Beast of Burden - Character - Zytrox

[Prisoner]

ei, mais um da 3don aqui!!:)
tá muito bom esse concept Zytrox. Modela, modela, modela!!:D

Nice concept, can't wait to see the 3d model!

[Bezerker75]

like the style of this guy...I always liked blue pencil sketches too...nice look...keep it up!:thumbsup:

[RickThiele]

Hey.. thanks.. =)

wow.. my thread dissapeared so quickly.. :surprised , guess nobody liked my sketch O.o ..
my model wont be exactly like the sketch. =/ ill change lots of stuff...

heres an update... started modelling this.. animal.. kinda thing.., no head, no hands and no feet yet.. ill do that tomorrow..
its a render with no lights... sorry.. i just had to render something and post here before i went to bed... =P
heret is..
cya

if u cant see images below (problems with my serv) go here:
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/dino1.gif
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/dino2.gif
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/dino3.gif

http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/dino1.gif http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/dino2.gif http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/dino3.gif

[particle]

Wow! :eek: So much detail in the skin. I love the folds you have going on behind the front leg/arm. The muscle and tedon details are looking really good. Keep it up.

[RickThiele]

Hey..

thanks particle :bounce:

heres an update.. changed the head design alot.. and im still gonna change it cause im didnt like this new one so much..
but heres a render for now
if u cant see images below go here:
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/bob1.gif
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/bob2.gif
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/bob3.gif
cya :wavey:

http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/bob1.gif
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/bob2.gif
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/bob3.gif

[cyroz2000]

Yeah Zy!
really cool design, and great modelling skills,
keep up the good work!:bounce:

[iC4]

wow, this is amazing, I LOV IT :thumbsup:

and your thread dissappeared so fast because there are hundrets of threads :)

[gwelty]

killer muscle action going on........superb stuff

[ZrO-1]

That's a cool sketch, but I'm not too sure about the forked tail. The modeling looks fantastic, great ripples and muscle definition going on. And that head and face is really really really really really awesome!!! It is so friggin sweet I can't even say it enough. I LOVE that face it rocks, it is so kick-ass.

[dmonk]

The muscle structure on that thing looks incredible.
Great modeling.

and yeah not a big fan of the forked tail, but love the horns on the head.:thumbsup:

[RickThiele]

wow thanks everyone =)

ill loose the forked tail ^.^ and ill work on the rest of the model today.. gonna give him hands and feet... =)

thanks guys :bounce:

cya

[RickThiele]

small update =)

finished the feet of the beast.. :p
this image shows the new feet, the new not-forked tail =D and a closeup of the eye
im still thinking what im gonna do for the chest area.. looks too flat.. comments welcome
well.. l8r
c&c plz
if u cant see the image click here: http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/bob-new.gif
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/tmp/bob-new.gif

[ZrO-1]

I'd say maybe some pectoral muscles and some rib lines should do the chest just fine. I really like this piece. Something about it just rubs me the right way. :thumbsup:

[RickThiele]

Originally posted by ZrO-1
I'd say maybe some pectoral muscles and some rib lines should do the chest just fine. I really like this piece. Something about it just rubs me the right way. :thumbsup:

thanks ZrO-1, i really appreciate ur support :beer:
i tried to make pectoral muscles.. but it didnt look so good.. made the upper part of his body look too human, even though thats what i intend in some ways (like arms), i didnt want the entire upper part to look that way..
im still gonna try some stuff out with rib lines like u said
and ill work on the hand, give him some belts around his body, with some chains.. gonna take a while to do all this :) , i just hope i can finish it all till the deadline
thanks again =)
l8r

[swag]

hey, nice modeling very nice looks very clean

[RickThiele]

Hey thanks =)

was busy with some other stuff
today i updated my bob a bit.. :D



ill make those hands later.. and hang some stuff on those tubes and add lots of wires and stuff like that.. :P

http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/bob-newest.gif
if u cant see the image click here:
http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/bob-newest.gif

cya :beer:

[Crash]

Jizzz, look at those sketches, wish I could draw :p . As said before the mesh is very clean [I think :) ]. The things you could alter are bout the contaption. The pot [or whatever it is :p ] could use some tweking on details coz now it's a bit simple. The main problem here is the harness, it doeasn't look tight at all, it's nearly sliping, try to attach more belts and it should look more beliveble. Great work BTW. :thumbsup:

[RickThiele]

Hey thanks =)

ill make some changes to this.. contraption.. pot.. thing.. :P
hang some stuff on those tubes.. and make it fit to the beasts back better.. =)

small update
changed his belts a bit.. gave him one more and connected two of them to each other, gave him hands too, made some bones too for the arms/shoulders...
i still have to fix some envelopes stuff on the skin =D
and ill give him some more muscles on the shoulder/chest area

now ill go work hard on the contraption thing =)

thanks :beer:

http://www.3dluvr.com/zytrox/bob-newest2.gif

[AJ]

Wow - excellent modelling... especially the back legs/head - fantastic stuff!

There's something about the forearms that doesn't sit quite right to me, I'm not sure if it's just the hands - but they don't quite seem to 'fit' with
the proportions... but then I do like stubby arms :D

Bah - too many good modellers!

*mental note, but plane tickets - and gun* :p ;)

[RickThiele]

Hey..

thanks AJ =)

what do u think looks wrong with the forearms, say it and ill change it =D
also.. i need some ideas for the contraption/pot thing... looks too simple now.. :D

thanks, :beer:

[Koma]

really nice model ,he have a funny personality ,really cool cant wait to see this piece finish .go go go .....:bounce: :thumbsup:

[Joril]

Good work this far.
My crit is that the neck could "flow" more from the body. The transition looks kinda "cornery", I hope you know what I mean :)

[banzato]

E ai cara, eu vi esse seu dino na cadritech, i think he is litle fat, iwould like to see more predator or running animal but the modeling is perfect.:thumbsup:

[RickThiele]

Hey..

thanks guys =)
means alot to me =D

ill have to rush to finish it in time.. ^.^ i hope i can do it

i agree Joril =) ill fix =D

benzato, valeu kra =)
and what do u mean with predator or running animal? u would like to see him running chasing something? =) i couldnt do it to the poor guy.. hes having a hard time carrying that pot thing.. :P

l8r and thanks :wavey:

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