A 2d/3d short film with mild nudity.............

[icky]

I just noticed that my links weren't quite the way they should be. I've fixed them now so you should be able to download my animation :)

[Pentagramma]

Hi there Ricky,

Excellent work!:) Very classic animation, and the design is gorgeous.
What did you do in 3d? Sets, props?

See ya,

[Judas_Pilate]

awesome job on the animation, but I think my favourate part was the credits :p

[Grey]

<---just liked the story, thought it was cool :D

[j00st81]

hehe, the credits made me laugh, the story didn't sorry:rolleyes:

though I think u are a quite good animator, at some points it even looked a bit disney to me (wich is good :D)

bravo :beer:

[bentllama]

I did not like it at all. I thought the animation was horrible and the design of the characters was poor. The only thing that stood out were the backgrounds. The BG's were acceptable but only because they had design elements borrowed from Disney's Hercules.

I admire the effort put into the piece...

[Clockwork]

Ouch^

I think it's a great starting piece. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to a more refined piece next time (I thought the animation on Adam was pretty well done!)

Great Work!

[mushroomgod]

i liked it, all looked good, and considering its one of your first work then a realy well done job :)


as for bentllama, all i can say is you cant please all of the people all of the time :(

[wedge]

i wonder how you did the voice for venus........

i loved it, i thought it was cute, very original, and you GOTTA love the credits ;)

[bentllama]

Originally posted by mushroomgod
as for bentllama, all i can say is you cant please all of the people all of the time :(

after all, this is the CRITIQUES forum... :)

cheers icky! :beer:

[Creature]

It askes me for a password when I want to access the site?

[icky]

Sorry, Sorry, Sorry! I've broken a few rules and my site has been taken off the net :( Sorry to Creature and anyone else having probs with downloading my film...

Pentagramma > Thank you! I know I can be confusing at times... I mean cg not 3d (a la Wallance and Grommit)Opps! :)

Judas_Pilate and j00st81 > Yeah the credits are probably the most 'Egotistical' part. Funny cos they were the easiest part!

Grey > :)

bentllama > I respect that you didn't like my film, but go easy on the insults, please. I worked my ass off on that thing ;)

Clockwork > Thanks! My next film is the biggy. It's my dgree film and it's gonna be all cg! I have some great people giving me advise and opinions already about the story.

mushroomgod > Thanks Mushroomgod. Hey I never knew there was such a god? I wooda put you in my film if I'd known!

wgeddes > My girlfriend did the voice of Venus. I did the rest. You should see the ref vids that I shot of me being Venus. But you won't. Nobody see's an animators ref vids! Far to silly!

Well, thank y'al so far. If I get my site back together again then I look foward to more opinions

:thumbsup:

[bentllama]

Originally posted by icky
bentllama > I respect that you didn't like my film, but go easy on the insults, please. I worked my ass off on that thing ;)



I did say that I admire the effort you put into the piece... It was not meant to be an insult, just a hard crit and my un-pandering opinion... sorry to see that your site is down...

[icky]

No worries bentllama :)

What really sucks about having my acount stopped, is those monsters have taken my email away too! I'll get it back tho. Hey, bentllama I went to your site and I like those 'sketchbook' drawings of yours. Nice fluidity about them. :thumbsup:

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