View Full Version : Character: The Lady of Chaos
MoonDrinker 02-29-2004, 06:32 PM Hi all.
Here's a little something I just finished up last night.
I'm actually not that pleased with it... I can't put my finger on it, but something just doesn't cut it for me.
I had some awesome feedback on my last post, so I was hoping someone could help me out with this one. C&C more than welcome as always.
Pencils and colors by me.
http://www.angelfire.com/ok/pitsofpain/lady_of_chaos.jpg
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I like it. ^_^
The crawling-terror-of-outer-space down there could look a LOT more terrifying, tho.
With bigger mouths, more spikes, more eyes, more massive... etc.
The lady is pretty good and sexy already. ;x
Peterned
02-29-2004, 09:07 PM
Whoa, i definately like this one :beer: My only crit would be that some of those sketchy lines look kind of out of place/lost in the otherwise pretty much smoothed out (if one could call it that ;)) image. Like you didn't exactly know what to do with em. The only place where it really bothers me is on the knee though.
Colors and shading are awesome (right up my alley at least ;)) I gotta agree with Samael3D though that the squid lacks fearsomeness. Maybe that's just it. You could try making the eyes of "it" look mean, or remove them altogether...
Creamdog
02-29-2004, 10:23 PM
Hey! I think you did an awesome job on the coloring. I would change the shape of the mouth a little bit. It's a little of center (wich could be good, but this time it looks unnatural) and also a little too close to the nose. But that's it. Cool. I like the terror-thingis just the way they are now, btw. If you overdo them, they get a little un-credible. Now, they're nice n creepy.
Urrgos
03-01-2004, 01:47 AM
Great image, Moon_Drinker. Nice clear pencils and a bang-up coloring job. It's kind of freaky that her bodice is actually "attached" to her... I like it. I am not a huge fan of the tentacles, especially the extra wide one at the very front. I wonder what the image would look like with a blue-gray background instead of the tan color? You would then have the blue-orange complimentary thing going on, which would provide more separation for the main figure. Just a suggestion. Good work!
Urrgos
whitebug
03-01-2004, 01:48 AM
hie there moon drinker.. i think what you've done is awesome.. the mouth maybe be too close to the nose.. looks like really pouting her lips.. unless she likes kissin... :P
Pibre3d
03-01-2004, 08:10 AM
Very cool.
Yeah well, the tentacles could be better, now they look more funny than scary, but besides that..
OUCH!! a bodice like that gotta hurt!
MoonDrinker
03-01-2004, 05:03 PM
Wow, thanks for the feedback all!
So, I made a few changes. Mainly, I fixed the mouth, because now I see that it WAS pretty off. Other than that, I brightened up the highlight on her face, and added a few "tentacles" in the back... But I don't know if they work.
But anyways, many thanks for the comments and suggestions! Keep the good stuff comin... ;p
Renoiro
03-06-2004, 07:26 PM
That's awesome! Gone to your website to check your other art :)
RogerM3D
03-07-2004, 02:19 AM
very nice coloring an such
imo the thing that kills this drawing is the pose, she is much too stiff, just standing there, she needs a much more dynamic pose that shows her powers, a pose that tells a story
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