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redogre
03-04-2004, 06:18 PM
3dsMax5 and vray...
Architectural render...
House decoration..

http://www.gurkanakay.com/id00/sialomcg02.jpg

Conanart
03-04-2004, 08:02 PM
Good job:

Tech comments - maybe take the glow down a bit on those lamps, they look a little bright.

Design comments - why is there a table in front of the door that leads to the balcony? I think it needs another colour or two in there as right now it is rather too brown so it lacks contrast

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right_on_cats
03-04-2004, 09:00 PM
A little too much grain on the over all image......take that down a bit and you'll be golden

iXaarii
03-05-2004, 01:20 PM
I like the furniture, but somehow the rendering seems to make things look pretty flat ... like the walls for example.

redogre
03-07-2004, 12:38 AM
New render with less grain (night_on_cats), touched walls (ixaarii) and balcony front (conanart) thanks for the comments...

http://www.gurkanakay.com/id00/sialomcg05.jpg

Update:Man has a shadow now!
All comments and ratings welcome :)

SpaXe
03-07-2004, 04:07 AM
Well some adivce..

the house is too small (or there are too many things there.) so i feel bad in the house.
hey is the man a ghost?!...he doesn't cast a shadow!!@@!!
maybe the lights needs change. Something is too dark.
Because of your house view is a little far, you may want to use some depth of field.

^^keep it up~
--SpaXe - Xavier Ho--

right_on_cats
03-07-2004, 05:33 PM
much better with lower grain!:applause: the guy is a nice touch....but he needs a shadow like the other guy said....great job!:bowdown:

Downwrdspiral
03-07-2004, 07:37 PM
looks like the front of the chair on the right is floating.

redogre
03-07-2004, 07:37 PM
I added the shadow to the guy, it is very long and slim but there it is...

And for the depth of field I really don't like DOF if it is not an animation... But thanks for the comments again...

iXaarii
03-07-2004, 10:14 PM
nice touches. Man is kewl!
I can't put my finger on it but something still looks to me too cg-ed ... maybe more light play needed? volumetric lighing? some particles floating in the air? some dirt in the room?

rexfang
03-08-2004, 04:26 AM
ya...maybe more less grain will help to get rid of CG looks...and i feel the room is too samll for the all the furniture. for example the space between sofa and the table should be wider.

over all....it's good job , dude....keep it on!:thumbsup:

Conanart
03-08-2004, 02:16 PM
Looks great. Good job!!:applause:

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