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chiari
03-02-2004, 05:53 PM
hope you like it

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/julien.chiari/images2/monstre.jpg

Comments and crits are appreciated

Felipe F. M.
03-02-2004, 08:15 PM
this is an interesting picture!:thumbsup:

catbert
03-02-2004, 08:19 PM
this is real cuuuute! the only thing bothering me is the over-blurred front cubes (and the fact that this guy would be much better with a tongue hanging out :))

but i really like it!

agreenster
03-02-2004, 08:20 PM
Hmm. Cute baby. :D

Dont like the DOF.:thumbdown:

Is this an animation?

Scheppi
03-02-2004, 08:36 PM
even if you modeled a monster you should keep some affinities to humanely anatomy. especially the hands were very abstract.

guereja_1
03-02-2004, 08:38 PM
hey there, i really like the idea. it seems kinda eerie in a way. i do i agree that the blurriness of the blocks seems a little weird. but i totally like the "lovely baby"....

Madison
03-02-2004, 10:29 PM
It's not bad, lighting is good but need more tweaking.

:rolleyes:

Hexodam
03-03-2004, 12:38 AM
such a character:applause:
just get rid of the dof in the front

dimskapunk
03-03-2004, 12:42 AM
good lord that is humorous :)

mattcioffi
03-03-2004, 08:14 AM
that's pretty cool:p

you might want to rethink what is in focus and what ain't or just get rid of th DOF.-? maybe move the blocks to the left and keep his hand in focus. but i like where evrything is --so i don't know. the DOF is a little distracting.

i like him. fun scene too

mattcioffi
03-03-2004, 08:17 AM
nice website

lilCara
03-03-2004, 08:39 AM
Oh, look at the lil' cute baby... He's got his father's eyes... and beer belly, too :beer: ;)

Seriously now, I really dig the ideea and it's pretty nicely done, except for the dof, like it has been said before...

great job anyway.

chiari
03-03-2004, 09:45 PM
thanks for your replies

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/julien.chiari/images2/monstreb.jpg

I change the DOF and some details.
catbert: I try to add a tongue...

Comments and crits are appreciated

catbert
03-04-2004, 06:14 AM
although i dont see a whole lot of improvement in the dof (try maybe blurring the end of the room more, with the pictures, than the front), i LOVE the bunny, and i think the tongue helped lots! :applause:

jcbray
03-04-2004, 06:20 AM
hmm, lot of green, a better colour for the bunny could be found i think, and from a personal perspective, i think if you moved the tongue off to one side of the mouth it would be much better, like having it angle to the bottom right od the image.

chiari
03-04-2004, 07:09 PM
Thanks jcbray and catbert for your replies and your help. I think the new picture is better ...

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/julien.chiari/images2/monstrec.jpg

Comments and crits are appreciated.

UnlikelyCorny
03-04-2004, 08:28 PM
I love it. It's really funny. Maybe not so technically challenging as some of the work being shown at cgtalk, but certainly great character design and very original. Could I get some big renders for my daughters bedroom?

iXaarii
03-04-2004, 11:52 PM
:)
gooouyiii

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