View Full Version : Still: Relaxing woman [NUDITY]
03-03-2004, 05:33 PM
Focused working on realistic skin shader and lighting.. Still got much to learn!
03-03-2004, 07:44 PM
hahaha LOL. yikes! very large image and could get me in trouble at work! had to scroll down quickly!
03-03-2004, 08:02 PM
Yeah I would slam "Partial Nudity" into the title ;)
03-03-2004, 08:07 PM
though there is room for improvement on the skin mat, the model is very good. i like the pose, also the absence of a head - gives a nice artistic mood.
but: she is completely hairless? not to state that i won't appreciate that, in some "areas" it would give "her" some kind of realism ;)
03-03-2004, 08:48 PM
I'm new here, sorry i didn't write that in the topic .. No she doesnt have hair, I .. hate AW for not converting Maya Unlimited to the mac .. but I have to train some other hair techniques aswell..
Thx for the comments
03-03-2004, 09:47 PM
hmm.. not sure whether this is art or plain porn... you know, the focus of the picture..
03-04-2004, 12:11 AM
Hhmmm... The knees look very strange
03-04-2004, 12:51 AM
The hands look a bit large.
03-04-2004, 05:37 AM
do you know this painting done by frensh painter gustave coubet?
03-04-2004, 05:52 AM
ack! warning koony :P
hmmm, it is just me or does her right breast (left side for us) seem a little too far away? maybe its just the angle or me, but that's how i see it.
EDIT: and yes, the knees, where's her knee cap? it's too rounded, needs more detail
EDIT AGAIN: her belly button also looks a little high, it looks about halfway between her breats and hip, needs to be a tad lower i think.
To much saturation on the light side, not enough saturation in the shadows. Looks like you have a little velvet shader going on there that is to strong. the dark edges get to much out of that velvet network.
her sitting down with her arms around her legs would make for a much better study of the skin shader.
03-04-2004, 07:35 AM
Overall the skin looks flat and the knees are way of. And those hands are waaay to big and masculin. Are you sure this is supposed to be in finished work?
03-04-2004, 07:37 AM
as said before, you need to do something with the knees.
cause the first think i though when this picture popped up was, wow! that was some large knees!, but then I see that the rest is quite good, so the knees are destroing the picture.. :)
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