beast of burden-character-gabe

[samartin]

If I was a scouser I would tell u 2 calm down, that certainly is a horse and looking pretty awesome already 4 a 1st post... :thumbsup:

it is gonna have horns right ???

[OZ]

AMAZED!....Gabe...every challenge u do something more good than the previous!!!!
Ps: I still want to do some killer team work.........:thumbsup: :applause: :wavey:

[Koma]

samartin thanks your right about horn but probably just one ,just like a licorn

-OZ- thanks master ,hey i send you a private mail

[erilaz]

Am I allowed to be a little picky already? The horse's skull seems a little short, like it's a pony. Apart from that, it's almost perfect!

[Koma]

well well well here an update ,what you think about the legs ?

[samartin]

omg... that thing's gonna b the world breaking long jumper I think, 2nd day and u're that far already, u gonna stop after 2morrow then ??? :applause: :eek:

[JinMTVT]

:eek: :applause: :applause:

[Koma]

samartin -yes sam he is a really good jumper so is back legs would have to be attach with big chains ,and no i will not finish this tomorrow alot detail to do .

thanks jim

montreal rulez yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh......

here just heeeeeee something ........yes an image but not a cool one ,one to understood something ........heeeeeeeeee probably heeeeeeeee...aaaaaaaaargh just check it he he:airguitar

[ZrO-1]

That is one funky lookin BoB you've got there gabe. hehehe your stuff is always fun to watch develop. great start.

[Koma]

thanks zro ,and here for who love story

well here the history : year : 2054

Since 4 years, during a terrible world war,a commander of the state army is touch by a target right in the head,by a miracle he stay alive
but he turn crazy . Is insanity push him to found a new terrosrist organisation ,called the imnuc team(for immoral and nuclear),to stop the war by a immoral way ,nuclear way .They decide to follow an ancient prophety,the prophety of gravity :
launch 3 nuclear bomb at 3 perfect center earth position : 1: kheops pyramide ,maya temple and the last monk temple . All this structure
point into one direction ,where the 3 one touch each other ,this point is call the key of gravity ,he is the center of the solar system. When they launch the 3 bombs nobody be prepare ,so the mission have a big success and the legend of the prophety is revealed to be true ,so the earth became completly destabilize ,and she lose is gravity point .She fall down in the universe and the scientist rapidly lose the trace of the solar system .On another planet they lauch the comet alarm ,a big comet will fall in the third continent of Coktalus ,the comet is in fact the earth and some of the resident of the earth will survive and they will be abble to find a new mysterious world were evolution as not follow the same path .

So welcome to my world ,and enjoy the first beast of this new planet called Reandal

And this beast is an Horse transporter , i will find a name soon


and sorry for my english

[Koma]

hey c'mon what do you think about the story ,or tell me if you dont understand ,i know that my english is really cheap

[Koma]

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[ZrO-1]

hehehe I like that story, it's pretty detailed. But how does the story tie into the BoB? I get that it would give an explanation for an environment, but I don't quite get it. :shrug: I don't know..guess I'm just dumb. :p

[otacon]

I like it....good modeling.....but theres something about those back legs that just doesnt look right.:shrug:

[dosadi]

That is an awesome story!!! I bet this BoB hauls a bumpy hay-ride!

[Koma]

well thanks

zro-1 the story is about a planet where come from those beast that i create ,this is a true story ive been there one day ,magnifical place :thumbsup: dont worry iam not crazy ,drinking to much

so i think my horse is to weird and really cool i try another one frinds of mine ...he he..a kind of yeti here the start

tell me wich one you prefer

[Jhonus]

Nice monkey type face!

With the horse thing, I think the neck/mane area is too long and the front legs are too short.

[pearson]

Wow! You are FAST! I say you should put the back legs from the "horse" onto the Yeti! That would be cool! :bounce: :buttrock:

[Koma]

thanks pearson ,its a good idea i will check this ,my girlfriend think the same thing as you ,but iam not sure my other idea is to make the two one and make challenge betwen us in racing dual ,its can be fun ,well let see

Krugar ,the proportion are nor right for a real horse but its how i want him its give an elegant looks at the beast(my opinion)

[OZ]

WOW !!! GABE! fantastic story....u know,i love background story 4 characters....he he he.Ur model is crazy!!! and the monkey face???WOW!....Just cool and how quick u do it!?
:thumbsup: :applause: WWWROX!

we may found the planets ring.

[Koma]

hey thanks -OZ- ,but please tell me which one you prefer the horse or the monkey ,or the 2 one

hey -Oz- iam working with lightwave and u ?

[dmonk]

can't go wrong with monkeys.

[insanepoly]

I like the horse, it has more potential, but the back legs appears to be overpowering the front legs because of the difference in size and detail, all it needs is a little bit more balance.

[iC4]

have to agree with the_hand

I also think that a "horse" is more a beast of burden than a monkey

[OZ]

Hi gabe!Mmmmh The Horse for sure!but the monkey is also great........but i must choose one.....the horse is Disney like.......too much nice !!!
ps: I saw the lightwave touch.....i work with max.:D Ouch.

[Koma]

well thanks

-OZ- but i can export lightwave to max ,disney rules ,walter is a genius


i think you have right the_hand i will work on the forward legs more ,but now that i start my yeti i cant stop him so here my new sketch i will use the 2 one

well tell me what you think about this one

[Koma]

here an update of the yeti

[Koma]

and the horse........... so i rework on the forward leg and i will explain later why those big back leg its really important for him

[ZrO-1]

Ahhh I like the front legs better now. It looks like they tie-in with the rear legs much better now. Great stuff so far. I love the monkey-man his expression is awesome.

[Steve Warner]

Holy smokes! That's freakin cool! :buttrock: You're a modeling madman!

The only thing that looks a little odd to me is the neck. I'd expect a little more muscle. :)

Awesome work! Keep it up!

Steve

[Koma]

ZrO-1 thanks man ,do you understand the story now

Steve Warner - thanks dude ,yeah i need to do some muscle on the body ,but before model it ,a make a little study on real horse and model one ........

this is not my bob just a anatomy study of the horse

[ZrO-1]

Yeah I get the story now. Really nice horse BTW.

[xtrm3d]

hehe..
gabe my friend...
as alway look yoúr stuff really cool..
the last oicture ist imo the best ..
:-)

[insanepoly]

I think the monkey looks great and the concept will definitely work.

As for the horse though, I feel that it still needs some work on the legs. Basically it really boils down to anatomy. Although its a work of fantasy, the anatomy still has to work. Right now, the back legs are too long in comparison to the front legs. This is a creature who will have a hard time walking. One solution would be to shorten the upper thighs of the back legs.

[l_farley13_l]

Awesome Job on both - somthing about the neck on the horse bothers me - it seems so normal compared with the rest. If your going for elegant, then maybe a bit more swanlike, going along with the whole birdlike backleg structure (plus odd "hoofed" front ones ;))

see you,

Farley13

[Koma]

ZrO-1 thanks for the horse ,so do you like the story now that you understand it ,the movie will go on screen in 3 years..........ah ah just kidding............


xtrm3d -thanks my friend ,well i will continu working on the horse thing for the bob challenge but also finish the real horse ,with some fur ,long hair and big wings ,they will be my flying licorn


the_hand - yep ,i know but i love the legs ,baaaaaaaah...i finally remove it make her less longuer,thanks ,and yes anatomy are really important and one of the more important thing when you do fanstastic creature ,its what they give him a realistic feeling .

Okay so i choose to make a kind of horse for his power and rapidity ,so he have horse legs on the front for the speed and a kind of dino for back legs for power ,its what they make him so strong , i also change the form of the face ,i find him more dynamic and more elegant

feedback ,sugestion critique are welcome

[Koma]

oups farley ,we make her post in the same ,so what do you think of the update ,and thanks

[Koma]

well here a new idea ,the beast will train i can a flying machine ,dont know how to call this in english.....but this is cowboy............hi haaaaaaaaaaaaa.....iam still not sure about what i will do ,this or a rider....like the poor lone sun cowboys. baaaaaaaaaaah anyway here it is

[ZrO-1]

Yeah, the wild-west RULES!
I'd definetly use the cowboy idea. Tres bon!!

[Ryu]

Great modelling !
I think you are modelling in Lw yeah?
Could you post a wireframe to show me (us?) how do you
make the muscles appear that great?
I really thx you a lot already :D
Bye...
Ryu.

[OZ]

GABE!WOW! u come up with this brilliant work!Are u sure u want work in team w. me???U are too much skilled 4 me.....WWWWROX!:buttrock: One of the best here!:buttrock:

[erilaz]

I love the flame boosted carriage. Great idea! Might explain why the wild west is always so hard baked...:rolleyes:

This keeps getting better and better.

[Koma]

ZrO-1 - merci beaucoup ,yaaaah wild west rules

Ryu thanks man yes iam a lightwave user ,really it ,i will post a wireframe view now .... i you wanna see other view just tell me

-OZ- - hey man c'mon your great ,and iam not one of the best here ,so much talent here.......and hey you wrox to ,but i really appreciate your comments ,iam happy this make my day ... he he ,and well yes i wanna work with u ,but i have to finish my horse and i will go to your thread and start modeling some beast

so later my friend

erilaz ,well thanks man ,and no i cant explain cause i not understand ,iam just a little french ,i will ask to a friend of mine and came back with explanation,sorry

[Artifex]

Hey cool idea. The back legs are 25% too big for the caracter I think. And maybe you could bulk up the lower back part and give it a bigger as to make him real strong. :p

[Koma]

thanks Marc ,but i dont think the legs are too big ,what are big is the feet ......And he is able to walk easly and run ,so i dont see where is the problem

[JinMTVT]

pas mal cool ton BOB!!!

wich app do you use ?

[Koma]

merci ,iam using lightwave 7.5


toi le modelling ca avance ....:bounce: :wip:

[Koma]

well here the start of the flying machine hiiiiii ha

[Ryu]

Great, cool beginning, i like the bag of sand :)
Thx for the wireframe, but could you send a close up of one of his back leg with and without smoothing too plz?
Thx a lot,
bonne continuation :)
:wavey:

[Spazmo]

Just a suggestion...have a word with ZrO-1 about modelling the canvas for the covered wagon.
Keep up the good work. I think your piece is highly original, and will be a real stand out if you maintain the pace.

[toce]

great modeling.. I'm not sure about the design of the legs, but it's up to you...matter of taste...

[BrainFaucet]

This is really great!

Cool concept and your modeling skills are amazing! Keep up the good work!

[Koma]

Ryu -thanks alot dude ,here the wire that you ask

Spazmo thanks i will check that

toce well your not the first ,maybe i will have revise the design of hte legs ,anyway thanks man

BrainFaucet thanks appreciated comments

here a wire frame of the back legs ,update of the master piece soon

[ZrO-1]

Gabe man, your wagon is looking pretty dam fine. I like the sandbags. That's a cool idea.

[Koma]

thanks ZrO-1

hey tired to see opengl screenshot ,well i understand so here the first render ,nothing exceptionnel but some radiosity and a-a

[mrmark]

that is quite excellent!
keep doing what your doing!

[Andre Goersch]

Hi Gabe.

Really cool this horse :thumbsup:
There's only one thing that bothers me about it. The knees on the back legs of (real) horses fold to the front.
I don't know how much are you worried about real anatomy function, but it seems to me that your horse will have some trouble to walk...

[Koma]

mrmark thanks for your comments

Andre Goersch i have to work on the legs ,yes ,but remember that this is not an horse this is a beast ,yes its inspirate from an horse but the anatomy is not the same . thanks for your comments

[ZrO-1]

LOL :D poor Gabe can't make anyone happy with the BoB's legs :p

[Pancreas]

Hey Gabe I like the legs! It´s true the back legs should have the inverted knee, but i never ever seen a horned horse and nobody have said anything about that!
Anyway, your creature could move hopping :bounce: The van is a flying tipe? Nice design. :D

[Meka]

Great concept Gabe and awsome modeling too. you're very fast :)

[Koma]

ZrO-1 well well well those fuc....g bast..d legs arghhhhhhhh i finally remove her ,noe more legs ,,,he he just kidding

thanks meka

thanks pancreas ,happy that you love the legs ,i fix the problem i think ,i hope that you will love those one



legs legs legs ,let's go :D :bounce:

[iC4]

really nice model, just one thing I don't like so much. I think those "horns" on his feet are too regular, they look like a primitive cone, not natural enough

[OZ]

KAZAAM!!!:eek: ..........................:buttrock: ......................:wavey: .....................5 stars!

[SEL]

Hey Gabe tnxfor the post bud, I went to your thread right after to see what youve been working on and was really impressed, It looks really good, and I like the idea too. One thing, I know people have been saying stuff about the legs, but I personally thik the are fine, I think if you move the backones to the front, and make the beast a little more beast like, you will kick some ass in this challenge. I posted a quick photshop of what I had in mind, sorry to mess with your work, just trying to help in anyway, you can use it or not, just an idea thrown out there. Great job either or :buttrock:

TheSEL

[Vorpal Bunny]

Uhh...is Gabe's model for real here? Looks like he's gone through and systematically raped half the animal kingdom and haphazardly rearranged their body parts for no discernible reason.

I hate to be the one to say it, but not only is the Emperor naked, he also makes no biological or aesthetic sense whatsoever.

In conclusion,
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

[Elfe__noire]

SAlut GAbe vraiment cool ton beast j'ai hate de voir la texture ! ciao et bonne chance!

[Elfe__noire]

Ah oui bravo tu es rendu dans le top 5 avec 600 post !!

[Koma]

iC4- thanks ,and yes i will make the horse more unaturel but they are not primitive cone

-OZ- kazam ......... are a magicien.........a bra ca da bra pouffff ....

TheSEL - thnkas good idea for the eye but for the legs i will reexplain why ,the horse one in the front are for the speed and dino one are for the force ,its my idea and how i view it ,but thanks again and great photoshop job

Elfe__noire - merci

[Koma]

well her a tiny update just fix some little things ,iam know thinking to add stuff on in , stupid stuff ,like public phone big lens ,well keep checking for update

[Aearon]

great concept and execution, i know this is a very general thing to say, but it's just what i see here :wip:

there is a problem though, if the carriage is flying what is the burden ? pulling that thing wouldn't be any harder than pulling a balloon through the air

[Koma]

good point fist but trust me at the end you dont wanna a be at the horse place its will be hard to pull , keep looking the progress

[Koma]

here an update i add some acessorie finally no stupid one ,will try to keep this serious

[l_farley13_l]

looking good - Maybe a bit of a curve to the horns on the front legs - also the hoofs could have a tri bevel at the ends (think a solid elephant foot, but a hoof and still flared) to tie it in with the back- it still seems too horsey ( :shrug: ) Looking foward to your carrage (and wheels! :))

Farley13

[Koma]

thanks farley 13 , for horns on the front legs they will be reallt little like the back one ,but you give an idea i will curve the horn on the head ,he he and for the wheels you will stand a long time ecause this is a flying wagon , they will have reactor with magic blu some under the wagon .

[xtrm3d]

me too for the front leg..
the thorn ar too big imho.. ;-)
but great overral design/idea
and i love the carrier.. cant wait to see the blue magical dust :-)
:wavey: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Koma]

merci xtrm3d ,ouais je vais essayer d rranger les jambes

well some update ,i size down the horn on the front legs ,i curve the one on the head ,i works on the front legs anatomy and i think that i will add a vw van behind the wagon what do you think

[Koma]

here the vw_van

[xtrm3d]

yep.. great idea the stuff with the ww van !!!
i love it.. but please not a new shiny one.. do some rust and scratching work ...like a old used one..

but really i love this idea better..

and btw..
the leg look for me way way way better now

:applause:

[erilaz]

Reminds me of that GI render of the VW van that came out a while ago. You know, the one where it was almost impossible to tell it wasn't real? Really nice work!:D

[Koma]

thanks for the replys guys

erilaz sorry o dont see this image do you have a link ,but me iam not using gi render its to long for test maybe the final image will be with radiosity

here an update of the van i know no texture for the challenge ...


i will remove the flying wagon ,the horse will finally just pull the vw_van .

[Koma]

oups here the image

[ZrO-1]

Holy crap! Gabe man, you have to write a how-to on those textures. First the van looked perfectly new. Then BAM it's old and rusty...And both versions look photo-real!!! :eek:

I would be happy if I could texture 1/3 as well as you do.
:bowdown:

[hypercube]

No kidding, you are quick on the stick man..conceptual train wreck, but great speed and agility on the modeling and surfacing. :D I like the ghastly 60's/70's colour combination, too.

Look forward to what else is cooking in that head of yours..

[DKScully]

ey¡¡¡ I love the materials you've have here... :-)))) And the horse It's really great, too...

[Koma]

okay now here the rider of the vw_van ,still have some things to add he will be a hippies monkey ,drinking beer smoking ...heeeee... things with circle lens .

thanks guys for replies

and hey zro are you kidding ---I would be happy if I could texture 1/3 as well as you do. ---- what that your good man you one of the best entry ,c'mon .(maybe yes a how-to can be good for some people when my bob will by finish i will make it)

[iC4]

omg, those textures are great

also the rider, a very nice character

looks like this is getting a very cool and funny entry :)

[KnightWhitie]

I like Your VW van, and your character concepts are impressive:buttrock:

[rolhionjs]

Gosh ! c'est trop beau ! le VW est terrible sans parler du Monkey ! ça décoiffe !

[Koma]

thanks all

hey strike si tes trop decoiffer envoi la facture du coiffeur hi hi .merci ben mon ami

okay ,here everything in the same piece ,this is my surfer hippie monkey ,he he... its became really funny :bounce: :bounce: ...

[ZrO-1]

LOL that is great the way you got everything together. Very humorous. Good stuff Gabe! :applause: :applause:

[rolhionjs]

mwarf !! lol non seulement ça décoiffe, mais en plus je me suis pissé dessus tellement je rigole ! Je t'envoie la facture du teinturier aussi ;) :bounce:

[pascal_blanche]

huhuh what do you put in your cofee gabe? the averall idea is really funny :applause: your unicorn still need some work on the legs ;)

[Koma]

thanks zro

.::STRIKE::. merde ca va me couter cher cette compo ,je suis d arreter le challenge ici he he he .....merci

pascal well sorry ,but i dont drink coffee but its probably became from the fact that i drink alot of chocolate milk after what i became completly histetric and start braking brick on my head during watching a cartoon like spawn ...nan just kidding sorry ,iam crazy ...desoler je retiens de mon pere ... mais le lait au chocolat:love:

and thanks for the comments i will effectivly have to works on the legs

[TylerHunter]

Monkey on a surf board, on a volks wagon van, being pulled but a unicorn lizard shorta thing.. you my friend are a genius.

The best part is they are good models.. give us another view of that seen..

Tyler

[Elfe__noire]

Salut Gabe, ton image est vraiment cool!j'aime le concepte!!!.:thumbsup:

[Koma]

thnaks guy's here another view and i remove some texture ,praticly all except from the sticker on hte window and stay with the ray traced relfection

now i hate the beast help me here new idea :

elephant

rinhoceros

or a dog little hippies dog ,looking frost

[rolhionjs]

hummm... maybe an elephant of india ! :)

tu sais le retour des hippies en inde dans les 70s, l'éléphant drappé de couleurs avec une peinture sur le front et tout ! ;) ça va être grandiose !! :) :)

[S E D A H]

salut GABE ton overall est cool j aime ben le singe ye cool pis la van c vraiment hot .............pour ton beats les jambe en avant son trop grosse y a l air pogner tu pourrais les faires plus muscler.........et plus fine comme un cheval...........pour la face to pourrai la transformer en t_rez pis la queue en serpent sa ferait une belle bete.................overall nice work

[l_farley13_l]

nawww keep at it there's a lot of charcter to be tweeked out there!

Just for kicks I did a draw-over, figuring out where this could be improoved will help you out more than doing somthing else (well I hope) Getting those proportions right is the hardest part! Even if you do somthing else - try to figure out what you don't like and why from this one!

Farley13

[Koma]

thanks strike this is a good idea j hesite vraiment entre l elephant et le rhino voyon voir

Thanks sedah ,c est une tres bonne idée mais le probleme c est que je veut changer la bete parce que je trouve que ca fiterais plus un elephant ou un rhino .

thanks farley but its not because i cant achieve a great look for this one ,its more because i think an elephant or a rhino will more fit on the overall scene with the van .you understand ,bur thanks alot for your help , i have to think what can be the best for the final image .

[hiko_]

Superbe gabe ... hyper original :applause:

[S E D A H]

prend l eleohant pascal a deja fait une bete avec la stucture d un rhino

[Koma]

ta raison ,je viens de regarder ,je croyais que c etait un boeuf ,mais ca pourrait etre une guere entre moi et Pascal qui feras le plus fantastique modelling ca serais du challenge pour moi .well on verras ,me connaissant je vais paaser la nuit debout a modeliser les 2 .

hey thanks hiko ,the prout maker ...ca me fait rire a tout les fois

[Apt Pupil]

Je pense que si tu veux change idea, personellement, j'aime mieux le rhino(ou, quelque chose qui resemble un rhino:)). Je pense que l'elephant vas etre tros gros, est presque personne fait un rhino. On tout qa, tu fait vrainment une bonne job, j'espere voir plus. Est un guerre avec vous est pascal serais un taille, parce-que vous étes tous les deux vrainment bon, tu vas annuler l'un l'autre:p


Darn it, I don't speak french for 4 years and . . . I suck:surprised

[Koma]

Apt Pupil ,thanks dude ,je vais t ecouter et faire un rhino .
and hey i check your skecth ,wow fabulous ...and your french is not so bad .

well hi start to model a rhino here he is

[rolhionjs]

rohlala !!! mais tu modélises à la vitesse de la lumière !! ;) C'est terrible ! Du coup maintenant je vote rhino ! :)

[ZrO-1]

Gabe, that Rhino looks incredable man! Awesome job on it. :thumbsup:

[JacobB]

you should give the monkey rocker hair :thumbsup: and what are those"packages" on the roof? hippie monkey fuel?:D :beer:

[thedrone]

ouch !
bein t'est plutot rapide clair !!!

joli boulot, bonne continuation !

[S E D A H]

calvere gabe tu dors tu des fois sa ete assez vite comme modelisation ya le coup que je trouve peut etre un peu long .pour le reste top cool pis j aime bien les bourlets des jambes tu devrai peut etre abuser la dessus en mettre plus .........relly great job..........keep it up

[Bezerker75]

wow you a fast modeler...if you don't mind me asking what software do you use to model these guys...really looking good...very cool Idea...keep up the great modeling!

[Steve Warner]

Gabe, sheesh, man if you keep up this pace you're going to have to put a fire extinguisher next to your CPU! :arteest:

I love the absolutely disjointed juxtaposition of the mythical unicorn with the hippie VW and the jungle monkey. Your modeling is superb!

Steve

[Koma]

.::STRIKE::. merci ben ouin ,pour la modelisation la vitesse de la lumiere ,yaaaaaaaah !!! que la force soit avec toi strike ,grichhhhhhhhhhhhhh ourghhhhhhh (ca c est le bruit de darth vader oki t essayeras d ecrire ca toi) he he


JacobB -yeah for the hair good idea i keep it in mind thanks

S E D A H -j essaye de dormir le moins possible mais ca pas toujours evident ,je trouve le sommeil une perte de temps mais en t k ,merci pour ton comment

Bezerker75 i use lightwave .your beast are also really cool .

and thanks to thedrone ,Steve Warner and ZrO-1

here an update of the rhino ,i play with the form and start adding accesories ,the same one that be on the unicorn .

[pascal_blanche]

hehe rhino waaaaaaaaaaaar :p ey gab, show us your wireframes a bit ;) btw .. you should modify it a bi so it doesnt look too much like a rhino... amazing work btw... you managed to do reel good job on this one, the proportions are working better than the unicorn body ( legs a bit too much messy )
keep it up gabe!

[tubby]

hey thats a great model, i have no suggestions other than from the front view the legs look too wide or somethin. im not sure if its just me but i thought there legs were closer in an that helped give them the "large mass " look. hell i dont know, anyway, friggin great model.

[tubby]

here , like this

[pascal_blanche]

there`s many species tubby. your reference is a black rhino i think, and gabe`s rhino a sumatran or javan one ... ( the armor on the back) they are little rhinos...

[tubby]

oops, heehee, sorry

[ZrO-1]

@ pascal: It could be a sumatran, but if you look at the horn shape and the shape of the lips it looks like it's a black rhino. ;) :p

[pascal_blanche]

yup, mentionned the horn.. too long for a sumatran, right?

[Koma]

well dont really knon all the different species of rhino ,maybe i will have do to a little study on this ,i play with the prportion model to achieve a more massive rhino .

hey mr Blanché so your ready for this fight ,yah:drumrock: just kidding ,iam just a little poor guy's he he

thanks tubby ,great reference pic ,i will use it

so for the moment the species is a gaberhinolw he he

[Koma]

okay and here the wire frame ,now i go back to my modeler

[l_farley13_l]

I must say awesome model so far- the wire is a bit hard to make out - could you just do a toon render?

I'd agree that a bit more modification/fantasy would be great! Maybe think how such a speices would be modified for pulling instead of charging.

Farley13

[Koma]

thanks farley ,here another wire ,i think he is better .

and yes i now start working on to create a fantastic look at this rhino .

[Koma]

oups forgot the wire

[Artifex]

Real nice modelling so far, now turn this one into something original. I'll be staying tunned, can't wait for your updates.

[Koma]

okay after a terrible week i'am back with a new computer ,because the last one crash....arghhhhhh....

so here a little render of the rhino

[tubby]

gabe your model is really lookin good. i really like the improvements youve made on the character. the definition is perfect!!

[Artifex]

Hey Gabe, I'm with Tubby. I think the defenition is perfect. The lower legs a just a bit lumpy tho.

J'ai été voit ta page web. Elle est à jour? As-tu déja étudier au Nad ou tu penses à y aller?

[Koma]

thanks guy's for your comments

Marc non mon site est pas a jours ,j'ai quelques nouvelle image a y rajouter et je commence nad en septembre .

[S E D A H]

cool le update de ton rhino pour le moment j ai aucun commentaire a part y a perfect .............j ai hate de voir la suite

[Artifex]

Tout cas mon gars, tu as le potentiel. L'école te donnera un bon plus aussi, mais as-tu essayer de te trouver un emplois? Ce qu'on regarde c'est le talent...

[Koma]

thanks for your comments guy's .

here the rhino with the van

[Koma]

finally change my idea ,for another time ,i will remove the mokey surfer and replace by a big tank and i will add bot stuff on the rhino .well tell me what you think

[Koma]

eeeeeeeeeeee.....update

[Crash]

hiehie, nice one, not much cyborgs in here. It's a simple rhino but i like the idea, it has potential. No crits so far, we'll se later. :bounce:

[Artifex]

Hey Gabe, cool idea. I'd make the lens a bit bigger tho (my taste). And just an idea could be to attach the pieces with a bit of metal thing gettin into the shin and some wires maybe. Anyways go with the flow. hehe

[Fedron]

Hello Gabe, ca va?
You know i have been regarding your from un certain temps. And i was really enjoying the psichedelic craziness of your first essai with the unicorn. I know the Unicorn wasn't au point and i love the rhino. But i think that the cyborg look renie of the original idee wich i prefere because of plus originale. The modeling is very good and the technical level also but the completement delire of the first was so cool. A cyborg rhino is cool but not delire. Maybe the rhino should be rose?

Long live delire and champigon.

[Elfe__noire]

Lest's go gabe tu va finir par le finir....ta nouvelle idée est cool lache la pas sa va etre vraiment cool!!!!
:buttrock:
:arteest:
:twisted:

[Koma]

thanks guy's

hey fedron , you are right ,i will continu on the funny way ,its what i love more ,thanks dude

so i remove the thing that i add in the last update and make tomato plant , i will be now the garden mobile

[OZ]

FAAaaaAAnntaaastickK!:applause: ....WOW! Great masterpiece!...........U really amaze Me!....:buttrock: U ROX!

[erilaz]

Nice work there gabe! That Rhino sure doesn't look happy about being forced to carry anything, let alone a canopy! The beast's detail is wonderful. Nice wicker there too! :D

[Koma]

thanks -OZ- ,like i say on your thread man happy to you again dude ,go -OZ go .

thanks erilaz your beast are also really cool .

update

[zeb]

Your rhino is very very very cool .

Good stuff !

but i'm sure it can carries more and more again ;):applause:

[xtrm3d]

:thumbsup:

5 stars !!!!

i ´juste discuted the rest over icq with you

[ZrO-1]

Dam Gabe, does anything you make ever look bad? That rhino is looking kick-a$$! I love the flowery contraption you added to it in that last pic. Does that mean that you aren't using the Moneky and van? Because I thought those were great.

Well anyway, what ever you decide on doing for the final piece I'm sure it will rock.

Great stuff so far! :applause: :thumbsup:

[Mandrake]

Yes its great modelling there Gabe. Looking at it I'm pretty
sure the final composite will be great. Congrats:applause:

[Koma]

zeb -thanks dude ,yes iam also sure that he can carrie more and more:bounce:

xtrm3d merci a+

ZrO-1 thanks ,sure i will pull the van but not sure about the future of the monkey i think is carreer is dead

Mandrake thanks ,i hope the finish compo will be great

and here an update with more thing ,and go back to modeller to put more thing

[Koma]

well special thanks to my father for have buy my new computer and to my girlfriend for those thing that i love so much ..he he...just kidding .

well here the rhino with the van still need some more detail on the kind of package on the rhino and a garden on roof of the van .

[tubby]

gabe that looks friggin great, what a cool mix of ideas. a lot of eye candy to look around at, and great modelling!!

[Koma]

thanks tubby ,your bob is also really cool ,and the modelling is really good .

aha haaamouahahah so here what somebody can call an update

garden add on the roof of the van and a little dog
still to come some more strap between the van and the rhino and some more eye candie maybe .....

[Ryu]

Whaou,
that's really cool,
I like your render, could we have a snapshot of the scene ? :)
Bye,
and stay on that way :P
:wavey:

[Lorenzo]

super un francophone, hahaha
Sérieusement, tu fais du bon boulot, j'aime bien les détails marrant comme le chien, et le potager, ca change des gros monstres hideux.

nice work man:applause: :thumbsup:

[Koma]

thanks for comments ...

here probably the final update ,c&c are welcome , I wanna know if love it ???


first wire

[Koma]

and here the real final image .... i think they need nothing more if you see something tell me .......................

[erilaz]

Yay! Well done Gabe. A top-notch model. :applause:

The only crit I have (and I'm being picky) is that the tree in the rooftop garden looks a little smoothed out, like it's not a tree. It is a tree, isn't it? :p :D I'm trying to think of the right word to describe what it needs, but I can't.
Your guess is as good as mine! :shrug:

[pit]

FANTASTIC!!!!!:love:
Only thing i see is that the "windows" of the VW are really dirty, but the rest of the car is clean - maybe you could dirty it up a little. Otherwise i simply adore it!! A bright yellow sunflower behind the ear of the Rhino would also be cool. "Be sure to wear some flowers in your hair" etc.

One last thing: the rope leading to the vehicle isn`t really thight - should be straightend out if the rhino is pulling. Nuf said!

[Taoizm]

I've never seen fuzzy dice that square. They always seemed to come a little smooched. Can't really complain though cuz the overall piece is so durned nice. :)

[Koma]

erilaz thanks yes this is a tree i will have to make more detail on .

pit - about the dirty texture i think e are not allowed to texture for the challenge i just forgot to remove the texture on the window ,and thanks for the sun flower idea i will use it i think

and thanks taoizm

[OZ]

u are my hero! amazing work.................:thumbsup: :beer: :buttrock:

[Apt Pupil]

Hey there Gabe, things are looking quite nice here. I love how your beasty turned out and he fits right into your scence. I also love the dog heheheheh. If your looking for critique though, I find everything is modeled exceptionally well, but the composition lacks somewhat. Everything is to even and cleanly lined up. Try bending things, rotate things at an angle etc. Hence, maybe where the dog lies, rotate that bed to suggest the dog's weight, where the pots are balanced on the rihnos's head, make one side lean more down etc. . . (the quickest and easiest way to find out what works it to bring it into photoshop, dice it up and plaster it onto different layers, and then start distorting, rotating, and scaling things to taste).

Otherwise, you have created a fine piece of work here. Excellent job!!
:thumbsup:

[Koma]

thanks -OZ- iam your hero ,yaaaaaah ....... so much people with good idea and talented i think i have like something 100 heros he he ................. your bob look great too .

thanks apt yeap your right about the blending and rotating thing a bit ,but i dont have time ,iam busy right now .

here 2 different angle of the final compo
i only add some sunflower

[Koma]

second one ,personnally my prefer

[pit]

PERFECT!:applause:

[Artifex]

Gabe man you've got talent. That's some cheesy compo. The details are very professionnal. Love the volks too.

[erilaz]

I thought you said you were going to fix that tree! :p

But seriously gabe, a perfect scene. Love the details. I actually really, really, really like the dog! It could be a BoB all by itself. It looks exhausted enough to be one!:D

[Drongo Stabbins]

Just seen this for the first time Gabe...
This is really great!
So much to see! And the van is perfect!
Great stuff!!!:thumbsup:

[Koma]

thanks pit ,perfect nan , but its okay .

Artifex thanks man ,well lets say where i will go with my talent and my nad formation .

erilaz serious ,i will have to do it ,but iam a busy right now ,and for the dog i think i would texture it and he would have is how scene .

Drongo Stabbins thanks dude ,your bob is really nice too ,funny ,those character have alot of personnality .

[ZrO-1]

Hey Gabe, I just wanted to say your final piece is great. I think your piece has probably gone through the most changes out of all the entries and it has turned out really well. Great work on all of the stuff. You have a ton of things going on in the pic and it all looks great.
Excellent work! :applause: :thumbsup: :applause:

[Koma]

thanks zro ,well yes i model so much things ,i have some stuff to finish now ,like the horse and the dog . anyway thanks dude

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