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Kraven
03-13-2004, 08:10 PM
Hi,

i built this character for a mod i'd joined.
www.hdang.com

http://www.hdang.com/ScreenShots/german01.jpg
http://www.hdang.com/ScreenShots/german02.jpg
http://www.hdang.com/ScreenShots/german03.jpg
http://www.hdang.com/ScreenShots/german04.jpg

TRyanD
03-13-2004, 08:23 PM
Nice job :)

Textures seem a bit too nice and clean or something though, not dark enough, dirty enough or something. His arms seem a bit thin too. I dont like the helmet skin :(

pseudoBug
03-13-2004, 09:44 PM
Yeah, the textures need some color/contrast/detail attention.

The helmet texture needs to be rethought. What exactly is the texture supposed to be? The helmet also needs to be remodeled. It's a bit too round and wide at the top. Needs some other tweaks here and there. Find some good references from all angles for that helmet.

The face could probably use a little texture work as well, It feels a little toy like right now.

Other than that, Nice job, Keep tweaking and you'll have a great model.

Matt
03-14-2004, 10:24 AM
Originally posted by TRyanD
Nice job :)

Textures seem a bit too nice and clean or something though, not dark enough, dirty enough or something. His arms seem a bit thin too. I dont like the helmet skin :(

I'd say the thing that needs the most attention are the addition of details, such as seams and more wrinkles.

The whole thing needs weathered badly. They went out for days at a time without bathing and shaving in some cases.

amola2k
03-20-2004, 06:30 PM
looking pretty cool so far
tho i agree with matt
it should be a bit more dirty
cheers

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