CGTalk - WIP: derision

Jhonus

01-24-2002, 11:04 PM

Hello. :eek: first time posting artwork here... could i please get some critiques on my model... proportions, anatomical accuracy and the face is what i'm concerned about at this stage.

the torso still needs some work, particularly around the hip and sternum area.

don't worry about the seam or the feet just yet.

Thanks!

http://www.dickmygoose.com/wip2.jpg

oh yeah, and he's supposed to have a hole in the side of the head... tis where the sewerage pipe connects :)

Jean Eric

01-24-2002, 11:17 PM

He's great!!! The proportions are probably not exactly human, but this is probably what gives him so much character...

Taoizm

01-24-2002, 11:18 PM

He's looking really great. Smooth out the center seam and give the poor guy some arms. I really like the expression on the face. He already has personality. :D

Raul-Reznek

01-25-2002, 09:00 AM

Well that's not u'r avarage ALIEN with BIIIIIG eyes and BIIIIG head AND BIIIIIIG....<caugh>.

BERY nice work, but as u said more work on the hips and also if I were u, I'd try to make some weird things on his head.Like organic hair.

Keep on workin!!!!(KOW)

Koma

01-25-2002, 09:03 AM

i hope to see the rest really good start,he have something special

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