View Full Version : Basilic, Luciano Neves (3D)
03-11-2004, 09:43 PM
some times ago I posted one image with the name Cathedral here, now with a new composition, sky and illumination I am posting this, please tell me how it is?
little bit more light
03-11-2004, 09:57 PM
Other than having your shadows way too black (they look almost pure black int he really dark places), great piece. Lighten those ultra black spots up a bit and it should be great. The sky is a bit off as well from the perspective.
03-11-2004, 09:58 PM
gr8t modelling, but i think the illumination could have more work, altough its a cloudy day u should hav more contrast on the light...just my opinion :)
simply impressive....:applause: :applause: :applause:
03-12-2004, 08:33 AM
great work! :thumbsup:
03-12-2004, 09:08 AM
Outstanding work but I have to agree about the shadows that are way to black is some areas!
Other than that it is a great image!
03-12-2004, 12:56 PM
Wow, that's a beautiful building. Very nice! I agree about the shadows. :)
03-12-2004, 01:55 PM
Great Work MAN!!!:buttrock:
03-12-2004, 02:05 PM
03-12-2004, 02:07 PM
i think im going to jump on the ban wagon and say that the shadows are a little too dark. but if you lighten them up a bit, i can only say, front page:buttrock: nice work and keep it comming
03-12-2004, 02:29 PM
That test with yellow light is very nice, the big one has a very boring light setup.
03-12-2004, 02:41 PM
Excelent job on that modeling.
But i don´t get it if it´s just my opinion or the building seems
sligthly less vertical. something like ( \ ) not ( | ).
03-12-2004, 02:46 PM
Olá Portugal, muito obrigado.
03-12-2004, 02:53 PM
Nice model and your textures are good but your lighting is very very dull. Make it more interesting!
I'm afraid i won't agree with the shadows crit: they r ok as they r.
The pic looks just amazing, and the light may seem dull to many, but fantastic to some, wich is my case ;)
Brilliant work! U sure do have my vote!:thumbsup:
03-12-2004, 03:54 PM
Legal Luciano , os detalhes estão impressionantes .
03-12-2004, 04:32 PM
Muito obrigado BartokDesign
03-12-2004, 04:35 PM
hehe well done!
I live in Montmartre in a street just behind the cathedral
if you need reference photos just ask I'll do them fo you ;)
03-12-2004, 04:36 PM
Thanks friend Emrah
03-12-2004, 04:46 PM
Parabéns, trabalho excelente! :thumbsup:
De onde você é? Trabalha em que empresa?
03-12-2004, 07:22 PM
Totally stunning! :bowdown: :buttrock:
03-12-2004, 08:29 PM
Hi friends, now the wire:thumbsup:
03-12-2004, 10:54 PM
I believe from a lighters perspective that you've caught the mood very well. The scene may look a bit flat but thats what rainy days tend to do in pictures. One thing I would suggest however, is to throw some pieces of geometry in there, other buildings, to give the scene a bit more depth. And if you've got the time, maybe some rain and mourners attending a funeral or something will really help set the mood. Hope this helps.
03-13-2004, 12:04 AM
Stunning image. Very nice work. :thumbsup:
03-13-2004, 05:50 AM
This is amazing. I actually think the blackness of the shadows cast an eerie tone to the Cathedral. Sort of a Horrific aura, the kind of thing you would find in a horror movie, or dark gothic film.
The detail and magnitude of the modeling displayed in this piece is stunnung.
03-13-2004, 10:43 AM
Impressive work ! I found textures really beutiful and amazing the mesh view.
03-13-2004, 11:10 AM
Brilliant!!!!...nothing more to say:thumbsup:
03-13-2004, 11:16 AM
Lovely, although I think as a piece it would look nicer with some kind of sunlight, to accentuate all the detail. Your test rendering with the evening light is a more interesting light scheme.
I still love the image though, 4 stars from me! :wise:
03-13-2004, 12:28 PM
i only miss some people here or perhaps trees, it looks "empty" somehow.
but anyhow good texture-work. :)
03-13-2004, 01:18 PM
just amazing :applause: :thumbsup:
03-13-2004, 01:24 PM
I think the image is really fantastic. It's always nice to see more definition on models, especially architecture, but the overcast feeling is great as well.
What would be really great on the overcast version is if you had some light eminating from within. It would help define the structure some more and make the image a lot more interesting.
03-13-2004, 01:27 PM
voçe tem uma imagem bem feita. a luz é muita bonita. eu acho que o que os outros tentarem diser é que as janelas são pretas de mais. tal vez é por que não tem nada para refletir. o céu deve iluminar as janelas suficientemente. nos renders de baixo, a luz é boa, fora das janelas. a única coisa é a perspectiva. agora dá a sentida que o edifício está caindo para a esquerda. usa um focal length maior, 90mm por exemplo. daria a impressão que é mais reto
desculpe meu esforço de escrever em português, faz um bom tempo que estava no brasil :D
03-13-2004, 02:31 PM
the only thing i see wrong with it is the lack of darker areas where rain would drip off causing the gray of the brick to a darker dingier gray.
Other than that, Great FREAKIN JOB!!
03-13-2004, 02:45 PM
03-13-2004, 03:08 PM
If you check the link he gives..you`ll find some more renders with more realistic enviroments.
03-13-2004, 04:24 PM
03-13-2004, 05:28 PM
What a wonderful piece of modeling and texturing :bowdown:
To make it slightly better (I still think the sky doesn't agree with the current state of lighting of the cathedral) some rain effects and some people mourning in front of the cathedral would be .. Wonderful!
Can't wait to see more stuff from you :)
03-13-2004, 05:47 PM
Cara ficou excelente seu projeto:bowdown:
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03-13-2004, 06:55 PM
I was watching at ur render and noticed something really quickly, ur model is all good.....but ur model's edge is not smooth which make ur image a bit fake.
buy youself a video card with AA and AF feature...
and the model is amazing though...=D
03-13-2004, 06:59 PM
I will create a cathedral in this few week for assignment, and this giV some inspiration to me.
Very nice modeling and texturing:thumbsup:
03-13-2004, 07:31 PM
the pageing is not too good, the object you want to display should be a lot further from the viewer.
the perspective vamera you are using is painfully distording the angles of the building giving it a dinamic look which in my op. is not good at all for a catheral.
i don't know how composed this piece of architecture maybe it was a famous architect along the course of history, but judging from where architecture stand today this is what i have to say:
- there is a rythem of 5 penetrations along the side of the building, that's not very good.
- there is a eterogen rythem of 3 penetrations on the front facade with the middle penetration standing out, this rythem should be evident in the volumery as well. maybe there is...
- i don't think i'm able to comment on that
in any case i think there is too much 'noise', i'm curious though who made this. hope i wasn't an ass :D
technically speaking, it's excellent.
hope u enjoy my post
03-13-2004, 07:38 PM
ah! just been to your site hahha :D
seen the upper view perspective
the main vertical dominant rises too abruptly from the main hall of the structure, it needs a 'prelude' volume
03-13-2004, 08:18 PM
Ae Luciano Blz!
Cara casca grossa essa sua imagem! Muito bom esse trabalho, modelagem, textura e composição nota 10:bowdown:
Parabéns pelo trabalho ótimo trabalho! :bowdown:
Um grande abraço.
03-13-2004, 08:38 PM
holy crap that's awesome :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:
03-13-2004, 08:43 PM
hrmm..I was going to say that there was something wrong with the Fence illumination..for some reason that thing just jumped out of the picture, looked a bit out of place.....odd it hasnt been mentioned more IMHO.
03-13-2004, 09:35 PM
brilliant piece of architecture
I don't understand why you'd say that the lighting 'isnt' dynamic enough'.... not everything has to be lite by orange and purple lights and set at night with laneterns and shit. It's realistic to an overcast day. I like it a lot.
03-13-2004, 10:20 PM
Really cool! I see that every day out my window!!! (No kidding) :)
03-13-2004, 10:48 PM
Very nice. I do think this could hold its own if thrown into a live-action shot.
But you do have some unresolved composition issues. Nothing a move of the camera wouldn't fix, thanks to the medium, but still an issue non-the-less. Depending on what you want, you can either take Raul's advice and move the camera back enough to straighten the lines and give us a full view. That is good if you want us to be more objective or technical. The other is to move in even closer (or better yet, just crop the image) so that the dome is cut off at least a quarter of the way. Right now we're left wondering just what is at the very tip-top of this thing, which, unless you intend to reveal something odd is infact on the tip of the building, is distracting us from the rest of it. Cutting more off by putting the camera closer will make it more natural, since people rarely walk around looking up at stuff, but will still give us enough to see that this is big and important. At least, that's the theory.
I hope this helps a bit. Overall, you've got nothing to worry about. The model, the lights, and for the most part the textures are all solid work; anyway, in the real world it's the DP and the director who dictates where the camera goes.
03-13-2004, 11:03 PM
This looks amazing.
03-14-2004, 12:12 AM
03-14-2004, 12:18 AM
03-14-2004, 12:30 AM
excellent, very impressive!:thumbsup:
03-14-2004, 05:14 AM
Thank you very much my friends, tomorrow I will be answering all of the e-mails and inserting one more test image.
- Thank you very much
- Merci beaucoup
- Danke schön
- Grazie mille
- Muchas gracias
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03-14-2004, 05:58 AM
:bounce: New images, old test.
03-14-2004, 06:09 AM
Parabéns Luciano! Excelente trabalho :buttrock:
I agree with some comments about the "too black areas". But looks really like a photo (maybe not the real thing, but A PERFECT PHOTO).
So, AWESOME PHOTOREALISTIC WORK!!!
03-14-2004, 08:11 AM
Too dark even in the one with more light.. Maybe it is to set a mood but I'd prefer a more exposed one, still having a cloudy day feel.
Another thing I noticed immediately is the mirrored textures on the front wall...
Keep up the good work!
:bounce: :thumbsup: :bounce:
wow, Vary impressive .
03-14-2004, 12:17 PM
Great job man i Think that lightning are super, I like this dark ancient atmosphere....
03-14-2004, 02:34 PM
:bounce: great still with a very high qualiti lighting!!!
03-14-2004, 05:56 PM
Ah, nice lighting
p.s. I do think the texturing is nice in respect to the feel of the surfaces and the bump. However, I do see some repeating and reused textures in obvious places. Other than all of that, I likey...
03-14-2004, 07:08 PM
Tomorrow I will put here one camera animation in turn of the basilica await almost finish:bounce:
03-14-2004, 08:16 PM
Its fascinating man, but you really should take it into a real enviorment.
03-14-2004, 09:34 PM
beautiful piece....i love it:beer:
03-15-2004, 01:48 PM
animation wire almost finish.
03-15-2004, 02:04 PM
AEEEEEEEEE!! tá aprendendo, hein! Ficou boa essa fota da igreja...
I´m kidding! It´s a masterpiece! It´s a great work or art! It´s an honor to have such a professional as you are working here in our company! Congratulations once again...
Luiz Felippe Santos Cavalcanti
03-16-2004, 02:24 PM
As I made the promise here it is the link for the animation test for the "basilic wire"
Thakns again everyone:thumbsup:
03-16-2004, 07:36 PM
My second post..
doing anything about the mirrored textures?
also, more exposure, reminding you again! (it is a cloudy day but you can still burn your film if you keep the exposure long enough, just like you can get a dark image ona very sunny day with ultra low exposure., you have to be balanced, this is dark..
03-16-2004, 07:47 PM
I will making little changes this week, about windows and skies...somethings...then when it is ready I call you.
03-18-2004, 07:32 AM
I don't care what they say, but...
You should be banned here for posting a picture as a 3D work!!! this is a photograph! A PHOTOGRAPH!!!
A photograph of a cathedral on a cloudy day!!!
by the way, how did u make the sky look out of perspective? You're a very clever photographer...
No, really. If THIS is a 3D work, i don't care if it's too dark but it's one heck of a photorealistic one!
if you're a cg artist, keep this up! Good one! If you're a photographer, (i'm not saying you're one), keep it up as well, but get outta here!!! But of course, i'm pretty sure you're an honest person posting a 3D image in a 3D forum. hehehe. Your picture... i mean 3D image... is pretty unbelievable. :eek:
03-18-2004, 01:41 PM
03-18-2004, 02:45 PM
wow.... i'm impresed. Magnificent modeling & texturing. Personally i think it's great !
03-21-2004, 01:54 AM
I do like this piece, but the shadows look somehow ~ static ~ and I don't get a feel of depth.
Looks like a shot from a video game.
But good work all the same.
Yes work serious!!! :thumbsup:
03-22-2004, 05:58 PM
i like ur old romance style architecture... show the complexity of it, the global illuminassion seems dun have much contrast on it... i would like to c ur wireframe...but really make me impressive of ur effort on it.... :thumbsup:
03-23-2004, 06:22 PM
great work Luciano Neves,
liked everything from the modeling to texturing to lighting the scene, amazing detail. where did you get this design of the cathedral? did you make it your self or composed it seeing other cathedral? great again ...
03-23-2004, 07:50 PM
03-24-2004, 01:19 AM
Thanks a lot:beer:
03-25-2004, 01:01 AM
Great Man !!! the details are amazing ....
03-26-2004, 01:18 AM
here one more test shader:thumbsup:
08-14-2004, 05:48 PM
First I would like to thank the every team of Ballistic for doing an excellent work and for the invitation to go Siggraph2004 and also to thank all friends.
Now we can check the image " The Basilic " in the book Elemental in the category Master Environment:thumbsup:
Thanks a lot:bounce:
I have seen your work so many times.....but everytime I still get impressed.
02-27-2006, 08:00 PM
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