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omar C
03-08-2004, 10:29 PM
just finnished this , first time i'm posting in the finnished section...i used lightwave . (some tips on how to improve my work would be good)



http://users.pandora.be/productions_image/omar.jpg

cheers

OperaFan1981
03-09-2004, 07:39 AM
Hmmm, let's see. This is just me, but I would decrese the bump on the waves and want to see some horizon. Some people might have a different suggestion.

Omit your bright stars, too much clutter in your scene is not good. As of this point, please do not take offense, but your scene lacks vive! What about trying a new scene as in shallow beach water where you can see the light brownish-yellow sand and underneath the shallow water are vibrant cautics patterns.

Or, what about a sunset scene incorporation the shallow beach waters I mentioned? Or a night scene with your stars and the shallow waters?

Bottom line is, you're in control of your scene and I hope you will fix this up and submit a repost. :-)

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