harnelbe
03-03-2004, 12:11 PM
- What this artwork is
A personnal illustration to illustrate
a concept of brain manipulating.
What type of critique you want
i post here to get some crits and remarks.
i have already done an analys of the problems and i would like if there is others. (it should be, it's my first classes
in colors...)
-Software used: AURA 2.5 b
with a Tablet Artpad II A6
i put some comments in this topic between each pictures.
.
I first designed directly with the tablet a composition. (1024X1280)
notice the orientation of the head of
the main guy, i think like others that
it's the best orientation than the others
which follow..
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip000.jpg
the famous ear... it make me laughing a lot when i realized the stupid position of it .
the position was good but the problem is during the progression of the cg i turned the face...
Until it become stupid (after i modified it-> which modifythe orientation of the face... it was a mistake... )
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip001.jpg
The ear...
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip002.jpg
The ear...
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip003.jpg
The ear...
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip004.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip005.jpg
For fun, i like showing elements.
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_02_LABO_wip006.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_02_LABO_wip008.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_03_LABO_wip010.jpg
it's the state of the CG which was stopped to be integrated in the document.
But i will really finished it.
I think the colors of lighting are too shy.
Thanks in advance for the next critics and remarks.
A personnal illustration to illustrate
a concept of brain manipulating.
What type of critique you want
i post here to get some crits and remarks.
i have already done an analys of the problems and i would like if there is others. (it should be, it's my first classes
in colors...)
-Software used: AURA 2.5 b
with a Tablet Artpad II A6
i put some comments in this topic between each pictures.
.
I first designed directly with the tablet a composition. (1024X1280)
notice the orientation of the head of
the main guy, i think like others that
it's the best orientation than the others
which follow..
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip000.jpg
the famous ear... it make me laughing a lot when i realized the stupid position of it .
the position was good but the problem is during the progression of the cg i turned the face...
Until it become stupid (after i modified it-> which modifythe orientation of the face... it was a mistake... )
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip001.jpg
The ear...
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip002.jpg
The ear...
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip003.jpg
The ear...
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip004.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip005.jpg
For fun, i like showing elements.
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_02_LABO_wip006.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_02_LABO_wip008.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_03_LABO_wip010.jpg
it's the state of the CG which was stopped to be integrated in the document.
But i will really finished it.
I think the colors of lighting are too shy.
Thanks in advance for the next critics and remarks.