WIP-Female Warrior - 3DSMAX

[psyc3d]

http://members.shaw.ca/mchitty/images/cap04.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/mchitty/images/cap05.jpg

thanks

[ryusen]

she's a bit sagging.. but that's probably due to not wearing a bra most of the times in the battle..

[Panupat]

I think the Boobs are too low but I am not sure. hmm I think her breasts are fine. But look at the space from her breasts to her clavicle. That's way too much distance. Try move everything above her breasts (arm, shoulder, clavicle, head) down lower in photoshop and see how they look.

[cheybea]

yeah, i'd say the "twins" are a tad bit low...
cool skirt..very sexy...i want one!

[McSexy]

Hi psyc3d

I would say the area from her neck to her breasts needs to be shortened a bit.
Did you use refrance photo for the body? If not... you could but a refrence photo in there and adjust her if needed.
The feet (ancle or toe area) need a little tweeking aswell.

Good job

[psyc3d]

Thanks for all the critiques so far.

I have moved the breasts up a little and added some more detail to the armour I will repost as soon as I get some more tweaks done.

Thanks again for the help

[psyc3d]

here is an updated image. I decided to render this one with a flat material on it.


http://members.shaw.ca/mchitty/images/renderedbraz.jpg

[cgg]

its good you moved the breasts up a little bit , its lookin good now.

[marc001]

1. Toes are straight across. Digits of both hands and feet should be arranged in an arch.
2. Corners of the mouth are sharp. Actually In the open position the corners never come to a point. The lips are blunt in the corners in the closed mouth pose.
3. The crease between the inner corner of the eye and the bridge of nose shouldn't be there.
4. The belt is fastened incorrectly.
5. Is she left, or right handed? Depending on which is the sword arm. the other will be used as a shield arm, the one with the armor.

[psyc3d]

thanks mark 001 I did tweak the feet already I will repost them in a short while.

I am not quite following you on the lips could you do a paint over on the last render to give me some more details on it.

The belt does clasp correctly its just that the part of the belt that goes under the buckle and has the pin through it needs to be pressed against the edge of the buckle a little more. I will rework that also soon.

thanks for the critique

[psyc3d]

here is an update to the model.

I fixed the boots
Made some tweaks to the head.
Moved the armour so it matches the sword hand
Tweaked the arms to be a little bigger
Made corrections to the Breasts
Some other minor tweaks

http://members.shaw.ca/mchitty/images/newrender.jpg

[kryoboy]

nice, i like the armor mabey you can give me a few ideas on what to do with my female character, i want an ocean theme i know that.

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=125554


good job. Will look wonderful with textures

[psyc3d]

kryoboy:

Thanks for the inputon my model. If you want to do an ocean theme try a rendition of a mermaid of sorts or some sort of human hybrid sea creature. That would be totally cool


Note:
and please dont use other people threads to generate views on your own.

[psyc3d]

updated

[kryoboy]

sorry i should had Pm'd it didnt think about it.

[psyc3d]

No problem bud dont worry about it we all do it sometimes

First time I did it man did I get ripped for it :)

You model is looking good

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