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MartinK
03-04-2004, 06:35 PM
My first modeled and textured character mad as subdiv in maya. Please shoot. Any critique are appreciated.

http://80.203.235.236/arielmedia\images\nikko-face-final2.jpg

Martin K

MacLeod
03-04-2004, 08:01 PM
for a first time you did a pretty good job, i have some comments though.
first of all, the ears, the shape just isn't good.
It looks like he has no (or not much) eyebrows
The lips and nose need some work too.

cheers,
MacLeod

coCoKNIght
03-04-2004, 08:46 PM
Well it's better than my first head :)
I think the eyes are really good, and it's true that the ears shape is not so good, also the nose and mouth are not so well modelled but that'll come with your future attempts I'm sure.
One thing that disturbs me is that the eyes are placed too high, they should be in the middle of the head and that makes the whole head look strange. (Also notice the vertical distance between eye and ear) So if you plan to make some changes that' d be the first thing I'd change...
Keep it up!

iXaarii
03-05-2004, 02:30 PM
I think his nostrels are too big.

MartinK
03-06-2004, 03:17 PM
Thanks to all of you for the response.
I will take this with me when i'm doing my next head model.

Thanks
Martin K

chongzi
03-06-2004, 03:22 PM
:thumbsup: Very good!

Dreamy Kid
03-06-2004, 03:32 PM
it's quite nice for a first model....imho it'd be great if you start making stuff using reference...it really help.. good luck

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