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DANKA
03-02-2004, 07:51 AM
Free your fear, free your insecurity, speak about your weakness...
and life will be little more easy...


http://www.vgmaker.com/datas/users/836-FreeTheCrow.jpg

hesido
03-02-2004, 12:56 PM
it is a hard angle to get the perspective right, and I think the panties do not seem to be at the right place. Maybe increasing the size of the panties will help.

Nice lines! I like the crow..

DANKA
03-04-2004, 09:41 AM
oh...thanks for suggest! ;)

cuppacam
03-04-2004, 10:17 AM
Yeh I agree about the panties but it's definitely a tricky angle. Maybe they need to be a bit lower and a bit forward? I say this because of the positioning of the legs in relation to the body.
Also I think the bottom lip's are a bit large. Maybe tweak the bottom lip a bit in on the sides. The upper lip generally "overlaps" the bottom at the corners of the mouth.

Otherwise, I can't wait to see it finished as I love the imagery with the crow. and your use of shadows is also very cool.

Peace

DANKA
06-10-2004, 06:39 AM
Thank you for critics end suggest! ;)

kraal
06-11-2004, 11:20 PM
the crow seems to be behind her shoulder not in the air.... and legs are too far forward

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