chained samurai

[timur04]

Cool image but his left foot ( the one that’s not held by the chain ) seems in the wrong place. Maybe it could be pointed at the closest wood block that he’s trying to step on. Or his right knee should have more of a bend in it. If anything, make the right foot smaller to show that its further back.

[davhub]

Hi Frantic! nice drawing in general, I suggest you the following:

the pose suggest the samurai is on the verge of falling pulled by the chain...

the chain is a little bit too high in the leg to do this,
I agree with timur 04 about the question of the right foot.

and.. the left hand, is very nice but posed innaturaly IMO...
but nice and proportioned. the left leg, instead,... need a work of reposition because is not clear the action it does...

hope this helps you and your project!

davhub

[frantic]

thanx guys...you both are right about the critiqs..Im not planning to rework on this one, but I will consider these issues next time..thanx again..the next one the best one:)

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