CGTalk - Character: Gangster

Brandt

03-09-2004, 07:49 AM

This is a model I created in my spare time over the last few months. Everything was done in 3dsmax 6 and photoshop. This was my first attempt at unwrapping and texturing a model.

Please feel free to comment. Thanks.

http://members.shaw.ca/robertbrandt/images/image09.jpg

crimson13

03-09-2004, 12:32 PM

don't know why this didn't get a reply yet :shrug:
It looks good, though I have 2 points of critique:
- the texturing looks a bit too 'even', not a lot of color variation in the skin
- there's a line running from his nose to chin; seems like the 2 halves weren't properly connected
Other than that: good work :wavey:

DC2002

03-09-2004, 01:16 PM

It's a really nice model and great texture, but one thing - it looks somewhat farmiliar. lol

nibo

03-09-2004, 03:06 PM

You're on the right track!
Just spend some more time on the cloth...
:thumbsup:

Brandt

03-09-2004, 08:01 PM

Thanks for the replies!

I definately need to work on my texturing skills, I don't have much experience in that area. Hopefully I can get better with practice.

That line from his nose to his chin is caused by the lighting, I think. Here's a wire of the head.

http://members.shaw.ca/robertbrandt/images/image07.jpg

Fiblah

03-10-2004, 12:46 AM

Awsome! I love the his facial expression. :drool:

ZippZopp

03-10-2004, 08:12 AM

sweet model....looks really clean, very nice!

Shaykai

03-10-2004, 08:49 AM

Jeeze, thats one of the cleanest meshes i've seen. Great job

Shaykai

mikepolizos

03-10-2004, 08:50 AM

He looks like hitman in a fatter version!

Good worm man but you have to play a bit more with his clothes(IMO)!

:thumbsup:

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