Character: zombie or something like that

[Vidar3d]

Hey cool.

I like it. The only thing I would say (I am no expert btw) is that his ribs seem to be showing way to much. If he we skinny and slender over all, I would say it fits, but since he seems muscular and robust in the legs and in the chest and shoulders it makes the ribs seem out of place. Keep it going!

[cache]

vidar3d - thanks for ur reply:)
I've made some parts a bit skinnier to fit the ribs :)

http://cache.mooo.com/update1.jpg

waddayathink ? :D

[Vidar3d]

yeah, ok. that has a better feel to it. I would push it even a little further in terms of making him skinnier. I would have his face look like skin stretched over bone. But that is were my imagination is taking me, yours maybe telling you something different :)

The only glaring thing now, are the legs. He kinda of has tube legs and there isn't alot of distinction from the hip thigh to the calf to the ankle. Other than that, keep working on it.

[wellsae]

Hi,
There seems to be some tearing behind the shoulders and at the wrists that you should fix. Also, put a negative light in his mouth so it's not lit inside there, just an aesthetic thing for the render. Other than that looks good!

[czizso]

csá!nekem inkább ufók mint zombik,de zsír!
i like it!

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