this time fantasy toy AIRPLANE!

[ilasolomon]

more shots:

[genesis max]

It looks great, I realy like it, funy looking plane.
Keep going!:buttrock:

[Joril]

Nice toy-plane ila_solomon :thumbsup:
Although i'd extrude the windows of the cocpit a bit, so they match the other windows of the plane.
Have you tried removing the shiny surface? It kinda contradics the plastic look the plane has.

[OrestesMantra]

Very cute:)

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

nice work ila_solomon
can wee see the mesh?

salam aga az kar va bar che kahbar. man az reza milani ye kar gereftam mashin lebas shohi pard inam axhash
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&postid=108613#post108613

[Machuse]

I say its great i wiuldnt fly in it but hey its pretty cool actually the oversized nose and engines are a nice cartoon touch

[underdog]

That's cool! I like the toony look. My only crit is the cockpit windows are flat, and the reflectious chtome is a bit much.

Very nice overall though:thumbsup:

[sarfarazsoomro]

greatzzzzzzz..........

u do cartony stuff very well..........

I liked that car...........

this plane is also loooky very nice.........

hm,mmm. i was intending to model a smiliar type of plane.........

I'll use urs as the refernce:thumbsup:

[ilasolomon]

thanx a lot to everybody...u r so kind & yes the front windshields
are too flat & the lower body too shiny...but the work i made it for
isn't so important to spent more time on! :) i'm going to do some
animation: landing & parking...& the overall looking is something
between cartoonish/fantasy & realism (cartoon mesh + brazil GI
& DOF & Heat-haze!!)

i'll put some wire-frame shots soon...by now my 3dsmax is
doing heavy render task! :)

ali_rahimi_3d :) agha man ye kaar e koochoolooo bahat
daram! farda age toonesti zohr be bad ye tamas bigir...man
tel eto fek konam gom kardam!)

[tobalno3]

that's just spectacular....

i love your stuff:scream:

[paconavarro]

:wavey: How you modeled it? BOX or SPLINES?

[ilasolomon]

hi tobalno3, thanx :)
paconavarro, it's BOX! to be honest, i never used splines!
just some basic NURBS models long time ago...
& this is another test, taxing on the band shot! :) then i will
add DOF & HEAT HAZE effects.

[ilasolomon]

finished frame:

[ilasolomon]

& the wireframe shot:

[netleader]

hi :) great work man u are from germany ?
i have one question how do u made this heat FX ???

[PhilippSpoeth]

Hey netleader... you joined on my birthday :) therefore i will answer your question... no he aint german. But I am :). Why do you ask?

[ilasolomon]

hi netleader , no, i'm from iran.
i did that 'heat-haze fx' with TinderBox v2, a plug-in set for
adobe after effects
philipp, is today your birthday really?! :) happeybirthdaytoyou!
:beer: :bounce:

[PhilippSpoeth]

nonono not my birthday today. Sorry. I just looked up netleaders profil and saw that he JOINED on my birthday... ahmm.. whatever... to say it with gir: doom doom doom doom doom di dumm :)

cheers

[netleader]

:) TinderBox v2 cool and wher can i get this plug in ???

philip, iam a bit frustrated are u a german or not :) ?
i hate my english :)

[PhilippSpoeth]

yes I am... and i still wonder why you asked :)?

[netleader]

:) have i seen any ach F.U.C.K. :) hab i von dir schon mal was gesehen :) dein name kommt mir bekannt vor :)

sorry but iam very boring :) so i write german sorry 4 this

[ilasolomon]

well, i don't know how could you get that...i bought it from a
store...maybe you could find it in a store... :)
i don't remember the website address.
& philipp is german, i'm not german, he is. :)
(why did you think i'm german?!)

[netleader]

"frischluft lanscare" <--- this is german i but not "lanscare" :)

and so i think u are a german

[PhilippSpoeth]

jau :) http://www.frischluft.com i do plugins and stuff.
Von mir schon mal was gesehen? hmm weiss nicht glaub nicht.. mach halt plugins und soon kram..... vieleicht daher irgendwie?

[netleader]

hey cool für welche programme machst du plugins

ahh i seh gerade auf deiner webseite :) flAIR is ja goil

[PhilippSpoeth]

the one ila made the depth of field with for example...

die tiefenunschärf die ila hier benutzt hat z.b.... deswegen bin ich hier :) gucks fir halt an auf meiner seite.. frischluft.com

[netleader]

joa das teil is net dumm

[fellah]

well done ila_solomon, I would however follow joril's advice about the front window, it only takes a couple of seconds to fix. other then that, wow nice style! :)

[ilasolomon]

yeap!...anyway thank you for your kindness :)

[TheWriter]

I love jumbo jets. Though this one could realy use improvement on the cockpit, even though it's just a toy.

[ilasolomon]

hi!
& the animation, except the end shot: (half size)

www.topleftpixel.com/ila_solomon/Animations/lemon_peach_plane_preview_4.zip

thewriter u r right, maybe later i correct it! but now i'm
going to record the whole work on tape for broadcast! :)

[tobalno3]

i always like your stuff but i have one problem with the way you've edited your avi:

you use wipes and "circle" cuts.... that my friend in the editing field is a no no... you shouldn't use these types of cuts...they are cheesy and extremely outdated.

sure you could say: "but star wars to this day has them even in attack of the clones."

that's only because george lucas can do whatever he wants and no one would tell him otherwise.

if i were you i would stick with traditional cuts, fades, and dissolves.

[ilasolomon]

:) heehee thanx tobalno3 for the comment.
yes i think you are right, dissolve or fade is more accurate.
(but in my country wipe & iris trans are not outdated yet! :) )
anyway i'll change the way of transition. i myself like dissolve more
cheers
:beer:

[JFrench]

everything is very soft on it except the windows. bevel the windows. people always underestimate beveling.

[tobalno3]

what i said is just a suggestions...

if you want to use it i say go ahead but it's just not something i would do because of the reasons i stated..

:D

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