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marcia
03-05-2004, 05:24 PM
I thought the original was finished, but got some great critiques that helped me completely rework the image. Crits are always welcome.

Here's the link (http://www.pbase.com/image/26637443/original.jpg) in case anyone else has trouble with the attachment.

http://www.pbase.com/image/26637443/original.jpg

-Ru-
03-05-2004, 05:36 PM
sorry mate but it's a bad link :hmm:

marcia
03-05-2004, 05:59 PM
That's strange; it comes up fine on my computer. I reentered the link, hopefully you can see it now?

kodinaarian
03-05-2004, 06:16 PM
:)


good job

i like the staging, very good use of screen space and composition
u must have put in effort to compose it, guides the eye smoothly

just an issue with the noise used in the overall image, hapers the readabilty...(readabilty not right word, uknow what i man ??)

but good work nonetheless, love the long shadows, very sinister feel to it.

:thumbsup:

marcia
03-05-2004, 07:48 PM
Thanks, Kodinaarian. :)

Yeah, the noise is fractal noise... it's the dust and darkness that makes things harder to read. I can probably fix that a little, at least. Thanks for letting me know it's a distraction.

marcia
03-10-2004, 03:02 PM
Just a few changes to address readability concerns... dust removed from papers, lighting change, spider reduced in size and repositioned, revision to knife textures. I swear, this is it. Really. :)

http://www.pbase.com/image/26797596/original.jpg

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