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Amilton Diesel
03-17-2004, 01:21 AM
This is a banner for a celebration. The theme is "you are not alone". It seems Jesus always helps everyone as you can see. I don't have much experience in digital painting, so every comment is welcome. Made in Photoshop 6, with a mouse.

http://www.vermyhole.ubbi.com.br/forum/art12.jpg

Draw by hand

http://www.cgdodiesel.hpg.com.br/sketch.jpg

NinjaSuz
03-17-2004, 01:46 AM
Hmm.. it's very soft. Nice warm colors.

In your sketch, it appears as if Jesus is looking at the woman. In the color image, it looks like he's staring off in a different direction. To me, the image could be improved if Jesus was looking at the woman. It would reflect his caring and his focus on people, per say.

I would also put an ellipses after the word 'alone.' Such as, alone...

But that's just my 2 cents. The ellipses kind of implies an after thought (sort of).

"You are not alone..."
"...because Jesus is with you."

Haha :p I hope that made sense.

Anyway :thumbsup:

giron
03-17-2004, 02:39 AM
it looks like his fingers on his right hand are too long and his fingers on his left hand dont look like the have joints.

other than that it looks good.:D

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