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HapZungLam
02-20-2004, 09:04 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/galleryimages/1975/asiangirl_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/galleryimages/1975/asiangirl.jpg)

I'll say i finish after all kinds of comments and critiques. Thx for all who gave me feed back. Right up to this point, i'll stop working on her for awhile.

Actually at the beginning this is just a test model for my edge loops study.

Its done in XSI, texture in photoshop. By the way, tell me if the image doesn't load.

3D-ima Green
02-20-2004, 09:07 PM
really cute!

everything looks nice
but eyes are looking not really naturally


good work anyway :)

Dr_Pepper
02-20-2004, 09:11 PM
Very nice job!,
Yeah, maybe the textures in the eye...

Good modeling and textures!
:applause:

DirtySkillet
02-20-2004, 09:16 PM
Ahhh, I'm falling in love!:love:


That has to be one of the best asain faces Iv seen. The hair doesn't to the face justice. I would paint it in if i were u.

Zixe
02-20-2004, 09:57 PM
Damn thats wack, almost looks like a good friend of mine.

Nice job on that!

Firestorm
02-21-2004, 12:55 AM
:applause: :buttrock: that is some wicked work there :thumbsup:

Only one problem i think her left eye is a little bit to bloodshot. If it wasnt so bloodshot it would look so much better (if it could be any better ;) )

Corth
02-21-2004, 02:04 AM
I'm not too sure I like the bump on the eyes, it makes it look like there's no moisture on them. Other than that, it's a really nice model :)

hao
02-21-2004, 03:15 AM
:) good.....the skin looks good...........but I think you can try another material or texture about her eyes........to improve it.....
maybe can make her looks better............:thumbsup:

darkefire
02-21-2004, 04:28 AM
i think its unanimous(sp?): "great model, fix the eyes!" :)

i think you may have gone a bit overboard on the detail in the eyes. the blood vessels look too pronounced and too long, and the bump-mapping on the inside corner of her left (our right) eye is a bit extreme. for a picture this realistic (and beautiful!!), there's a point where you have to stop reaching for realism, and make a break for artistic license.

the only other thing i can possibly find thats not stunning, is the hair roots. they look like a doll's hair stapled into the plastic scalp. i have absolutely no idea what you could do to bypass that (maybe just blurring it in post??), though.... maybe its the hair strands not casting any shadows....

HapZungLam
02-21-2004, 08:01 AM
i've temperaly blur the veins of the eyeball. and I've lower the bump value on my scene file.

For the hair... well, there has shadows. The concern from darkefire it is because i should thiner the hair alot more and add alot more strands to it. But I don't know how long will it take for render. It is because this image took me more than 30 hours to render.

Keiyentai
02-21-2004, 09:50 AM
30 hours?!?! whoa.....thats a long ass time...anywho the model is beautiful. I think the eyes are fine (though probaly edited before i could tell) and the hiar is fine I think. Simply Beautiful

Rmortis
02-21-2004, 11:49 AM
nice.
A wire??

Un saludo.

SangHanArt
02-21-2004, 01:05 PM
Congrats on front page. I remember this project from WIP. You made some subtle changes but it makes a big difference. Good job. :beer:

mikepolizos
02-21-2004, 01:27 PM
Cool model and great textures man!
Also like her hair too!

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

xcvbnm
02-21-2004, 01:36 PM
Extremely cool :love:
Saving for reference ;)
More angles plz....

Crits --
Tear glands and lower eyelashes are missing.
May be they are there, but not noticable.
A denser eyebrow will do...
I'm not sure .... but ears should be visible, if you modelled it.

:applause: :thumbsup:

tsunami4you
02-21-2004, 02:09 PM
goody goody goody! :bowdown:

CAClark
02-21-2004, 02:10 PM
Looks nice as a finished image, but the eyes do look unatural, and the hair lin looks odd, I think as the hear looks attached in thick bunches rather than a fine even spread of hair like a real person.

Cheers!

sethmisek
02-21-2004, 02:21 PM
I think she has alot of veins in her eyes but otherwise thats great dude.

You've got alot of talent man good job.

(y)

dwin
02-21-2004, 02:25 PM
Nice model and texture.....:thumbsup:

Jako
02-21-2004, 03:08 PM
great, you have arrived that the girl look natural.
:applause:

childplay
02-21-2004, 03:10 PM
nice :bounce:

squib
02-21-2004, 03:16 PM
Great model! I think the eyes could maybe use a bit of an environment reflection though. It would make them look a bit wetter. As Corth said, they look pretty dry right now.

:thumbsup:

Neox
02-21-2004, 04:05 PM
you are getting better and better! its really cool to see your progress, great piece of work i really like her!

mosconariz
02-21-2004, 04:09 PM
:drool: I'm new in CG Talk, but I have being watching the works for exposť 2 and I can tell you that this is a really good job.
But I see a little bit flat the eyelids. watch:

HapZungLam
02-21-2004, 04:47 PM
http://hapzunglam.50megs.com/face25_wire.jpg

here is the wire

reCurse
02-21-2004, 04:48 PM
:bounce: :applause: :bounce:
dude!!
that's some of the awesomest texturing i've seen yet, i like the subtlety of the eyes and the porous skin around the nose but gets finer as it spreads to the cheeks, etc. damn that's awesome! hurraH!!

:beer:

slashizzy
02-21-2004, 04:53 PM
:applause: Uff...I love it !!...the best human face I've ever seen done with XSI...congratulations !!!

Spacemanbob
02-21-2004, 05:07 PM
You can really see the progress you have made over the years. I cudo's to you. Very well done. Keep grinding on 3D and you'll be in the business for a long time to come.

:beer:

shareu
02-21-2004, 05:12 PM
nice job!!!

see you later works study!!

Ziah
02-21-2004, 06:39 PM
nice model emeber it from being a wip withthe nose have to much bump looks really nice now


critique

lower eyelashes misiing and discrepancy in the bump on the fore head very nice skin pore texture

whut kind of hair did yo use poly or somthing esle?

looks kool

Plays_4_Pants
02-21-2004, 06:48 PM
meh, it's ok, it's hard to make a face look good from so close up.

Her skin is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too perfect and she contains no and i mean absolutely no folds...it's like her skin is stretched

swardson
02-21-2004, 07:10 PM
simply amazing work. Often I see emptiness in rendered 3D faces but in your image I see history and life. One of the best 3D faces I have seen thus far. Good Job

erics
02-21-2004, 07:36 PM
congrats friend :beer:

erics
02-21-2004, 07:52 PM
congrats friend :beer:

kevinology
02-21-2004, 08:42 PM
Hapzung your work is really evolving man, and you made front page!!! Congrats, and nice work man. :beer:

DUCKORABB
02-21-2004, 09:03 PM
Great work! But... something wrong with her eyes, a little too more streak. I have sometimes similar streak, when I too much drink;) :beer: :beer:

Best regards for all 3d bros!;)

DCKRBB

teagan
02-21-2004, 09:59 PM
great work! new to cgtalk and can't wait to see more of your work.

ralphpoon
02-21-2004, 10:01 PM
great work!

one question: what do you use to do the eye brows? testure?

Plasticbag
02-21-2004, 11:30 PM
Hello there!

you ve improve a great deal! keep it up dude!

Kel Solaar
02-22-2004, 12:06 AM
She is cute :)

HapZungLam
02-22-2004, 12:26 AM
Ziah:
I made 2 versions of hair at the beginning. Poly patches and XSI hair generator. I used XSI hair at the end because it is far more real than using polys.

ralphpoon:
Yes eye brows are textured.

hesido
02-22-2004, 12:45 AM
Cool!

I believe more "pink meat" is needed in the medial junction of the eyes.. The specs on the cornea seemed also strange to me, one has blue spec, the other has white, at quite different locations. I understand from that angle, the blue light might be obscured to the left eye of the woman, but if there is that white spec on the left eye below the other spec, I'd expect to see that also in the other along with the blue one, as it would probably only happen if there was another object that blocks light exclusively to the right eye . Am I way too off?? Maybe :)

Good work anyway!

SpaXe
02-22-2004, 01:06 AM
hmm, good textures and model^_^"
Great.:thumbsup:

mufizal
02-22-2004, 03:24 AM
Looks good dude.. cant give any crits.. just purrrrrrfect:thumbsup:

Tycane
02-22-2004, 03:31 AM
Sweet lookin' girl.

everything sofar has been mentioned cept for one thing.
her nose,why are the edges that red,i mean,ofcourse they should be a tad darker,but it looks like she is just recovering from a cold in wich she only had rough tissues to help her out. its a tad to red around her nose is what i am saying,cept for that,extremely sweet.

funfun
02-22-2004, 08:05 AM
pls remove this post.

funfun
02-22-2004, 08:15 AM
The girl looks good.
If you don't mind , can you tell me whether you paint the texture or retouching the photo? I am not trying to offend you, but the shadow looks weird on the WIP.

Taxxodium
02-22-2004, 12:32 PM
Wow, I wish I could model something like that.

Did you use spline or box modeling?

HapZungLam
02-22-2004, 05:11 PM
Tycane: I used my nose as reference most of the time. My edge of the nose is red but not that red. I just want to emphasize that part. Maybe i've gone a little too far.

funfun: I do both painting and photo retouching for my textures.

Taxxodium: I start off from box usually.

grevenlx
02-22-2004, 05:58 PM
Well... it's lovelly! It's awesome!! Perfect! Good job! :drool:

thetalink
02-22-2004, 08:01 PM
I really like your work! Would you be interested in talking to me about a position? I am looking for artists that can do realistic human characters using Lightwave.

jwrightcreate@yahoo.com

rexfang
02-23-2004, 05:10 AM
Totoaly awsome dude!!

I'm a XSI user too....could you share the hair setting with me?!
I was trying to use XSI hair too.

You can e-mail me

rexfang.tw@yahoo.com.tw

Nice work:buttrock:

kausss
02-23-2004, 12:38 PM
:applause: think you've done a wonderful work

dunno why eyes look strange 2me2 maybe they should be more wet

but wonderful aw!

allenatl
02-23-2004, 04:48 PM
Nice to see how this progressed to a really great-looking finish.

allenatl
02-23-2004, 04:58 PM
Nice to see how this progressed to a really great-looking finish.

vincent0731
02-27-2004, 09:43 AM
what a pertty asia girl,i like it,u already care so much detail,but i think u can improve the hair,u know,a little bit too thick

vincent0731
02-27-2004, 09:46 AM
what a pertty asia girl,i like it,u care so much detail as well,but i think the hair u can improve ,u know,a little bit thick.:bounce: :beer:

hawk_wang1981
02-29-2004, 09:49 AM
but the hair behind the head is not perfect! :applause:

weakfish
02-29-2004, 12:16 PM
i think the hair is too same ~~~~

:bounce:

L.Edy
02-29-2004, 12:48 PM
really awesome brooo
:)

everything looks perfect, but the hair looks a little bit unnatural :)

but its surely nice :)

Aimes
03-01-2004, 06:41 PM
Great job, HapZungLam! :thumbsup: :applause:

effects
04-23-2004, 12:45 AM
Nice model HapZungLam, The only think y look about your model is, on the border of the eye, add a little geometrie for simulate a line of water, and maybe, add more details of your spec lips.

http://www.artie.com/cm/art/artists/dennisspedersen/lips.jpg

Is juste a suggestion!! But very nice job boy and tk your my reply!

WChestnutt
05-21-2004, 05:11 PM
hey man! looking very sweet!! could i see a side and front wire?.. just im studying the topology of an asian face at the moment, so it'd be very interesting, and a great help!
thanks!!

Will

abadone
08-03-2004, 09:48 AM
amazyng work ^^

HapZungLam
08-03-2004, 05:24 PM
thx very much "effects"

That is a very nice reference.

Yap, I am working on the updated version which has detail around the eye.

ZMC
08-03-2004, 05:53 PM
Clean rendering and good texture.
Keep it up




Best Regards
ZMC

Zims
08-04-2004, 12:03 PM
Nice work!!

dragonofjapan
08-09-2004, 01:11 AM
how picky can we be?

I am so impressed with the whole thing. I love the detail of the pores in her nose. You can tell she lives in a city and her skin is exposed to pollution. Mouth and lips too.

the eyelashes I think should go down the way most asians do. These look like she is using a lash curler, but she doesn do anything to her eyebrows.

Hair on Her right side of her face is following her face, but her head is tipped in that direction.

Also the highlight in her hair looks strange, wrong color?

I wonder if you dimmed the upper spot a bit, if it would help.

Stunning work

When you get her built could you send her to my house?

fast4ry
08-17-2004, 07:57 PM
i relly like your skin shading ;)

SiWenBaiLei
08-18-2004, 06:59 AM
:thumbsup:

that good !

yexiongbj
08-18-2004, 07:52 AM
Is really a beautiful woman!!!!

Nessie Whale
08-21-2004, 06:28 PM
Hey, good job! I saw some of your threads in the body topology thread, glad to see work of you here. I like the picture a lot, no comments really, just wanted to post that I like it very much!

yj123
08-26-2004, 05:24 AM
your work is very good !!:thumbsup:

Sqwall
08-27-2004, 04:44 PM
Cute. But you should work more on the eyes they look too plastic now.

CrossFire
09-20-2004, 11:18 PM
truly a masterpiece.

Aderyn
09-23-2004, 11:17 AM
Very nice :) I hope to see more from you in the future :D

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