Charactor: japanease girl

[velinje]

It's amazing!.. But it still has flaws I think the elbows have disappeared and the skin seems wierdly rough, reminds me of the surface from a cliff hill(stone that is). There is somthing more that I really can't put my finger on.. Maybe the part at the bottom of the legs (calf?) is to short?

[Fire_Master...]

verry nice:thumbsup:

[freeDNA]

Her lower legs (I mean the part below the knee. What is it called in English?) seem too thin and short.

[plumser]

Fantastic!! just fabulous! Very attractive woman, i must say. If I could I would publish this on the front page! :buttrock: :eek: :drool:

[Dreamy Kid]

no other word but fantastic, just curious who do you use as a reference, her face looks familiar ^__^

[Aaron]

I can't add any crits to what the rest have said already as far as modeling goes, but I think you might want to rechoose your camera angle and character pose. Her feet seem floaty (and a bit narrow) and there isn't as much weight in the feet as there is in the legs. Her breasts also seem too light -- they don't seem to be supported by her top so much simply covered by it, so you might want to add some weight to them. I don't like the hands, either -- too flat, too straight on in the pose - we need a more dynamic angle for the hands. The camera angle isn't flattering, either. You might want to consider using a slightly upward-angled shot. Personally, I like the skin shader - I think you really nailed that bit of the texturing, but her toenails are bit bright, quite possibly because of the colours around them.

Despite my crits, I think you've got a great piece of work here. I loved your "Iron Man" character. Good work!

Cheers,
-Aaron.

[J.K.Makowka]

I'll have a look at the size of the chest (not the b00bs), and the arms seem a bit short and too thin.

I love the way the strings of her bikini "cut" into the skin, really realistic.

Well, it really is awesome work... but the arms look wrong.

Hmmm, after a second look... they need to be thicker and the elbow is quite a bit too high. I guess they need to be at least half a "hand" longer, maybe even an entire "hand".

Oh and the hair could have a bit more volume on her forehead ;)

:thumbsup:

[lilCara]

Yeah, absolutely great job. :thumbsup:

But I agree with what was said before, and I'll add that the skin on the body looks too old and almost wrinkled compared to the smooth skin on her face, I guess it's because of the texture, and that ruins a bit of her beauty...

Anyway, very nice.

[pdobq]

Thank you for much comment.
It became study.

It made being conscious of the Japanese ordinary form. And I may be his having been that it will make bodily curvaceousness conscious too much, and having made.

;) ;) ;)

[FerryvD]

very nice, but here arms are definitly too short.

[DraconisXII]

:drool: looks great :drool:

[Goatfuzz]

I'd say it's front page quality! Great job on the skin texture. :beer:

[eYadNesS]

Very cool, I like the character. :)

[DJ Scorchio]

Great model, I like!
Have to agree that the preportions look a lil wierd to me, but hey, who am i to say whats normal :)
Quite like the skin, how did you do the texturing?

[pearson]

Nice work!

I can't believe that this hasn't been plugged yet...what's the deal?

[heewing]

I think her arms and legs should be a little bit longer, I saw there are some body scale problem on her body, but her face is prefect..... :wip: :wip: :wip:

[Phantomstranger]

beautiful.

the torso looks too long compared to the length of the limbs. her ribcage is too tall (not too much just a tad).

and the arms are way to short. wrists should be alot lower than the hips.

[jdsb]

i think the proportions are very real. :p
great work :)

[cheybea]

nice face...
um, arms need to be a tad bit longer...the wrists should line up with the crotch

[Jako]

in fact, the arms could be a little longer.
Otherwise great work! :buttrock:

[ChR0n0_SeRgE]

thats beautiful!
and thats one hell of a skin texture!

[eunuchbot]

I think the model and the textures are AWESOME!!! but the hands and feet seem small, and the arms are too short: the elbow should hang just past lowest rib and the hands should be just above the half way mark of thigh. also the lower legs maybe alittle too small... besides that, I think this is one of the best models I've seen all week!!!

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