steampunk - paramedic >_<

[Prs-Phil]

dunno why nobody is replying ... cant be that bad can it ?

Well, I´ve finished the base and from now on I´ll be adding the details that make the char a char :)

2086 faces atm

http://pu-art.com/comp17_4.jpg

[Guntharf]

great mesh :) keep posting ;) Love the style !

[Blacklion]

dunno why nobody is replying ... cant be that bad can it ?

nope not bad at all... looks good, specialy the arms. keep on postin

Got a wireframe by any chance?

[Prs-Phil]

thx alot :)

here is a wire (I´ll post full wireshots of everything when it is done :) )

http://pu-art.com/comp17_wire.jpg

[Dhin]

doesn't seem all that steam puckish to me. It seems to lack those low-tech solutions to todays high-tech devices. It looks more Space Marienish or Alien than Steam punk. If you were to look at (for examples) Back to the Future 3, Wild Wild West, or League Of Extraordinary Gentlemen. All show very good examples of what steam punk is. By definition it is a subgenre of Science Fiction, in which radical technological advance takes place in the early industrial era; the name comes from the fusion of Cyber Punk's edgy techno-noir with, well, steam engines. Books by Jules Verne and H. G. Wells are some of the first really recongnizable steam punk (though they pre date the name.)

To me this model seems more to fit into the realm of Cyberpunk than steam punk. He could easily be augmented with cyber parts or tools. Although a complex system of pullies and gears along with aged brown leather and a set of magnefing lenses attached to an eye might add more to the steam punk look, but right now he just doen't have it. By adding hudge injections and knifes you'll only make it look more like it belongs in the horror genre. Try thinking clockwork, steam boilers, and other industrial era sciences.

Other the that though the concept and model look solid, they just don't look steam punk.

[quasmaster]

great model! whatever-punk it is...

and the useage of hard edges is very nice too!

solong, quasmaster...

[BigRedDogg]

Very solid looking model, great Structure. Looking forward to seeing more.

[Prs-Phil]

thx alot guys


@dhin

thx for the comment but I can only say ... just wait and see, this is just the base. The thing aprin he has is indeed going to be out of old leather, ... I want to give him more of a butcher type

but I will take into account what you said to give him that style I´m aiming for :)

[JonasNoell]

It's definitely looking cool! I really like those muscles on the arm, great work here. Unfortunately I don't think you have captured your concept very well, which is kinda sad in my opinion because the model lacks a bit of character I think, especially in the face. Try making him bigger like in the concept because that looks kinda cool. Außerdem könntest du dich mal wieder im ICQ blicken lassen, alter Schlingel ;)

[Prs-Phil]

lol thx alot m8 ... over on cgchat the_bird gave me some very usefull tips (in form of a paintover) how to give the char a more defined look. So i´ve allready changed the face to make him look ... cooler :) ... I´ll post some new images soon, got to many people to save at the moment :)

sollt ich wirklich wieder mal machen ... hehe

[Akildee]

the front silhoutte looks really really great. But the side profile bothers me. I think it's either that his head looks small, or his neck looks squished. or maybe his head is to forward for where you have spine set. I would just tweak his silhoutte in that direction. Good Job though.

akil

[Prs-Phil]

Ok I´ve had alot to do latley but I sat down yesterday and did some changes to the model.

Thx alot for the great tips guys and esspecially to the_bird over at cgchat.

2352 faces atm

more progress soon :)

http://pu-art.com/comp17_5.jpg

[TRyanD]

Awsome :)

[the_prodigy]

wooooow watch the stretching of the face in profile man, anyways, good modeling keep at it.

[BryanSilva]

I think the chin needs to be pulled forward in the side view. He appears to have a larger chin/jaw area than his upper head area(if you will) from the front view, but from the side it appears that his face is larger from the lips up. Great job though man, keep it up!

[Akildee]

I like the changes to the face and profile actually. Much more character then what you had before.

[Dhin]

Looking very good, but it still seems to be missing something I just can't say what. Definatly going in the right direction though.

[Prs-Phil]

thx alot guys ... I would say he is done now :)

2760 faces atm


http://pu-art.com/comp17_6.jpg

http://pu-art.com/comp17_persp.jpg

[Prs-Phil]

here :)

http://pu-art.com/comp17_wire2.jpg

[Prs-Phil]

woha, after a long time I´ve restarted texturing this char

my first attempt a month ago was a bit leet :D

.Here it is (http://pu-art.com/comp17_texture.jpg)

Thx again to The_Bird for helping me with the chardesign


Here is the current WIP tex

http://pu-art.com/comp17_tex.jpg

[JBoskma]

Very cool mesh man. What's the url of the Steampunk project? :)

[Prs-Phil]

thx alot m8 ... it´s not for a project, it was for the cgchat gameartcomp 17 :)

[mindrot]

This is looking good..... Gonna look sweet textured :D

[BryanSilva]

Looking great Phil! I can definatley see your skills improving. I think the texture is looking good so far just be sure to put some different colors in the skin to add realism.

[gimpfarfar]

Very cool character. Keep the pics coming!

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