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eljofa
03-04-2004, 07:48 AM
im working on the video,
u can see 2 stills i have

if u have any crits would be good

http://mesh-inc.com/pur.jpg
http://mesh-inc.com/pur2.jpg

cheers

fabian

jawine
03-04-2004, 01:55 PM
The bottle is a bit too shiny for a plastic bottle.
Also, the tunnel is a bit too shiny/uniform in design, but maybe it looks good when it's moving, can't chekc that on stills.

The shapes of the bottle look good though, it's really the material that's a bit off :)

Do you have a storyboard for this? The way it is now, it's hard to see where your movie is going :)

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