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Rendre
03-04-2004, 11:25 PM
Here is a character I am making for my portfolio, just started rigging her now. What u guys think?

Oh and she's about 3000 tris.

http://home.online.no/~breikrem/cgtalk/renderers.jpg

NewBeyondReason
03-05-2004, 10:37 PM
Nice work man, veri secksi ;) but I dont like the eyes, they are good, but a little bit too big and the chin is a little too manly, maybe make it a bit more pinched, otherwise, looks very good

peace ez,

NBR

JelloGnome 2
03-06-2004, 12:38 AM
Looks great! Can we see wires? How did you set up the deformations? Is it all weight maps?

dur23
03-06-2004, 12:53 AM
Could we see her without lighting (100% self illumination)...cause it looks like you've done a decent job with texture, but i don't like the way the diffuse is reacting to the light...just my opinion...:)

DaemonMagus
03-06-2004, 12:57 AM
It looks really good, but the eyes are kinda flat and dead. There doesn't appear to be any value on the whites of the eyes or any reflections on the iris that would indicate the moisture on the eye and the form of it.

robberthesp
03-06-2004, 01:28 AM
Nicely done! I do agree on the eyes..they look flat and the whit in the eyes is too white. it needs some shadows. The hairline is also something you might want to look at, It could use a harsher line

commy
03-06-2004, 02:37 AM
kinda generic dont u think? looks ok except for the eyes and the hair it just stops a dead stright line across the back of her neck

the178
03-06-2004, 11:42 AM
Wow.
Great work...
Very good!!!

Rendre
03-07-2004, 06:37 PM
Here are wires and illuminated shots, i was being careful about putting shadows on the eyes because when she looks around with them, it would be weird if the shadows followed. But I think i will try to put some subtle shading into them.


http://home.online.no/~breikrem/cgtalk/wires.jpg
http://home.online.no/~breikrem/cgtalk/wires2.jpg

TRyanD
03-08-2004, 04:00 AM
Awsome :P

Poopinmymouth
03-08-2004, 04:44 AM
very nice mate!

if you could add a bit more color variation into the skin it would look really nice. Her feet look a bit awkward, the boot bottoms especially.

very nice, top notch!

quasmaster
03-10-2004, 03:20 AM
great work!

reminds me of the russian lady in die hard 3

nice!!!

YerEvilTwin
03-10-2004, 03:33 AM
fix the texture around the jaw so that it's a smoother transition. She loos to square jawed. tone down the nipples on the shirt, make her sexy, not slutty. the hair need to be more dynamic and more contrast. bring the hair line down so she dosen't look balding. She has top cleavage but no real between breast cleavage.

obelisk
03-10-2004, 06:46 AM
I think the expression on her face needs some work. She kind of looks like some really unattractive guy is unexpectedly propositioning her. Teeth locked, smile on autopilot, eyes searching for an escape route. I should know. I'm a very unattractive man.

amola2k
03-20-2004, 06:38 PM
the body looks really good
good textures too
tho the face doesnt fit her... you might wanna make the face less tough
cheers

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