted in his brain( hence the head plate thing) and this can pick up on any bad thoughts or impure emotions. And intern apply the necessary punishment be it a poke in the eye or a stretch of the nostril.
Then again it could also be totally self inflicted in the sense that he rigged it all up to himself cause he is angry at the way he has lived his life of weakness and now he must cleanse his impure weak flesh..... or something like that.
anyway I think it would be better if you all give him your own reason why he is in the dilemma that he is in..... We all feel guilty about something ;).

3D-Cloud
03-24-2004, 06:30 PM
http://www.fictionfactory.co.za/CGTalk/progress.jpg

tlgp
03-24-2004, 06:41 PM
Ouch! Ouch!
Man, that is just painful especially those chains!!
And yet, I continue to look at it.
The modeling is coming very nicely. I like lots. I also like the story.
Waitin' to see more.
I do, however, hope this never becomes reality b/c God help me!
Pretty work, hon!

-mackey

3D-Cloud
03-25-2004, 01:28 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1080224881_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1080224881_large.jpg)

Here comes his body parts......

peanut
03-25-2004, 03:31 PM
woow wooow woow,keep it up nice nice nice :)

soapy
03-25-2004, 05:13 PM
haha. Thats pretty funny. Nice modeling. I guess it was either this or hire one of the three stooges to hang around poking him in the eye...

ufotung
03-25-2004, 05:21 PM
Funny expression !
The drawing is interesting , the model is great too .

3D-Cloud
03-26-2004, 06:17 AM
Glad to see you guys enjoying it . :bounce:

3D-Cloud
03-29-2004, 12:02 PM
http://www.fictionfactory.co.za/CGTalk/finger.jpg

aphexx
03-29-2004, 12:16 PM
hi 3d cloud. nice modeling. the small chains and and hooks somehow made me think of "hellraiser" :)

scary thing.

i think the small chain, that is connected from his mouth to eye, should be mounted on the helmet, to give more realism to the physical behaviour of the corner of mouth.
or place one more chain in the middle of the chain, that is connected to the helmet.

perhaps you can stretch the skin just a littlebut more, or let it even be a bit torn

also a good idea could be to open the mouth very wide (or even break his jawbone), through a chain, and then do something painful with his tongue...

well, just an idea :)

cu
sascha

slinki
03-29-2004, 12:24 PM
looks great so far.keep going.can't wait to see how much more pain he's gonna endure.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

3D-Cloud
03-29-2004, 01:01 PM
Yeah you right about the chains I think I need to some how connect them to the helmet to justify the mouth pull....hmmm I will work on it ...... As for broken Jaw ...Ouch! I think I'm gonna stay away from broken bones.

Thanks for the input.

3D-Cloud
03-29-2004, 01:16 PM
http://www.fictionfactory.co.za/CGTalk/chains.jpg

Fixed the chains

3D-Cloud
03-30-2004, 09:16 PM
Ok he is getting there, cant wait to start texturing him soon.

http://www.fictionfactory.co.za/CGTalk/almost.jpg

pigwater
03-31-2004, 02:07 AM
looks good and painful ... staying really close to the sketch to ... gotta love them torture devices for BAD people

fun stuff :thumbsup:

BaronVonWink
03-31-2004, 02:30 AM
Eyoww! this is just insane! you have some crazy detail going on there:thumbsup:

Strang
03-31-2004, 03:51 AM
you freak...

looks good...

his face looks funny

-Strang

3D-Cloud
04-02-2004, 03:12 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1080922362_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1080922362_large.jpg)

Started texturing the poor soul... well his head at least... still need to work on a shader but for now im only interested in the texture.

Big Man
04-02-2004, 08:38 PM
WICKED!

tlgp
04-02-2004, 11:35 PM
Its lookin' good!
I would make the metal not so pretty lookin' maybe add some flesh/blood stains on it and the chains!
I know you just started texturing just some suggestions.
Oh, and the eye, I believe since it is always exposed to the air that it would be shriveled up and dry.
Excellent work!

JamesMK
04-03-2004, 08:17 AM
Waahaa! Cool stuff going on here... You really enjoy torturing this poor model I see :D My favourite detail would be that little contraption forcing his index finger backwards in a weird bone-breaking angle - absolutely a very sick idea.

Some of the mechanical parts look a bit to smooth and soft-edgy to me at this point though - I wouldn't expect manufacturers of torture equipment to bother with protectively soft edges and corners on their stuff, but rather leave things rough and sharp to inflict even more pain....

Aside from that::::: :thumbsup:

shinjuku
05-03-2004, 12:56 AM
ill.sic.demented.
at home.
quite a killer.
thrill spill on blood floor
modeller.
keep it up.

pixeljunkynz
05-03-2004, 01:39 AM
beautiful

if you add hair, add it in chunks. Maybe one small chunk of hair. He's had a hell of a time, maybe he should be missing a finger or two. Remove a few teeth, if not all of them, and staple his tongue to his chest. :applause:

or not....

3D-Cloud
05-18-2004, 03:45 PM
Ok I finally have some time to do some work on my guy ...been really busy at work.

here is a texture update. I like the broken tooth suggestion too :).

http://www.fictionfactory.co.za/CGTalk/tex003.jpg

slinki
05-18-2004, 05:12 PM
dude looking great.only one thing though.he needs organs inside the rib cage. awesome work none the less.:buttrock: :buttrock: :beer:

3D-Cloud
05-19-2004, 07:24 AM
dont worry he will have his insides soon enough :)

3D-Cloud
05-19-2004, 05:50 PM
http://www.fictionfactory.co.za/CGTalk/update19_05.jpg

3D-Cloud
05-21-2004, 10:18 AM
Ok he is pretty much done....Time to final render.

3D-Cloud
05-21-2004, 01:34 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085146495_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085146495_large.jpg)

Most the point lights are for spectular.
Im not using FG or GI.

3D-Cloud
05-21-2004, 01:39 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085146770_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085146770_large.jpg)

Ok this is what he looks like before comp.

3D-Cloud
05-21-2004, 01:48 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085147286_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085147286_large.jpg)

Comp is very simple...3 layers and a bit of glow on my highlights.
Also a bit of grain added...Grain is my friend:).

3D-Cloud
05-21-2004, 01:52 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085147523_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085147523_large.jpg)

This is it...

3D-Cloud
05-21-2004, 03:16 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085152598_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/1733/1733_1085152598_large.jpg)

Light from below

Russo
05-22-2004, 07:50 PM
very interesting in my opinion.. scary :)

Dutchman
05-22-2004, 07:54 PM
WOW! Scary! I think a good CG artist is somebody who can scare away people with there awesome skills :surprised :rolleyes: ... If I'm right you're an incredibly good CG artist... :p

slinki
05-23-2004, 08:38 AM
Well done my son. Looks absolutely scary beautiful . Good luck with the challenge.:thumbsup: :applause: :buttrock:

batavia
05-23-2004, 11:03 AM
I love the texturing..you really did bring the gory-ness to it. Go ahead and print out a blowup poster and stick it on your living room wall.

3D-Cloud
05-23-2004, 11:17 AM
Thanks for all your kind words and some great ideas to help it along....
all the best to everyone....
:buttrock:

jddog
05-23-2004, 02:57 PM
:argh: whooaa, really scary ! Absolutely a wonderful texture work, congrats... by the way is an excellent concept/idea... really wiked...

:applause:

jdd

Xenite
06-15-2004, 04:14 PM
:cry: mommy, the man scared me :cry:


god damn its so god damn cool, really realistic...

i could pee my pants in a min.

:bowdown:

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