stalky guy

[scrawl]

filled in the rest of the face, not sure if i want to give him ears

http://www.derelect.com/upload/cole.jpg
http://www.derelect.com/upload/cole_side.jpg
http://www.derelect.com/upload/cole_wireframe.jpg

[Obear]

GReat so far, keep going, lets see some more :)

[scrawl]

I was playing with his expressions, working out the kinks in the mesh...

http://www.derelect.com/upload/rage.jpg

[scrawl]

Started modeling the shoulders and chest area...

http://www.derelect.com/upload/look%20front.jpg
http://www.derelect.com/upload/lookup.jpg
http://www.derelect.com/upload/look34.jpg

[scrawl]

took the weekend off, back at it

http://www.derelect.com/upload/Abs2.jpg
http://www.derelect.com/upload/Front abs.jpg
http://www.derelect.com/upload/abs up.jpg

once again, any comments at all....anything. How are you feeling, let me know.

[scrawl]

mmmmm......grrrrrr....argh

i call this, the "caught my junk in the zipper" pose

http://www.derelect.com/upload/zipper.jpg

[r3studios]

nice start man! the shaded images are a bit dark, maybe light them up a bit. otherwise nice modelling, i´ll follow your thread :D

[scrawl]

thanks r3studios....
ill brighten up the renders some.


just started modeling the arm

http://www.derelect.com/upload/cole%20arm.jpg

[scrawl]

http://www.derelect.com/upload/back%20arms.jpg
http://www.derelect.com/upload/underarm.jpg
http://www.derelect.com/upload/backrender.jpg

[scrawl]

i call this one, no-feet-back...haha.....sigh, im so pathetic

http://www.derelect.com/upload/nofeetback.jpg
http://www.derelect.com/upload/nofeetfront.jpg

[fattkid]

Looks like you're off to a good start. The face is cool and the expression is great. I think you may need to check some bodybuilding mags and rework the traps and shoulders a bit though. The traps are coming much too far forward, almost looking more like tumors than muscles (no offense). Less traps and more neck on the front side ( a little more traps on the back of the neck would prolly work if you wanted to keep them freakishly big). Also, there is a ridge of flesh between his shoulders and traps that isn't anatomically correct. The traps should flow down into the shoulder area. And maybe bring the shoulder bulges in towards the traps a little bit. And the quads are looking a little blocky. Those are the things that seem to jump out at me as a little off. That's my take on it anyway. Hope it helps.

[scrawl]

thankyou fattkid, i was aware that there were problems with the back, i just wanted someone to point them out to me,

i do want him to look freakishly big, so i will try to tweak all that stuff, rearange whatever

much thanks

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