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NuclearwavE
01-26-2002, 07:48 PM
Here's a character I'm working on for my school project:
http://members.home.com/yurri1/Character_1.jpg
Comments and suggestions are welcome,

Thanks,

JacobB
01-26-2002, 08:21 PM
nice stomach muscles, I don't know the legs look a little weird to me, I don't know if you're giving him pants or what but I think the hips could be a tad wider:D

AJ
01-26-2002, 10:44 PM
Very nice levels of definition on the character... but there are some proportions that seem a little out of whack.

The shape/size of the bicep seems out of scale to the forearms (which are popeye huge! :p ). Given the shape of his pecs, the nipples should be more to the "side" of them and a shade lower down. Also, the stomach is excellent, especially the inconsitancy of the sixpack - makes it look very natural :) ... but the area of muscle at the top his legs (at his abdomen) looks distended. If you look at some of the classic Greek sculptures/statues you'll see that there is normally a defined "groove" at this point (where the thigh/hips meet).

It does look like you've stopped at the thighs - but then as JacobB said, if he's gonna be wearing trousers - then why bother! :D

Fantastic amount of work in there - can't wait to see more!!

NuclearwavE
01-27-2002, 01:49 AM
Here's 2 more Pose shots:

http://members.home.com/yurri1/Character_2.jpg
http://members.home.com/yurri1/Character_3.jpg

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Vic3k
01-27-2002, 04:29 AM
congrats pal :)

Jean Eric
01-27-2002, 08:17 AM
Ver impressive level of detail NuclearWave. You have a web-site? Some more stuff of yours?

Still in school eh? Looks like an impressive 'Up and coming talent'. Keep up the good work, I'm sure that before long, studios will be fighting over your body... :)

Kadde
01-27-2002, 10:47 AM
i must agree, thats impressive.

no crits, because i am far away from making a detailed human like that.

NuclearwavE
01-27-2002, 03:09 PM
8), I'm not actually in school, i'm in the first year of college, 8)

Thanks for your comments,

NuclearwavE
01-30-2002, 01:29 PM
http://members.home.com/yurri1/Character_4.jpg
http://members.home.com/yurri1/Character_5.jpg

pabbloz
01-30-2002, 03:04 PM
uau! All muscles are perfect! He's like me! ;)

I would like see him with a good renderer and with a good skin precedural as texture.
And,... has he got feet? or they're in progress?

NuclearwavE
01-31-2002, 05:54 AM
He has some feet but they are just a pair of sticks for now,, 8) I'll finish him tommorow. and start working on textures.

Thanks again, 8)

Panholzer
01-31-2002, 08:34 AM
Great Model!

-few suggestions...

-wrists too thin

-butt too saggy

-chest ends too low...actually the entire front of his torso needs to be slightly raised....

-nice back!

-ears... probably in progress...?

Otherwise awesome model...and the suggestions above are
merely my opinion

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