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tzakiel
02-28-2004, 03:34 AM
Just a girl, for a conceptual fighting game. Didn't get any comments or crit in the other forum so I thought I would try here. Would love to hear comments.

EDIT: this is latest version

http://www.jonvandalen.com/revportia4.jpg

Original:
http://www.jonvandalen.com/revoportia.jpg

Protoz
02-29-2004, 03:27 PM
The head looks slightly too small right now and the face needs some more detail.

I don't really like the blood on the newer one, it doesn't look very natural.

Keep going with this

tzakiel
02-29-2004, 06:28 PM
Protox, check the top for latest bloodless version. I also made some changes to head size and details. I'm having trouble visualizing more detail than this for the face... any suggestions?

jrwells
03-02-2004, 04:16 AM
The head still looks a little off to me. Also the shading on the neck matches the tone of the shading on the face, which makes it look like it is at the same depth, maybe try darkening it around the neck to drop it back a bit more. The neck in general is looking pretty thick, that may be why the face is not matching in size, but I still think it would help to enlarge the head.

This is just my opinion, but the hair seem like it was just an after thought. It just does not look all that dynamic, and does nothing to add to the attitude of the character.

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