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zaidoigres
02-25-2004, 05:13 AM
Hi i was doing this and thought that it would be a good idea to post it here just to get some critics. Hope you like it (it's not finished yet). It's done in Photoshop 7.0 in about an hour (with reference). Thank you.

http://img74.exs.cx/img74/8159/35br.jpg

zaidoigres
02-25-2004, 07:03 AM
Nobody? :(

abonora
02-25-2004, 07:10 AM
Looks great so far, is hard to comment so early but looks like you are doing a good job, i can't wait to see her face, the only thing that annoys me a little bit is that the ribcage seems a little too narrow but that's just me.
And this is really good for an hour of work.

ElKrullo
02-25-2004, 05:25 PM
It's always hard to criticize WIP's since you never kknow what is going to change. All I can say is, it looks great so far and I think you're on the right track here. The colors and highlights look right. Maybe the angle of her right arm is a little too extreme. I tried to hold my arm like that and it just didn't work... but the again, I'm not very athletic. :) Also, maybe you could make her a little thicker in the back area, right above her waist.

Cheers!

teagan
02-25-2004, 09:45 PM
i really like the pose you have here. with her shoulders back like they are i think her stomach is a bit flat. i would love to see the finished piece! nice work.

georgh
02-26-2004, 12:12 AM
so far so good........like the texture on the body........do u use default brushes??

BlackNoose
09-11-2005, 02:52 AM
Hola amigo! me gusta mucho la pose de la chica, tambien los brillos en su brazo y pecho, sigue asi! suerte!

razz
09-11-2005, 06:01 PM
Wow that's nice. I have nothing to crit, I like that way. Pretty fast I think, in an hour. Amazing, keep it coming. I'll be watching You =]

PTimm
09-11-2005, 10:37 PM
Sweet! what kind of brush are you using?

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