View Full Version : Characters: Old Grim Lady and Old shabby man
02-29-2004, 09:03 PM
Here's two characters that I have been working on for a while know and that I hope to complete in the very near future!
I'd appreciate any critique of these models- good or bad:)
02-29-2004, 09:24 PM
Oh, man. Those are great! I don't know if you have the white eyes as placeholders, but they actually seem to fit if you want them to be zombie/living dead characters.
I can't really find anything to critique....mmm, except maybe the upper part of the woman's ears seem a bit thick and/or opaque? Doesn't really detract from the image overall though.
02-29-2004, 11:03 PM
Thanks! I'm glad you like them.
The eyes are just temporary yes, Im working to create the real ones now! Anyone know of any good eye-tuts?
02-29-2004, 11:43 PM
dude that's kick ass! I think the only problem I see is that the man's beard/stubble looks more like dirt than hair, you should make that area a little more pale as opposed to just dark (facial hair has the tendency to cause that, both by the skin not getting as much sun light in it and by the thick hair causing the light to diffuse through the skin differently)
or... if it is dirt... kick ass! the textures look gorgeous, and the modelling looks good too!
oh also just noticed, heh, not to be more picky, but, the man's nose is actually smaller than the woman's. generally in old couples the man is older and therefore has a bigger nose (since noses never stop growing), and women ussually have smaller noses than men anyway. same with the ears.
nice work overall!
03-01-2004, 02:57 AM
Those look really good! I like the texturing a lot. when setting them up make sure to have some wiggle in their cheeks. It really adds a lot if you deside to animate them. Those look like great characters. They look like they can get in a fight over wheither to watch Matlock or Nick at Night.
Best of Luck
03-01-2004, 12:45 PM
Thanks guys! Hehe, well, they do get into a fight in the book(Which is why they are created) but their by no means married. She's a snobby old opera Diva and he's a dirty old man hanginin on the docks all day harrassing people.
I ask agaain- anyone know of any good eye- tuts?
03-01-2004, 06:41 PM
Texturing looks good, I have to agree give the old guy a great big nose. The lady's ear needs to come down and forward some, it's a bit out of place there.
There are really great! People and faces are some of teh most difficult subjects there are.
03-01-2004, 08:02 PM
thanks alot for the comments and the eye-link! Very helpful!
Here's an update, been workin a bit on the body.
Tell me what you think.
03-01-2004, 11:49 PM
a little update...
01-17-2006, 02:00 PM
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